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Published: 2017-06-24 04:27:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 300; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 1
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Description pools are real blue

messy hour-long sketch
trying to de-rust my poor, shitty hands
looks down at hands in silent horror

this was loosely ref'd from a pic of our own pool
just the colors, really, because I gotta practice more perspective
I wanna try some more environmental kinda stuff
or, at least some more full pieces ref'd from real pictures
gotta ground my style a little more, I think
more of the basics. composition, depth.... other things....... ">_>

the thumbnail of this looks prettier than the real thing but that's okay for now.

gimme crriitttiiiiqqquuueee
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Comments: 10

CrossDevice [2017-06-25 14:29:43 +0000 UTC]

I like the semi-simple nature of it, pretty cool

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beeZah In reply to CrossDevice [2017-07-03 03:51:22 +0000 UTC]

thaaAaAaAanks you. 
there's something about clear water that's so fascinating. it's a shame that drawing it is the WORST

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CrossDevice In reply to beeZah [2017-07-04 10:41:51 +0000 UTC]

They sure are.. especially when they have shipwrecks

speaking of those, these are absolutely beautiful

1.bp.blogspot.com/-cBN7aKRNIUc…

4.bp.blogspot.com/-tUjb0YXzwNY…

I too wish to become a floating forest after my death

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beeZah In reply to CrossDevice [2017-07-04 18:00:40 +0000 UTC]

o. bro. 
those are sexy aph.

one of my absolute favorites are mangrove forests. it's like, beach and forest COMBINED
that's some fantasy world ass shit rite there

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CrossDevice In reply to beeZah [2017-07-05 02:11:23 +0000 UTC]

Man there was this beach I used to go to that was great, small secluded, rocky  'cliffs' on both ends, and a mangrove between the rocky area on the right and the sand... then it got taken over indirectly by a hotel

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beeZah In reply to CrossDevice [2017-07-05 16:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwww
You told me about the tourist take over before but now that I know that there were mangroves too I'm double sad

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CrossDevice In reply to beeZah [2017-07-05 22:02:05 +0000 UTC]

XD, I keep telling people the same stories over and over

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Flowerbush [2017-06-24 05:58:25 +0000 UTC]

yo this looks nice! complaints i have tho is on the colors, ironically: they're LASER bright, but then again pools can get that way? second is that the green and blue look awfully similar. like, remove all the colors on this and it'd seem they're different, but the very nature of the colors make them just overall too hard to look at—like they're merging together. simply changing the blue would make it easier for the eyes to decipher. ((also another fun thing: did you know that the green has a lighter value than the blue? wild))

the picture also feels somewhat flat: we get some depth from where you tried putting the pool wall, but we can't see the pool floor too well. water's more translucent than it can appear (and also more opaque than it can appear). overall water is super unfair. it distorts light that comes in, but you can still intuit the shapes. also, the perspective is a bit too extreme, making part of the pool look more shallow.

also the concrete not in the pool is literally just blank space, but then again, i doubt you were trying out textures so it doesn't matter

small warning that toning down vibrancy too far can cause you to start washing out colors, it's been happening to me and i've been trying to Recover

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beeZah In reply to Flowerbush [2017-06-24 06:31:01 +0000 UTC]

At first I was reading this and was like "nahhh, the colors are supposed to be too bright!" And then I looked at it again but on my phone and holy shit this looks DISGUSTING

I Hate Art

edit I switched back to my computer and it's fine again???????????????????????
like I literally directly sampled these colors from an actual picture of my pool with an ugly green boogie board in it why

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Flowerbush In reply to beeZah [2017-06-24 07:04:36 +0000 UTC]

w ELP,

i'm also on a laptop, but sometimes you gotta Lie About Reality sometimes ,

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