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Well I got this uploaded just under a day after I uploaded the previous page (by about a half hour)

I really liked how this page turned out. It was also easyer but fun. I spend about 4 hours on this page.

O.O Whoa the mystery kitty has infiltrated Detective Cats and is one of their members *gasp* Looks like D.C. has a spy within their ranks.... and its the boss kitties son. I can't wait to see how this unfolds.
>.< Cream Finally stopped licking the blood.
Sorry Blizzy no more Gyro for awhile.

WOOT ONE MORE PAGE TO GO! Then gets surgery to remove the first page of Chapter 2.

Panel 1: Boss cat and his son.
Panel 2: Cream
Panel 3: Cream and boss cat's son.
Panel 4: Boss cat and his son.
Empty space: Birchy & Tiny.

About the empty space:
I'm sure most of you guys who have read chapter 1 (since it came out before the prologue..) know that Birchy and Tiny become Mentor and Apprentice. They are best buds in the series and we are online too. Huggles make the world go around.
I decided if I have empty spaces I'm gonna do somethin' random with my fursona Birchy in Tertullian Chibi form ( I call it Tertullian cuz I used the character Tertullian in it first)

Story of Detective Cats and Characters are Copy Righted by

Tiny is copyrighted by and has been given permision to be used in this comic.
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Comments: 27

SeparatedSouls [2010-04-28 16:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Awww! No Gyro! D= Great none the less! <3

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Bircfallstar In reply to SeparatedSouls [2010-04-28 20:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Blizzy I'm glad you still like it even with Gyro gone.

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SeparatedSouls In reply to Bircfallstar [2010-04-28 21:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Lol, of course. Cream even looks cute here, I mean without the blood and the attacking Gyro... =3

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Bircfallstar In reply to SeparatedSouls [2010-04-28 21:45:31 +0000 UTC]

I guess so. Her eyes are stunning

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SeparatedSouls In reply to Bircfallstar [2010-04-28 21:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, they are. Your doing a really great job with this.

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CerberusReigns [2010-04-28 11:27:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm liking where this is going

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Bircfallstar In reply to CerberusReigns [2010-04-28 20:10:40 +0000 UTC]

^-^ Sweet I am glad that the series is getting enjoyment! Now I really wanna work on the next prologue page.

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CerberusReigns In reply to Bircfallstar [2010-04-29 10:46:00 +0000 UTC]

FFFF, which reminds me to get going on the next CB page.

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Bircfallstar In reply to CerberusReigns [2010-04-29 10:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes you should.

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CerberusReigns In reply to Bircfallstar [2010-04-29 10:51:27 +0000 UTC]

I'll trrrrry to get it done by the middle of next week >.>

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mcculfja [2010-04-27 19:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Cream looks kinda clueless in the second panel. Maybe she isn't a big one for strategy, just killing.

For a while I got mixed up on who was the boss kitty in the third panel. I was surprised that you showed his face so clearly, but then I realized that the boss's eye had just turned white again.

I was briefly wondering if I could figure out what "mystery brother kitty" looked like by finding someone who looked like his Dad. But then I realized that Cream looks nothing like him so...

And I know this seems kinda weird (knowing who Cream is), but her eye is really pretty in the second panel.

What does B.R.P. stand for?

This page made me go back and read all the first chapter. Your art has improved a lot even since starting this comic! The cats look a lot more furry and fluid now.

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Bircfallstar In reply to mcculfja [2010-04-27 20:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah when the cats son mentioned the Detective Cat rankings she was kinda clueless. The son pretty much knows about it and maybe the father too but the rest of the Kuro akai yoru isn't very familiar with how their system works.

Yeah the boss cats fur was over his eye in the third panel, the gray where is other eye should be is the empty socket.

I have recived a lot of guesses of who the boss cat's son could be. So far people have guessed Jumper, Tyler & Black. It could be any of them or none of them. You'll just have to wait and see

o.o BRP? Do you mean my horrible handwriting that says "Blip" in the extra space with Birchy and Tiny?

