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Description Hello, visitor. I see you have been chatting with the guardian fairy of this ruin. With you being an erudite and learned magus, I'm sure you'll be okay. However if you were merely an ordinary mortal, I would feel obligated to warn you not to be too overt in your praises of that particular fae. Just between the two of us, she's more than a wee bit on the dangerous side. If she were to become too enamored of your words... Well, let’s just say bad things have happened in the past.

That ruined house behind her was once the home of a handsome human gardener, who also had just enough skill with magic to be able to perceive the earth spirits. When he saw the lovely fairy among his trailing roses, he made the mistake of telling her how beautiful she was. Not being used to compliments from the usually oblivious humans, and seeing how strong and handsome the young man was, she fell madly in love with him.

For the next few years she stayed close by him, blessing his flowers and watching his every move, pining for a life together in his arms. Not realizing that the tiny creature was actually in love with him, he in turn replied to her flirtations with exaggerated praise. He was just happy to have won the approval of a lovely fairy. He hadn’t even considered that his words meant any more to her than hers had meant to him.

Gradually, the love struck creature began to shun her own kind. All they seemed to ever tell her was to give up on her mad obsession with a human male. It seemed that they clearly couldn't understand the depth of her love for him. No longer able to bear their constant negativity, she abandoned her fellow fae. She devoted herself to dark magics in an attempt to make herself part of the same world as the man she loved. She longed to finally be able to consummate her love in a way that was impossible for two beings of such disparate sizes.

Slowly, her own people gave up on her. They grew fearful of her increasingly mad quest for dark power. Finally, with a unhallowed pact, she sealed a bargain with the dark queen. Morrigan herself granted the fairy one single spell's use of her sinister majesty's own personal grimoire. Exultant to finally have the means to truly express all her hearts yearnings at her fingertips, she returned triumphantly to the gardener's cottage. But upon her return, she found him "entertaining" a beautiful human woman in his bed.

Consumed by rage and anguish, the now dark fae used the queen's grimoire for a very different spell than she had intended. She cursed both of the "betrayers" with a terrible curse. The flowers that the gardener had so loved and that the fairy herself had lavished with her own magic for so long, rose up and devoured both the mortals and the entire house.

On hearing his tormented cries, the fairy was suddenly struck with the horror of what she had done. It was too late. The spell had been cast, and what Morrigan's borrowed magic had evoked was far stronger than any the fairy herself possessed. She could no longer use the dark grimoire. Morrigan's loaned power had been spent. The tome would no longer open though she tried with desperate and frenzied fingers to pry the pages apart.

She watched in the horrific realization that she would never again see the beautiful, smiling face of the man she loved, tortured by the understanding that she herself had destroyed him. In her repentance and agony of spirit, she bound herself with a solemn vow. She pledged to forever guard the spot that would be her lost love's grave. There she has stayed for many long decades while the ruin of the once4 beautiful cottage has slowly been consumed by the earth.

To the local humans, the place now bears a dreadful name. The last house on the edge of the fens is said to be haunted by the ghosts of two lovers who angered the fae and paid the ultimate price for their folly. On moonless nights, it is said that if you listen closely, the eerie cries of the night birds sound disturbingly like distant screams of human anguish. At times the luminous eyes of dark creatures of Morrigan's malice can be seen shining out from behind the vine shrouded rubble.

The wise women of the nearby villages, make signs of warding and cluck omens of doom to any fool brazen enough to think to approach that forsaken ruin at night. "Watch out!" they cackle. "The fae of Rosemoor still jealously guards the place...

where men have forgotten."



©All original work copyright Barosus (Edward D Cates) 2017
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Comments: 41

collincollinsten [2019-06-01 10:48:15 +0000 UTC]

1111$ but it may not be what I think...

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Barosus In reply to collincollinsten [2019-06-02 02:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I officially have no clue what you are talking about. 

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Catgirldstr11 [2018-03-28 11:32:03 +0000 UTC]

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Barosus In reply to Catgirldstr11 [2018-03-28 11:50:38 +0000 UTC]

What a kawaii congratulations banner.  Did you do it yourself? 

...and of course !   

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Catgirldstr11 In reply to Barosus [2018-03-28 23:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I put it together, but Tsukihii drew the chibi!

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JWA2277 [2018-03-28 09:40:04 +0000 UTC]

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Barosus In reply to JWA2277 [2018-03-28 09:44:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  I am still in a state of stunned disbelief myself!   

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JWA2277 In reply to Barosus [2018-03-28 10:57:53 +0000 UTC]

It's good writting. Keep it up.
I no longer understand what is and is not worthy of the daily D, but congrats.

