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CatFace2405 [2018-09-16 14:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm from     and the colours on this piece caught my eye
First of all I really like this concept of elements and abilities, the fire element is potrayed strongly here with her bright, orange (perhaps flames?) hair and the colours of her outfit
And I love the subtle freckles you added for her! I feel that it's a nice touch of 'human' in a superhuman character
The contrast between the background and the character is done nicely, bright against a dark value, making the character easier to notice
I love the sparkle in her eyes, it makes her seem like a superheroine with good motives and I can see her starring in her own live action movie
However, there are some room for improvement as well
For one, the shading of her hair could be improved
The shine in the fringe part of her hair is fine, but the shine in other parts of her hair is a little messy
There are areas where shadows appear on the hair (eg, the part of the hair directly infront of the fire orb thing) and the shine there could be reduced to make it more realistic
Furthermore, the fire orb doesn't look like fire at all, you can see the drawing lines and strokes which takes away any appeal effect
You could search tutorials and pictures of fire and refer to it, the shape, colours, how it blends etc.
Experimenting with it is important too
Overall its a great effort

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Burritomancer [2018-09-16 12:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Not bad.  A good departure from your usual landscapes.  Keep 'em coming.

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