Yeah my old stuff is kinda crummy but still good enough for me. I'm not gonna redo those pages because it just shows how my art changed.

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mcculfja In reply to Bircfallstar [2010-04-27 20:21:42 +0000 UTC]

OOOOOhhhhhhhh! I should have known it said "Blip".

Of course you shouldn't have to redo stuff. That would be silly, you would just keep redoing the same pages as your art got better and better . I just was saying that I like your newer style.

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Bircfallstar In reply to mcculfja [2010-04-27 20:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I do too. I'm glad that I keep gettin' better as I practice.

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Awkward-Insomniac [2010-04-27 07:01:44 +0000 UTC]

I WILL NOW GO RE-READ CHAPTER ONE TO TRY AND FIGURE OUT WHO HE IS XD

Ummm...Could he be Jagged?

I really don't know xD This is getting pretty intense, I must say! ;D More fantastic artwork too, of course xP

I wanna know who he iiiis XD

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mcculfja In reply to Awkward-Insomniac [2010-04-27 17:28:17 +0000 UTC]

I was going to guess Black.
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I would imagine that a "prince" would be kind of stuck up.

Or maybe it is ICE!!!
(I kinda doubt that, though)

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Awkward-Insomniac In reply to mcculfja [2010-04-27 18:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Birchy told me it isn't but I guessed him too! He's like that guy's replica xP

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mcculfja In reply to Awkward-Insomniac [2010-04-27 19:22:35 +0000 UTC]

She has made so many characters that it is hard to narrow it down. Maybe we haven't even been introduced to him yet.

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Bircfallstar In reply to Awkward-Insomniac [2010-04-27 10:22:11 +0000 UTC]

He could be any of the cats up there. Who knows what evil mind has penetraited the Detective Cats base.

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Awkward-Insomniac [2010-04-27 07:01:42 +0000 UTC]

I WILL NOW GO RE-READ CHAPTER ONE TO TRY AND FIGURE OUT WHO HE IS XD

Ummm...Could he be Jagged?

I really don't know xD This is getting pretty intense, I must say! ;D More fantastic artwork too, of course xP

I wanna know who he iiiis XD

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thesupertiny [2010-04-26 23:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Kikikik...

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Bircfallstar In reply to thesupertiny [2010-04-26 23:21:27 +0000 UTC]

*Huggles* Cuz you be that awesome Tiny-chan!
I'm probably gonna use you and me for extra spaces when I have them (warning: has an extra space on page 12 aka the third page of chapter 2)

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CrowyTheCat [2010-04-26 22:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Ffff, mysterious kitteh is mysterious.
So I'mma take a stab at who it is. |D If they've even appeard in chapter 1! xD

Let's see...
the cat's pelt is brown, or at least most of the back and since you refered to this cat as 'son' of the boss then I know it's a guy.
He's also getting a mentor so I guess for this clue I'll just assume the prolgue takes place just before the 14th anniversary of the detectice cats agency.
-searches through comic pages-
Hm, Jumper is kinda brown. So is Tyler and he looks suspicious. xD
Hm...I must choose between Jumper having the rare ability of a guard cat or Tyler and his suspicious face. xD Or niether...fff, I'll wait 'till more characters are decided before making a guess.

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Bircfallstar In reply to CrowyTheCat [2010-04-26 22:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm glad for your curiosity. Who knows it could be one of them. I had another guess before on the last page but all these guesses I've received are intresting. It could be any tom cat.

*squee* Can't wait to keep continueing the book.

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Mistystorm13 [2010-04-26 22:51:46 +0000 UTC]

*screams* SURGERY D:
... YAY <3

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Bircfallstar In reply to Mistystorm13 [2010-04-26 22:52:32 +0000 UTC]

I better get started on that last page.

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Mistystorm13 In reply to Bircfallstar [2010-04-26 23:16:20 +0000 UTC]

yay owo

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