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Published: 2008-11-11 04:45:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 4815; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 46
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This strip picks up from TheCrowChan's "LoT: Girl Talk" Check it out!l wasn't going to upload these yet, buuuuut now l feel like it. UNLlKE USUAL, you guys will have to wait for the rest. FUFUFU.
LoT: Josh vs. Chimbley!
Featuring:
Joshua Bell, by myself
Niko Molokov, by *manic-pixie
Miss Crowley, by *TheCrowchan
The Chimbley Sweep, by ~ConcentrationMoon
Things that l've learned l'm not good at:
-Written Russian accents.
-Writing other people characters (WHAT THE HELL AM l DOlNG lN OCB'S?!?!)
Other things of note:
-Miss Crowley looks like the Coppetone Girl in the third panel
-Doing things traditionally ALWAYS makes me happier <3<3<3
-Fancy hand lettering gets really hard to read if you're not careful
Please let me know if this is too hard to read
EDlT: Changed a few things in Niko's dialogue! More in-character now.
l guess Josh isn't the ONLY one not fessing stuff up.Next
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Traditional FTW! I'm lovin' the ink washing. And bring on Niko!
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Traditional is the oooonly way to go for me, and l really never should have stopped after survivor:dA! lt's been so wonderful to get back to it <3
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GAH, I am only the wee age of 14.
*sulks in a corner*
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Fff, can you not see the page? D: lt's because he swears. Um. Lame. l'm not sure l should change the flter in case l get in trouble, though....
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Is the filter automatic now? 
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l did set the filter myself. lf l don't set it and it gets reported to a mod, they usually change the filter themselves. Besides, l know there's strong language in here, so l figured l'd flag it for people who don't want to read that.
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Oh, but I thought that there was an option where it allows some people to see it anyway. You know, "Display it anyway" or something like that.
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OKAY UM, it lS set to just warning....maybe you need to check your user settings to make sure you can view stuff like this?
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That is REALLY strange. I just went back and the button is there! I think it one of those glitches... dA was in a slight maintance when I was online around that time.
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So just to check, you can see the pages just fine on dA now? 8D
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Yup, I can see this one and the recent pages you put up! THanks for going through so much for me!
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There's one that's "mature content:Warning" l think. Mmm...maybe l could switch it. l wonder if that would work... *checks it out*
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the comic is nice but the title is really hard to read. why not try just white on black and save the outlines? but nice job in full.
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Yeah, the title was a problem, and honestly l should probably have cropped it out. l thought outlining it would make it clear, then it wasn't, and l thought adding the grey would make it clearer, and it made it worse, and there it rests. Lesson learned! But it was still very fun to experiment with.
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aaww*sigh* experiments! how i miss them - it has all to fit tight with every line lately by me to get in with deadlines. youΒ΄re a good storyteller and youΒ΄ll even get a better storyteller - with experiments!
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"Oh, I've fucked communism, all right."
Naughtiest double entrendee ever.
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FU FU FU you totally know it!
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She totally is! Crowley is adorableness and thoughtfullness on legs, and l only hope Miss Crow herself is okay with how l made here ^__^;
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*huge shiny eyes* they need to be together! YOU HAVE AWAKENED THE FOUL ROMANTIC SIDE OF ME!!!! now I demand instant gratification...heart felt reunion better be next....*shakes you*
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MAYBE there won't be a reunion though! MAYBE there will be nothing but AGONY AND HEARTBREAK and stuff???
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Om nom nom, god l like paint so much more than digital to work with <3
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Word.
Art is a tactile thing goshdarnit!
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Damn, looks great. Is this in watercolor?
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India ink! Thank youuu!
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... G'AAAW, FFFF, NIKO'S ALL WORRIED, THAT BIG GIRL OF A MAN. ;~; -wants to hug him-
That conversation between Niko and Crowley is so cute. ): <333 Waugh. The worry! The adorable worry! (Although Crowley's never looked cuter.) And the cute-sensitive biker-look suits Niko better than expected!
And Josh rifling through the bag is priceless. xD D'ahaha. Those are just the kind of dopey, motherly, things Crowley would stick in there. And Josh is such a prickly pear. <3
(And the Vicks! HAH. The best vapor that money can buy. REFERENCE POINTS GET.)
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I hope the writing's okay! I was really worried I'd end up getting Crowley wrong @__@ I've come to realize I am not the best at portraying other people's characters....I hope it's alright! <3 She's a darling, and I've been having lots of fun with her.
Niko will be appearing in this months issues of 'Worlds Leathers'...keep your eyes peeled, ladies!
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That last part with his bag reminds me of one of those excape games where you click on stuff and the character gives a description. (I laughed at the Vicks. xD ) This is exciting!
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Vicks! I couldn't resist having it in there. I totally wanted to have Josh try and get high from it too, but haven't had tiiime.
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Ahahahaha. xD he gets high and unlocks powers he never knew he had!
no, not really. xD
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The expressions are LOOOOOVELY in this. <3 Especially on Niko and Crowley - you can just sense their states of worry.
And Josh's dialogue concerning the items in the bag is gold. XD
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Man, l have been loving having a chance to draw Niko again SO MUCH. l had just about forgotten how fun the scraggly bastard is to draw, with his scruff and his leather <3
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