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Published: 2014-09-01 20:28:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 1216; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 4
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Description Yes, there's still some stuff missing, first off the tail of course. It's not just a simple "stab and cut" weapon, there's much more to it, but I'm not gonna tell that yet.


This is Retrack however, a female.... Cybertronian (OH THE SECRETS!) - I made for the roleplay on

Er, okay, I guess I should say SOME things...mh...

Mh, okay, first, question: Vee, what is this? Some fuckin robot cat?

Yes. and no. Actually I took the looks of an ozelot as a template 8D but no, she would probably kill you if you called her a cat (notreallykillinreal)
Her intelligent is not below that of a "normal" Transformer, and yes, she also speaks just like that.

All that is known about her origins - and why she's different - so far emerges from what she said to the two bots who found her outside the Autobot base:

"I am not one of you Top-siders, you two leggers."

(or somethinglikethatwhateverIrp'ed there *AHEM*)

So apparently she hates normal 'Formers. THERE MUST BE REASONS FOR THAT - and I tell you: THERE ARE! But you gonna have to find out (cuz I'm so clever with all my conspiracy).

Maybe the symbol on her forehead might give you a hint? Come on, if you're from Cybertron, you sure know

But I guess that only throws up more questions.
V:Β  -_-
Me: okay okay I stop, here's some stuff about her:


Weapons: Claws, teeth; Tail (for once, the knive-like appartures that split appart when she feels threatend, for seconds, well.....???)
Task (sorry I don't remember what it's called) : Would be probably something like scientist, she has alot of knowledge about the mysteries of Cybertron, relics, and all that regarding, but also general sciency stuff u know like... sciency stuff (I'm so lame, just gimme a chance to proof it)
er, and Scout (CUZWHYNOTshe's good at sneakin around)

Affiliation: Currently with the autobots, she wants to become one (just met)

Recent affiliations with Decepticons or Neutrals: She remains silent about it, but there has defently been SOMETHING






I'm getting the feeling I'm building in TOO many secrets *sigh* I'm sorry, guys, but I first had one roleplay, I kinda wanna keep this interesting.
Maybe this will help a bit:

Character:
Retrack is cautious if not hostile to new things, be it persons or objects. That may well come from some bad experiences in the past. She openly shows some hostility against "normal" bots, as she seems to have something against everyone who's different than her.
She states that she doesn't care about the factions, she just wants to see Cybertron being restored to its old glory and health. At least she knows of Megatron's act in Primus' shutdown (relying on the War for Cybertron/TF Prime universe here) and this seems to be enough reason for her to chose the Autobots over the Decepticons. Further more, she seems to really hate the Cons, tough that may have personal reasons too.

Retrack is zynical, sarcastic and doesn't stop to say what she thinks, even (or especially) if it hurts someone else.
At least that's the first impression she gives.
But who knows? Maybe it's just an outer hard shell that needs to crack to reveal what's beneath....




I want to point out that my OC is NOT a Mary-Sue
She's not a skilled warrior, she rushes forward and relies on instincts and diception in battle. Her weapons being solely for close combat make her vulnerabel since she needs to get up close with her opponent.
She can die by the following things: Beheaded, blown-up, spark-rip out (aka the bay-verse death, see also "spine-rip-out" >_>), stabbed by a sword often enough or at the right place (armor's not too thick at certain body parts as seen in the drawing), tossed in a smelting pit, falling from high places, dying by Tarn's voice (hurrhurr), KILLED BY A SPARK-EATER- OKAY I THINK I'VE MADE MY POINT



I'll soon post an update (if I'm not too lazy bussy)
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Comments: 22

BlondeFromHell [2014-09-26 01:35:10 +0000 UTC]

This is still amazing to look at ^_^

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BirdGVee In reply to BlondeFromHell [2014-09-26 06:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - again.

and yes, I have to send you those concept sheets. er... some TIME...when I think of it. actually they are so crappy I don't think you'll be able to do much with em

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BlondeFromHell In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-26 11:16:46 +0000 UTC]

It'll be alright, send them to me! I'll color them and we can look at them.

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BirdGVee In reply to BlondeFromHell [2014-09-26 18:38:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, my friend, but I fear that I don't really have a sketch that describes him full body. And I really want to do it right first. I don't know when I'll get time to do it, so I guess it may take some while until you'll get something to color. I hope you forgive me...

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BlondeFromHell In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-26 20:10:00 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, take all the tune you need, but that comic about how Kim and Steadfast meet, I can color that, if you want.

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Nerwen-Ancalime [2014-09-10 04:10:52 +0000 UTC]

BTW dude, this guy is totally awesome! Great design and char bio

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BirdGVee In reply to Nerwen-Ancalime [2014-09-10 07:20:59 +0000 UTC]

thaaanks

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Nerwen-Ancalime In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-10 07:28:08 +0000 UTC]

heh. Most welcome!!! I love seeing the designs that people come up with and yours has your own natural flair to it with your love of nature and animals and stuff. It's so cool!

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BirdGVee In reply to Nerwen-Ancalime [2014-09-10 08:20:55 +0000 UTC]


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Nerwen-Ancalime In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-13 06:17:34 +0000 UTC]

wha? Can't take a compliment?!?! heehee but it's true, I think it's brilliant!

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BirdGVee In reply to Nerwen-Ancalime [2014-09-13 09:54:29 +0000 UTC]

thaaanks

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Icicle1penguin [2014-09-02 21:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Woah, she's awesome! You did a pretty great job with the detail on her, SO COOL.

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BirdGVee In reply to Icicle1penguin [2014-09-03 07:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

I am quite happy about this because I've been working on this creatures concept since spring I think ... o.O

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Spotlles [2014-09-02 13:02:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow Vee! She looks super awesome!Β 
I think you'd be great at concept-art, maybe you'd even get to make concepts for a Transformers game itself? :3Β 
I mean, wow.Β 
*w*Β 
BLUE EYESΒ 
I'm always for glowy-shiny things. XDΒ 

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BirdGVee In reply to Spotlles [2014-09-02 13:12:06 +0000 UTC]


Thank you

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Owlhana [2014-09-02 00:47:04 +0000 UTC]

I really like her design, and my gosh that is a lot of detail in the painting. O_O Her eyes came out really pretty and her name is pretty cool!

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BirdGVee In reply to Owlhana [2014-09-02 13:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but I just was like "errr. I need a NAME damnit errrr XD"

Btw, forgot what I said last night during the end of the chat. XDDD

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Owlhana In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-02 16:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh hehe xD

Yeah I know

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BirdGVee In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-02 13:11:49 +0000 UTC]

*forget

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BlondeFromHell [2014-09-01 20:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww~ she's so cute!

I've been meaning ask you, can you resend me some of the stuff for Steadfast? I'll color him.

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BirdGVee In reply to BlondeFromHell [2014-09-01 20:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Er, I think there's still stuff missing. But sure I can send you what I've got so far

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BlondeFromHell In reply to BirdGVee [2014-09-01 20:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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