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Description Line Art of a vent art I'm working on ^^

Hope you like it

DO NOT USE WITHOUT PERMISSION !
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lucidcoyote [2011-11-05 14:57:11 +0000 UTC]

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This looking pretty good so far! The anatomy is very good and I don't see very many mistakes. The scars look great, too. The only things I would fix up are the teeth and the tongue. A canine has more than just T-rex teeth ( [link] ) in it's jaws. A wolf, for example, has 42 teeth but they aren't all canines/fangs. There are incisors and carnassial molars. It's best to look at photos for reference. Here are few good ones [link] [link]

This might also help you [link]

You can search deviantART for good references also.

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B0RZOI In reply to lucidcoyote [2011-11-05 18:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Well I am really gratefull for that ^^

You should check out my new deviations, this one is pretty old... And I've done the finished version too... So take a look at my gallery ^^ Even if the newest have weird tooth too... I would be very happy if you post some other critique on my newest drawing ^^


Next time I should take a look at some reference for the tongue and teeth.

Thanks for the critique ^^

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lucidcoyote In reply to B0RZOI [2011-12-05 10:22:28 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome, glad i could help you

if i have some extra time i'll critique some of your other works.

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B0RZOI In reply to lucidcoyote [2011-12-11 11:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh thanks soooo much ^^

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lucidcoyote In reply to B0RZOI [2011-12-11 11:33:11 +0000 UTC]

yep, you're welcome

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DoktorrSketchy [2012-09-03 21:27:39 +0000 UTC]

is this MS firendly? If so, may I use this? This is just what I have been looking for for something.

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B0RZOI In reply to DoktorrSketchy [2012-09-03 23:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Sorry no. First, it is ugly as shit ( and so old ) and second I don't let people use my art.

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DoktorrSketchy In reply to B0RZOI [2012-09-04 02:12:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh OK. And its not bad. I really like it.

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inv1sible [2011-12-17 02:25:17 +0000 UTC]

That is amazing

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B0RZOI In reply to inv1sible [2011-12-21 18:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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