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Published: 2019-07-13 20:19:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 3555; Favourites: 343; Downloads: 0
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Note: these characters will no longer be shown in the form of a feline, but instead humanoid beings. Redesigns are currently in the making.
The comic itself- is still in the making- but- I wanted to do a practice page- and also want to upload more artwork of the story- to maybe get some peeps interested in it-
I'm super anxious
I never did an actual comic page before so- I am actually hoping?? It is enjoyed??? AA
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oooooooooooooOOOOOOOO
im already fascinated!!!!Β
<333
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AARGH Holos is handsome ;; My fav char oml <3
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This page is simply beautiful! I absolutely cannot wait for your comic.
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This is absolutely fantastic, your style is beautifully suited for the page, and the backgrounds are top tier omg
I love the out-to-in focus shot you have in those two middle panels, perfectly executed! I would seriously pay a lot of money to read this ksdhf
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OMG YOU DO A COMIC I'M SO HYPE
Β the division of the panel was good ! i think you should do the black square for the narration / voice over and draw white bubles with arrows when the characters speak. personnally, i didn't had any troubles to understand who spoke but maybe on a other page with more dialogues, it can become tricky.
And also, the drawings are awesome and very detailled ! will you keep this art style for the entire comic ? it must take you so much time
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Well tbh there was no narrator planned for the comic? :'D
But yes this is intended to be the style of the comic for now, unless I develop a different one I'd like to feature before starting the comic itself.
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This looks epic! IΒ love the position you hooked us at for the teaser, it gets my mind reeling and wonder what's going on. Not to mention the art is beautiful, and the comic pages are clean.
I am excited for this comic to come,
Don't forget to take your time on it!!!
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ohhh that big tan cat looks lovely! im interested already!
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Wow, like, this is definitely something I would want to read. It looks sick in how you drew the characters. And I'm always attached to them XD
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This looks absolutely incredible so far!!! Looking floors to future pages>
I was wondering, what program did you use?Β
Lol Iβm in the process of setting up a drawing tablet and graduating from using Procreate whEezeΒ
and the rez is sO good on this drawing Iβm just very curious :>
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Well thank you <3
I use paint tool Sai for drawing and edit blur and color saturations with Gimp sometimes! <3
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It is very much enjoyed!, this is so cool * ^*Β
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That's super cool !Β
I love the way you do backgrounds in theseΒ <3Β
And your style fits so well for a comic ^^
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I'm super interested!! I love your art style! Can't wait to see more.
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owo im vewy interested
tbh i feel like youre a really good story writer and the way u drew this comic is really nice on the eyes, id love to see more and read this when u start putting out actual pagesΒ
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sdfsdfs this,,, is so fucking good I love the style so much
my only critique would be to put those typical arrows/whatever connecting the speech bubble to the character that's speaking because at first I thought the giant tawny cat was speaking until I saw the 6th page, but that might also be because I'm retarded
otherwise, amazing job for this being your first comic page!!! <3
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Ayeee thanks for the advice dude! I'll add some arrows once I find the time! <3
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Interesteddddd very interested, the art is awesome, good job!
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Oooo I cant wait to see more! This will be epic!
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HHHhhhhh hyped oml this looks great
Will read 100%
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Bro Ill read the shit out of this PLEASE DO !!Β
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I really like the art style and the body language is really expressive!Β My one concern is that the dialog reads choppily (the third speech bubble particularly) , and I can't actually tell what's being said/where the first clause ends and the second begins; it feels like you're missing a subject or punctuation/a conjunction.Β Β
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Yeah I have a habit of putting too little punctuation- I will try to fix that actually, thank you for the advice dude ;; I'm still getting used to english storywriting but I'll try to learn before I will do the actual comic! <3
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You're doing pretty well so far!Β I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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This is one of the best comic pages i've ever seen, please please please keep going! <33
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yeah it is enjoyed!
I really want to know more about the story and characters!
keep working! <3
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YES. YES YES YES I WILL STICK AROUND FOR MORE 8>Β
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Hell to the yes
Big Hell to the huGE YES
This is lit man, I swear to god, it's such an awesome job!
Just
AAAAA
I am so glad
seeing
this here
EHEH EHEHE Good luck on your project I bet it's gonna rock! :3
I enjoy everything here, from the idea, character designs, expressions etc, to colors, compositions and the style. Sign me up for the fanclub, I'm serious XD
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oooo this looks interesting. Even though we don't know the characters much I want to know more and what is going on between these three.
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It looks really great. And if you are doing this all by yourself, more power to ya. But you know don't strain yourself!!
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