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Barosus In reply to JWA2277 [2018-03-28 11:05:44 +0000 UTC]

 

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JWA2277 In reply to Barosus [2018-03-28 13:02:45 +0000 UTC]

feel free to note me or explor my work.

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Barosus In reply to JWA2277 [2018-03-29 00:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Well I am kind of swamped today for some strange reason.  But I will come peruse your stuff when I get some time for sure.

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JWA2277 In reply to Barosus [2018-03-29 00:40:14 +0000 UTC]

I would imagine it is from 1000 new admirers form your Daly D.
Once the smoke clears, I will still be here.
Solid and steady.
Thank you for answering me

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LindArtz [2018-03-28 08:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work!!

Congratulations on your much deserved DD! 

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Barosus In reply to LindArtz [2018-03-28 09:49:47 +0000 UTC]

 Thank you..... you delicious looking creature.......     No no no I promised myself I would not give in to my baser froggy instincts. LOL 

This is my very first DD!!!!!  OMG I am so stoked, and grateful, and proud, and stunned, and happy, and  aaaaaaaaaaagh!!!!  I am basically jumping up and down for joy!

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LindArtz In reply to Barosus [2018-03-28 17:12:54 +0000 UTC]

hehe I'm very happy For you. !! !!!

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Barosus In reply to LindArtz [2018-03-29 05:55:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I am much calmer now that I am wading into to the monumental task of trying to thank all the new favorites.  And now the pressure is on me to duplicate my success and prove it wasn't a "one hit wonder."  We men are so stupidly competitive. LOL  You give of one taste of glory and we are instant junkies.  Ok LOL, now Queen's "I Want It All" is playing in my head!  We guys can be so predictable sometimes, right!  Check off one more item on my bucket list!

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LindArtz In reply to Barosus [2018-03-30 04:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Nah. It's a healthy competitive, I'd say.  And as for the need to duplicate your success, all one has to do is view the rest of your gallery, works that came before this one, to see your talent and potential; that there will be more DD's down the road for you.
All it took was for someone to suggest it. ^^  Like I said. It's been a Long time coming. !

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Barosus In reply to LindArtz [2018-03-31 02:54:02 +0000 UTC]

 You are generous and gracious.  Thank you!

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SummerDreams-Art [2018-03-28 07:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your DD Ed!! A wonderful piece of literature and so well deserved.
You are a truly talented writer.

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Barosus In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2018-03-28 09:51:06 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAWWWW! Thanks SOOO much!  I really can't even express how crazy thrilled i am right now!  

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SummerDreams-Art In reply to Barosus [2018-03-28 19:18:50 +0000 UTC]

You totally deserved it Ed!! Such a brilliantly talented writer like you deserves more recognition.
Enjoy your first DD!

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Barosus In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2018-03-29 06:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Oooooo!  I am not used to being flattered by beautiful talented women online..... Hmmmm, an old bullfrog could get to like this. LOL  I am enjoying it but I am also getting drowned in notifications.  I don't see how the big name artists can cope at all!  It is a pretty steep learning curve.  Thanks again!

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SummerDreams-Art In reply to Barosus [2018-03-29 19:38:43 +0000 UTC]

You might be flattered but it is no flattery on my part,
Just the absolute truth Edward...oh glad to have met your phibie after a long time!
Getting drowned in your notifications is what comes as an extra package with being thrown in the spotlight...enjoy while it lasts because when the 'spot-light' goes out you gonna have difficulty adjusting to your boring old routine with just you and your old darling phibie!

The pleasure is truly mine Ed!

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Barosus In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2018-03-30 03:45:22 +0000 UTC]

parts of it were definitely exhilarating, but the best part of even being on here is the friends like you with mutual interests that I can really talk to.  I was never big on any other social media, but on here I feel much more comfortable to let go and really express myself.  I could never post my stuff on FB.  I am still kind of a noob who hasn't learned how to really take advantage of the lit groups on here.  I was basically a total lurker fro the first 7 years I was on here before I actually tried to reach out to anyone, and those first deviants who responded so enthusiastically really helped me to begin to come more and more out of my shell.  I have some amazingly kind and generous watchers.  

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SummerDreams-Art In reply to Barosus [2018-03-31 20:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I am glad that a gem writer like you got discovered by those first few deviants which gave you with right dose of incentives to go up and use your gift for writing and allow your emotions to flow.
I believe for a talent to bloom it merely takes just someone's slight nudge, unrecognizable at first but one which you will realise you couldn't have done it without that little support.

