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Published: 2018-12-31 06:21:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 1
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Yoinks I really like the sketches but not 100% proud of the "finished" ver, but eh.I'll probably draw heads like this now, but the bodies gonna look janky as shit because my anatomy is shit no matter how hard I try --
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yo, these look great! i really like your style, and imo it's pretty unique & doesn't look like a lot of stuff i've seen before! just from your sketches & notes i can tell you have a sense of humor, which i think is important in the art community. also, for someone struggling with anatomy, you're doing really well! (God knows i can't do realism/semi-realism/anime to save my life, lol e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
a couple pointers that might be helpful have to do with the eyes and the hands -- i'll start with the hands, because i think that'll be easier for me to explain! in the central sketch i notice that you drew the line signifying the start of the fingers a bit too far down on the back of the hand. i don't believe this was the intention, but it gives the appearance of the character having an extra set of joints in their fingers. maybe if you moved that up a bit, it might look just a little more natural! that's a nitpick, though, and it's something i'm not sure most people would notice right away. this is kind-of an overdone suggestion, but looking at reference really helps, especially when working with hands ^^
the second thingh wanted to point out is to do with the eyes, like i said. i notice it most in the bottom-right drawing of a girl with her head at a quarter-turn (which i love, btw!). i think that the perspective on this is pretty good, but the eye that is farther away from the viewer looks a little too small in width to me. i definitely see what you were going for in terms of the perspective, but i just think it could be a little bigger! as with the hand thing, though, that's just a small nitpick, and it may even be part of your style. in that case, no changes needed i that department e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
other than those little things, i've got to say, i love the direction you're taking your art! the coloring and on that bottom-right sketch is wonderful, and the lineart is so smooth, too! i loke how expressive and clean your sketches are, too. i know style development can be really hard, so i hope that my feedback could help in some way. keep up the great work!!!
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