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Published: 2003-11-14 22:39:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 5835; Favourites: 135; Downloads: 1766
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I came home to find nobody around. So I hunted for and found my christmas present (a G3!), and shot this before paranoia got the better of me.(nerves all over)
I am here for criticism. Hit me with it. But fullview first.
edit 20/01/06: watermark. Excuse the resubmission.
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I'm afraid I've only just received this comment; I'm not around here much any more. If you still want to use my image then send me a message about it.
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this is a very excellent photo. I don't know what to say, critique wise!
all I can do is suggest playing with the negative space, maybe use that to express what the model is screaming about (using the large empty wall to suggest oppression from a mysterious source). like a large 'empty' square with the head in the bottom center 1/9th of the frame... but that's my personality, not yours).
this was found on sterling's favlist, btw. It's definitely a deserved position!
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Funny you should say that. This is a version that I discarded while working on this piece. I half-wish I had kept a little more space above the figure, now. Still, learning process, blah blah.
Thank-you for commenting.
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how many light sources did you use?
the learning process is fun! never stop learning!
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i love this peice. I love the fact that you captured so much emotion. And i LOVE the fact that your face is not centered.......i hade artists who think that in order for a picture to be perfect, the model has to be centered........ nicely done. Mucho Props
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*frustration* I love the photo but it won`t appear in my Recent Favourites after I add it. Am I missing anything?
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ooh wow 
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very nice showing of expression here, i praise you !
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i feel like that sometimes, its a wonderful picture definately a fav, your posture and expression are very moving, excellent... really great.. :awe:
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this is a great photo, love the b&w and the contrast, the composition and expression is also really good.
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this is something i was trying to do the other day.
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This is definately amazing. I think everyone else kind of summed it up though. What was it? Not counting the ones left by you, there are tons of comments. So yeah. I don't know if I could put it any better.
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i love everything about this shot, the teture on the wall, the hair, the lighting on the neck and how it defines every curve, and the almost perseptible scream that oozes from the shot ...
well done
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you know the skittle im going to toss into your mouth is sour
but its so good
i like the green ones
how about you?
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just a poet who misses pretending to be a digital photographer and a graphic artist
mostly because i gave my computer away and the digi cam
they were outdated and I couldn't bring them to my training center [shh its government ran, they are watching me right... now 
what's the band going to be called? O.D.T.G.O.W.R.T.E or who the fuck are you?
I think the latter is already a band name...
An angle as the definition would state is a point connecting two other points. The joining of two
As an entity I am an angle of souls that are trying to help the little slugs stop being destructive
You see they don't seem to get along with eachother at all [most become very nemisis minded] but they love the shit out of me
Expect lots of words from me and nothing else
[..goes and checks out the rest of your gallery]
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sir...
i love you and you are going straight on my devwatch.
who the fuck are you?
(one day The Green Ones will rule the earth)
(now i want to form a band just so that i can give it that name)
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this is my favourite shot that you have in your gallery. it's amazing...if i could fave it a thousand times i would. i love the raw image and the angst. FAVE FAVE FAVE!
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I love how much extra space there is on this. Gives a real feeling of lonelyness. Perfect lighting, and contrast also
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what a perfectly beautiful neck... plus a wonderful face.
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Very nice, I like the composition a lot, good expression too and the contrast is awesome.
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I have to say, this is really rather good - well done!
I agree with sterling: more of your personality in the shot, it really makes it YOU. nice.
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I really like the composition of this picture!! itΒ΄s very good
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Great idea and well executed. It might be an idea to see what it would look like if you moved further fron the wall and had more of a shadow.
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I really like this image. I could swear that I left a comment on it before...I sure should have, it's so excellent. I particularly like the space you left, where one can almost picture the sound of your scream/yell.
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i like the imperfection of the wall.. seems to add to the general feel
also agree with punctured about the side view.. it's an interesting diversity
cheers
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Usually the screaming and angst, and " goddamnit I'm pissed" pictures are very unpleasant, but I find this very stylish. Probably because it's viewed from the side, so you don't see the whole pissed off face; leaves more room for imagination. I don't know how to critisize photos, but an interesting variation would be that, with a totally white (or black) background.
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I would have done something more with the hair... Other than that...
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The pleasure part of this image wasn't apparent until I read your story. I'll go with the pain impression, and marvel at how wonderful this shot is, and how you left the space in your picture where the viewer can almost SEE your scream. Great job.
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This is awsome
very expressive. anger, frastuation, well done
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...and I had to fav this one. Your gallery is so expressive, I dig. (into)
Yeppyepp, I'll dev'watch
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oh i like it very much. at first i thought you were angry and screaming at the sky, but then the more i looked at it- it was like this sick sense of humor like you were excited abotu something. i dont know. i like it.
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