Continue to bloom Edward and come out of your shell so that everyone can see that the phibie was in fact a handsome writer hiding in a corner.

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Barosus In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2018-04-01 05:57:22 +0000 UTC]

OOoooooooOOOO you flatterer.   You're dangerous.  You better watch out or my wife will start to get jealous of all this attention I'm getting from other beautiful women.  You are going to get us both in trouble.  Pretty soon I might start thinking I really am a handsome writer, but I am going to have to do some more actual writing for that to come true.

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SummerDreams-Art In reply to Barosus [2018-04-01 19:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, Ed I am not trying to flatter you just to up your inspiration by telling you the truth.
Besides, I wouldn't want to face your woman's wrath lol...hell has no fury for a woman scorned (I am bearing that quote well in my mind)

Oh let's put it rather like this, an old phibie who writes handsomely!
(I guess now that won't put any of us in trouble)

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Barosus In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2018-04-02 07:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes much more innocent. LOL XP  My problem is I am just a terrible flirt, I guess.  I don't mean anything by it, but I just tend to get overenthusiastic when people really like my stuff.  I have gotten in huge trouble with my wife on occasion by just being... a bit too exuberant and free with my praises.  Honestly too though, all our marriage up till this point I really haven't had any female friends of my own, so she is not used to dealing with me talking to ANY girls. There was a time when seh even got jealous of our daughters because they were drawing some of my attention which had used to be all hers.  She got over with time, so I know she will with this too once she feels secure that i am n+NOT chasing anyone else, which I am NOT!  I actually think she kind of thinks DA is my mistress because I spend so much time on here.  But I can't help it.  This is the first time in my life when i am actually sharing my writing with the world.  She used to tell me all the time that I needed to hurry up an get famous so she wouldn't have to work anymore.  She hasn't said that phrase for over a year now that realizes that I am not even remotely famous but I still have so much of my time taken up by trying to please and win new readers.  It finally sunk in to her that me "going public", means sharing me with others.  I know it is actually really hard on her, and I am constantly trying to find ways to reassure her that she is still my top priority.  Well anyway, no need to dump all my drama on you.  You just always strike me as a very gracious listener.  I'll bet you get this sort of thing a lot.

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SummerDreams-Art In reply to Barosus [2018-04-03 06:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw oh!! I had understood and recognized your problem from the very beginning itself Ed!

It's always kinda interesting and amusing too the little stuffs that you share about your personal life , besides to understand life, the people in them etc...you've to learn to be a good listener lol.

Now you wrote a lot in your previous comment but I will take only one part of it and write a response over that part.

Being famous isn't always a pleasant thing you know, it's almost like seeing a blingy statement piece or a designer dress on a perfect looking model looking perfect lol and wishing to own it yourself assuming it will look 'perfect' on you too. That it will bring you countless joys, happiness (materialistically), love and yet more success...but when you actually get to have it for yourself you look at yourself in the mirror and realize that it just doesn't suit on you (we are talking about fame as a designer dress or precious jewellery, metaphorically).

You know some things look good and attractive only from a distance!

Sorry if I must have deviated from much of what you wrote but I guess we all have our own set of dramas, some lasts for a few episodes while others like yours has a life time guarantee ....after all whoever said being married is a short drama anyways LOL!!

Just keep sharing your wonderful, inspiring stuffs with us here and I am sure eventually your girl will come around and accept the part of you wanting to go 'public'.

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Barosus In reply to SummerDreams-Art [2018-04-03 22:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm sure you are right.  I think right now we are in the midst of one of those painful growth spurts.  Sucks for a while but you ended up growing from it when it is all said and done.  She is just used to having a lot more of my attention directed solely at her and she needs to be sure that my new activities don't mean I am pulling away from her.  Meanwhile I am trying to figure out how to convey that reassurance that that would never happen. We are both struggling to figure out what we are supposed to do and what it means.  But you are right, we will get it all straightened out eventually.  

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xlntwtch [2018-03-28 07:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, this was an interesting read. Though it seems rather condensed, it tells an old tale with verve. Thanks. Oh, and congratulations. (:

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Barosus In reply to xlntwtch [2018-03-28 10:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I am completely thrilled to have won a legendary item (DD). 

"Rather condensed" is probably why it won.  I normally have a tendency to drag stuff out too much.  Often my chapters are 20 plus pages and have to be split into 2 parts to fit on here.  Being confronted by a wall of text can be more than a little daunting. Thank you for thinking it was an old tale.   It was a bit of an old tried and true theme but I did make it up on the spot, on a whim because of a comment someone left on the drawing I did that it was based on. I did not base it on any particular fairy tale.  Actual historical fairy tales are more my sister's area of expertise, but I assure you it is completely original.  

