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Description Radioactive Autumn

Draped in maple leaves and white gold,
her somber eyes hidden from the mounting ash.
Lack of contact labors a mutual threshold,
restless desires bred amongst odious machinations.

Staid throat drunk on her ambrosial sap,
more reverie to dirty all our neurons one by one.
Guttural cries rattle through shared visions,
depicted in blossoms and ignoring the damage done.
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Comments: 91

BackupPanic In reply to ??? [2013-10-23 02:42:37 +0000 UTC]

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LadyofGaerdon [2012-10-06 09:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Your piece has been featured in #Lit-Visual-Alliance 's Autumn Alliance Contest article! Please the article to bring more attention to the features and the contest. Thanks!

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BackupPanic In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2012-10-20 20:24:16 +0000 UTC]

:salte: Will do.

And thanks for the heads up, as well.

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LadyofGaerdon In reply to BackupPanic [2012-10-25 01:51:08 +0000 UTC]

Sure.

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Lottie-Girl [2012-05-25 13:44:12 +0000 UTC]

'Staid throat drunk on her ambrosial sap.'- beautiful.

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BackupPanic In reply to Lottie-Girl [2012-06-08 16:49:17 +0000 UTC]

I thought so.

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Lottie-Girl In reply to BackupPanic [2012-06-08 22:53:37 +0000 UTC]

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shroomsastional [2012-05-23 10:04:10 +0000 UTC]

very nice bro

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BackupPanic In reply to shroomsastional [2012-05-24 04:46:06 +0000 UTC]

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spoems [2012-05-13 18:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Delectable language. A well deserved DD.

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BackupPanic In reply to spoems [2012-05-13 19:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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shadowlord19 [2012-05-12 05:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful Poetry.

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BackupPanic In reply to shadowlord19 [2012-05-12 18:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly, good sir.

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roxasaur [2012-05-12 05:09:17 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.

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BackupPanic In reply to roxasaur [2012-05-12 18:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly, madam.

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Blacksand459 [2012-05-12 04:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice writin'! Congrats on the DD!

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BackupPanic In reply to Blacksand459 [2012-05-12 18:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for the congratulations and compliment.

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ChaosDucky [2012-05-12 01:49:48 +0000 UTC]

not bad

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BackupPanic In reply to ChaosDucky [2012-05-12 18:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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Dragon-Girl155 [2012-05-12 00:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Interesting..........

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BackupPanic In reply to Dragon-Girl155 [2012-05-12 18:35:21 +0000 UTC]

One would hope.

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Dragon-Girl155 In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-13 02:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Make it two

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BackupPanic In reply to Dragon-Girl155 [2012-05-13 20:21:10 +0000 UTC]

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Dragon-Girl155 In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-14 08:08:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Lit-Twitter [2012-05-12 00:21:37 +0000 UTC]

Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. [link]

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BackupPanic In reply to Lit-Twitter [2012-05-12 18:39:50 +0000 UTC]

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Hunter-Re [2012-05-11 22:33:37 +0000 UTC]

This is a really cool poem!

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BackupPanic In reply to Hunter-Re [2012-05-12 18:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly, madam.

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ValenceFlame98 [2012-05-11 19:39:25 +0000 UTC]

interesting

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BackupPanic In reply to ValenceFlame98 [2012-05-12 18:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Apparently someone thought so.

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Renovative [2012-05-11 18:06:00 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful

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BackupPanic In reply to Renovative [2012-05-12 18:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly, madam.

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Iekeby [2012-05-11 15:18:35 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely stunning. I'm so in love with it! You can just feel this one.

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BackupPanic In reply to Iekeby [2012-05-12 18:49:25 +0000 UTC]

That's mighty kind of you to say, miss.

'Tis truly appreciated.

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Iekeby In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-13 11:15:39 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.
Please keep up the amazing work!

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BackupPanic In reply to Iekeby [2012-05-13 20:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Will do.

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halcyonshores [2012-05-11 14:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Potent and beautifully haunting.

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BackupPanic In reply to halcyonshores [2012-05-12 18:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for the compliment, madam.

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halcyonshores In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-12 19:44:56 +0000 UTC]

It was a pleasure indeed.

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pullingcandy [2012-05-11 13:22:56 +0000 UTC]

"odious machinations" - excellent imagery. really, a terribly gorgeous and evocative piece.

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BackupPanic In reply to pullingcandy [2012-05-12 19:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for the compliment, 'tis truly appreciated.

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wordeea [2012-05-11 10:41:49 +0000 UTC]

am-a-zing!

congrats. so well deserved. now ican say "i knew him when..."

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BackupPanic In reply to wordeea [2012-05-12 19:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly. 'Twas a bolt from the blue, that's for sure.

Heh, one can hope, but somehow I doubt it.

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wordeea In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-12 19:17:38 +0000 UTC]

i don't doubt it

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BackupPanic In reply to wordeea [2012-05-12 21:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Nonetheless, your confidence is certainly a boon upon my ego.

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wordeea In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-12 22:41:20 +0000 UTC]

i hope so. you have talent. period.

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BackupPanic In reply to wordeea [2012-05-12 22:56:30 +0000 UTC]

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wordeea In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-12 23:00:19 +0000 UTC]

zackly
(i love that little guy - what's his code?)

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BackupPanic In reply to wordeea [2012-05-12 23:05:52 +0000 UTC]

: salute : minus the spaces.

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wordeea In reply to BackupPanic [2012-05-12 23:12:31 +0000 UTC]

excellent! thanks

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