watchmegiveafuck [2009-04-26 19:39:21 +0000 UTC]
It doesn't look finished at all. There is no refining, punch or gripping element to it. It's an under painting to a more promising piece.
Maybe you were trying to go for a washed out effect but it just doesn't work well here. It may be the guide lines on her face or the strong whiteness of the background but something screams 'i'm not finished yet!!'
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