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DemiMurgos [2018-02-17 22:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of a snippet of my own novel. Gosh, I haven't written a single sentence for so long...
This dark fairy tale really brings back memories, writer's and children's as well. Thank you for this moment of nostaly.
Also got some ideas for a painting so HELL YEAH, you are officially my muse. >.>

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Barosus In reply to DemiMurgos [2018-02-18 04:12:21 +0000 UTC]

DEMIIIII chan!!!!!! You're back!!!!!! YAAAAAAAY!!!

I am so glad to hear from you again.  The sudden silence was deafening.  

I am Your muse??????? (blushing furiously)

I was just happy to do a story for once that was somewhat succinct.  My normal scribblings tend to balloon into 20 page epistles.  I would be super excited to see what you might come up with for a painting of it.  I think my favorite part of the whole tale is the ending.  IT always helps when you nail the ending.  I tend to be a bit obsessive about getting them just right.  I am super thrilled to have touched a inspirational chord in your heart.
 

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DemiMurgos In reply to Barosus [2018-02-19 18:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Ahhwww >w< Being greeted like this always feels so amazing. *heart melts*
As soon as I have 2 seconds for my own thoughts, I'm gonna sit down and do said painting. I'll tag you once it's done!

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Barosus In reply to DemiMurgos [2018-02-20 12:12:52 +0000 UTC]

I was going to put the drawing that inspired this in along with the story, but since I do not have core membership it wouldn't let me, so I stuck a link down in the comment section.  But I would be thrilled to see whatever picture it inspires in you irregardless.  I actually have been a bad old phibie, because I have been so swamped that I forgot to go check out more of your stuff.  I will have to remedy that affront as soon as possible.  That way I can be a friend....PLUS ULTRA!!!  

ufufuu it is fun to know I can use silly anime references with you now too!  X3
 

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DanielaIvanova [2018-02-16 16:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Woo, I really loved that fairy tale, it was told so well! I feel like a little girl again

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Barosus In reply to DanielaIvanova [2018-02-17 04:27:46 +0000 UTC]

OOooooo thank you so much!  Hearing that really makes my day.  I actually owe another watcher a poem, and I have been pretty busy, but my need for creative expression finally just kind of burst out while I was responding to a comment on the pic this was based on.  I liked I enough that I tweaked it a bit and posted it as a deviation.  I usually struggle to keep my writing that succinct, so overall I was pretty pleased to be able to put out a nice short tale for once.

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DanielaIvanova In reply to Barosus [2018-02-19 00:50:47 +0000 UTC]

I can imagine it must have been a struggle for you not to delve into backstory   To be frank with you, I've had trouble getting to the Llama files not only because of time constraints but because it really reads to me like a larger work, not a novel necessarily but something close. And I'm just absolutely not used to reading novels online. Shorter works, sure, but never really followed chapters and stuff on the internet. On the one hand, it bugs me that it's unfinished and uncertain whether it would be finished at all. On the other, it's a bit like TV series - I prefer binge watching than waiting every week for a new one. Also prefer having a bookmark where I last left off so I can decide when to go back to it. Which isn't possible in an internet browser. In fact, I had to read the Dryad's story in three sittings. And that made me quite uneasy, whether my wifi will disconnect (which happens really often) and I will lose where I reached and have to look for it. Anyway, wall of text. Long story short, I was very pleased to be able to enjoy your literary talent in a work that I can "consume" in one sitting. 

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Barosus In reply to DanielaIvanova [2018-02-19 13:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I admittedly struggle with that.  Believe it or not, I do the same thing with other works online! I guess that makes me kind of a hypocrite.  I deluge my watchgers with enormous chapters, and hate reading anything like that myself, like you said, online at least.  IF it is in a book form I know I can sir back and just get lost in it, but when it involves ages of monotonous scrolling I will often skip by it.  If you are worried about the wifi issue, you could copy and paste it into a offline document form, then if the net crashes you are still good.  But I hear you, and that is a really valuable critique.  Honestly I know it is intimidatingly long, I don't know why but I just can't seem to help myself.  Bad old phibie!. 

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DanielaIvanova In reply to Barosus [2018-02-20 17:00:34 +0000 UTC]

It's also an issue about dA's literature viewing style, it still has a long way to go in that direction though the viewing options definitely help. 
But yeah, that's one of the reasons I don't upload prose here (or anywhere for that matter) although I have considered writing some short stories for my drawings. I think that would be cool. Maybe for the one I'm working on now.

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