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Published: 2011-07-12 01:12:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 835; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Koi Kissa likes her new box!

This is my entry for Comic Page contest. We still have about 2 weeks to complete it, but as I am going on holiday tomorrow for 10 days I had to get my entry done now. D:

This features my Keiju Kissa Neapolitan [link]
~wakuri-neko-san 's Gideon [link] (I have her permission to use him)
and this Koi Kissa, who is a prize for the contest [link]

The theme was to create a page based around the phrase "An adoptable notices a strange new box..."

As soon as I saw the Koi Kissa, I pretty much assumed they lived in water (because of the "koi" part...) It seems that "koi" is Finnish for moth, however, so I guess I was wrong. But if you ignore that and pretend it is a fish the comic makes sense.

I hope it makes sense This is the first comic I have ever made. safe to say i have no idea what im doing.

pencil and photoshop with a watercolour texture i made added
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Comments: 26

Lunar-Wind [2011-07-28 07:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, this is so adorable! ;v; Love the story, expressions, style, and.. well, pretty much everything! Great job, this really deserves more faves/comments! <3

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bechahns In reply to Lunar-Wind [2011-07-28 15:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, and for the fave

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Lunar-Wind In reply to bechahns [2011-08-12 07:15:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem! <3

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Cao [2011-07-27 23:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Congrats you!

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bechahns In reply to Cao [2011-07-28 00:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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Nyx--Nyx [2011-07-22 14:46:39 +0000 UTC]

This is killer ;u;
So cute and a great idea! Plus the way you've told it and the layout / colours are fab. Its such a shame Koi kissa means moth, I really hope that doesn't affect this comics placing because of that, I think this deserves to win

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bechahns In reply to Nyx--Nyx [2011-07-22 15:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Well, thanks very much! I hope it doesn't matter too, though it was a pretty stupid mistake... xD

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Gonah [2011-07-14 04:55:35 +0000 UTC]

So... I WAS thinking of entering this contest... now I see there is no hope XD

This looks wonderful and, even if the idea is off, it's still adorable AND original! I love it at least X3

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bechahns In reply to Gonah [2011-07-22 14:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And you should totally enter!!

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Gonah In reply to bechahns [2011-07-28 03:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, didn't have time to before leaving for Canada x.x

Congrats on the win though <3 totally deserved ^^

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bechahns In reply to Gonah [2011-07-28 15:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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aia-san [2011-07-14 02:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Very cute! <3

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bechahns In reply to aia-san [2011-07-22 13:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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aia-san [2011-07-14 02:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Really cute <3

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RowanNorth [2011-07-13 23:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh man this is the most adorable thing D: I love the style of this, and the soft pastel colors make everything so light and lovely <3 I adore your style and the way you put this together, the relationship between the panels as well as the expression of the characters is just so much love <33
Best of luck to you haha! I don't know how I'm going to beat thissss.

The idea of Koi kissa being a "water" type passed my mind too, but this just takes it to the next level <3
Actually, a good friend of mine is Finnish so I don't have that confusion. XDD She'll tell me what it means whether or not I want her to.

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bechahns In reply to RowanNorth [2011-07-22 13:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much I'm glad you like it.

I feel kind of stupid for not realising it was probably Finnish, because I knew that "Keiju Kissa" was Finnish. It just didn't cross my mind at all, haha. Hopefully that won't matter though... xD

Thanks again and best of luck!

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Cao [2011-07-13 04:31:48 +0000 UTC]

This is so flippin' adorable. D: I love it so much!

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bechahns In reply to Cao [2011-07-22 13:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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nekophoenix [2011-07-13 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]

This is actually the best thing ever, and WHY doesn't it have more favourites/comments? WHY?! >:C
I Read this and actually got teary, there's just something about the expressions and the discontented inaudible wailing from the characters when they lose their ball and can't play with each other at first that just tugs on my heart strings somethin' shockin.

Perfect expressions, brilliant character interaction, I love the story - You better win I swear t'gawd

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bechahns In reply to nekophoenix [2011-07-22 15:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Haaahaa, I am glad you like it! Thanks a lot glad the expressions worked well xD

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sambees [2011-07-12 02:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Koi Kissa is Finnish for "moth cat" the way Keiju Kissa is for "faerie cat"

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bechahns In reply to sambees [2011-07-12 02:04:06 +0000 UTC]

HAAHAHAHAHA oops...

I wondered why it looked nothing like a fish...nevermind I'll doodle up a quick one while I'm away and submit that instead xD

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wakuri-neko-san [2011-07-12 01:55:04 +0000 UTC]

YES> LOVE LOVE LOVE.

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bechahns In reply to wakuri-neko-san [2011-07-12 02:04:30 +0000 UTC]

AI AI AI

(look what I did!! ^)

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wakuri-neko-san In reply to bechahns [2011-07-12 02:06:20 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE SO SMART OMG.

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bechahns In reply to wakuri-neko-san [2011-07-12 02:07:24 +0000 UTC]

OMG LIKE I KNOW

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