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:3 i rather like how this page turned out.2-28: [link]
2-30: [link]
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Percy is adorable as always. I love the bottom left panel of him clutching the blanket.
It was momentarily confusing to realise that Sam's Grandpa knows about the Bots. I was actually waiting to see how Sam would explain the doppelganger car, but then it went on so I assumed that he didn't know about them. In retrospect, it would have been useful to have added a panel of Grandpa knowing they exist, perhaps on Page 24. In any case, it's hard to plan out a comic, especially when you are trying to contract a large fiction down to fit!
I need to read your actual fic too, as I love your take on Percy.
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pretty much sums it up right there. X3
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It's all good though. Know why?
Perceptor. Blanky.
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**Keeps expecting to see a teddy beside Percy** XD!!!
Always love seeing what the next page'll look like. Keep up the excellent work!
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aw, blanket. ^^ How sweet. So the granpa knows, eh?
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yeah. not hard to guess that something's wrong when there's two of a one of a kind vehicle in your barn. XD
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Awww, he looks so cute being confused with that blanket.
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Aaaaaw, yay! Percy is so adorable! I totally said that last page too, didn't I? lol
And I meant to make this comment sooner, but I think it's neat and original that you put their wake up much earlier in time. It makes it slightly more complicated for them to fit in, unlike in our technologically-abundant time.
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i was recently watching documentaries on queen elizabeth and then another on the Medici Renaissance... so i kept thinking what if they had arrived then? XD
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you said his grandpa checked on him?
and then the next panel, you said if they see Bee, they'll know for sure?
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it's not just his grandpa down there. XD
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i know. i think i just got confused.
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nah, i think i'm causing the confusion. X3 i'm hacking up the story to make it move faster... so sometimes i lose the clarification
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why are you wanting it to go faster?
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so it doesn't get boring or stale. A comic moves at a different pace than a written story. :3
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well I learned something new tonight
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