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bk00 — My Heart Belongs With Her
Published: 2011-12-14 18:03:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1178; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 5
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Description All I had ever known was hatred, wanting to be loved

At one point I did have a family, but it was ripped away from me

For some reason, I could only recall this emptiness where my heart should be

This constant dampening feeling in my soul, like being drenched with a heavy rain

But that all changed, when she arrived in my life.

She saw me for who I was really was, told me she wanted to walk by my side

When I tried to leave her, she was willing to follow down my dark path and share my pain

She was not afraid of me for the monster that I was,

And it was her who stopped the rain fall in my heart

For she's someone who never goes back on her word

Never gives up on chasing after me

Always seems to have hope where despair should be

Always believes in me with all her soul.
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Comments: 38

JudgementLord [2012-04-08 22:26:53 +0000 UTC]

I like how this is ambiguous enough to be applied to more than just one fandom, or more than fiction for that matter.

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bk00 In reply to JudgementLord [2012-04-08 23:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so!

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Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-12-19 18:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

I can see a lot of pairings that I like or love to work for this!

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bk00 In reply to Shinwa-Tsuki [2011-12-19 18:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Well it's for four of my favorites that I wrote about.

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Shinwa-Tsuki In reply to bk00 [2011-12-19 20:16:55 +0000 UTC]

Hm. That's okay. One of my favorite pairings this poem relates to is Inuyasha and Kagome from Inuyasha.

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Shippuden23 [2011-12-16 01:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

The comment, I see what you did there

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bk00 In reply to Shippuden23 [2011-12-16 01:29:48 +0000 UTC]

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Radraversion2 [2011-12-15 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]

nice stuff bk00

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bk00 In reply to Radraversion2 [2011-12-16 01:29:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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elementaldragonsword [2011-12-15 07:06:53 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful

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bk00 In reply to elementaldragonsword [2011-12-15 14:30:20 +0000 UTC]

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TalaTati19 [2011-12-15 06:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful

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bk00 In reply to TalaTati19 [2011-12-15 14:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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silentcamellia [2011-12-15 01:02:58 +0000 UTC]

amazing, really... i can't find the right word... but wow, i love it

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bk00 In reply to silentcamellia [2011-12-15 03:54:09 +0000 UTC]

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PenumbraChey [2011-12-15 00:35:11 +0000 UTC]

and who do you ship Juugo with.....?

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bk00 In reply to PenumbraChey [2011-12-15 03:59:00 +0000 UTC]

It's not Juugo...I don't pair anyone with him. The third and fourth perspectives are not from Naruto.

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PenumbraChey In reply to bk00 [2011-12-16 00:00:05 +0000 UTC]

I know I read the comments of others, but you must admit he certainly has that 'monster-vibe' going.

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bk00 In reply to PenumbraChey [2011-12-16 01:23:16 +0000 UTC]

True.

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OftheNewMoon [2011-12-14 21:43:09 +0000 UTC]

I thought for sure this could be Ulquihime, NaruHina, and SasuSaku mainly
Well done

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bk00 In reply to OftheNewMoon [2011-12-14 21:43:52 +0000 UTC]

It is. And SasuSaku!

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JoeyHazelLM [2011-12-14 21:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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bk00 In reply to JoeyHazelLM [2011-12-14 21:19:15 +0000 UTC]

I try.

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Byakurai-x-Anko [2011-12-14 20:48:43 +0000 UTC]


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bk00 In reply to Byakurai-x-Anko [2011-12-14 20:49:38 +0000 UTC]

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Jyukai-Koudan [2011-12-14 19:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it's beautiful written

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bk00 In reply to Jyukai-Koudan [2011-12-14 20:06:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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SeharJH [2011-12-14 19:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Much love for this!

Is it NaruHina? I thought this because of her nindo etc

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bk00 In reply to SeharJH [2011-12-14 20:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

NaruHina is one of them!

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SeharJH In reply to bk00 [2011-12-14 21:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeee Ooh, it applies to other couples too? EVEN MORE LOVE

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bk00 In reply to SeharJH [2011-12-14 21:49:36 +0000 UTC]

It takes about SasuSaku, UlquiHime and IchiRuki.

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the-angry-blob [2011-12-14 18:44:18 +0000 UTC]

I do not understand what pairing this is, but this is really nice! Love it

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bk00 In reply to the-angry-blob [2011-12-14 20:06:02 +0000 UTC]

It's more than one!

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Kiktion [2011-12-14 18:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh... ohh.. It's so beautiful ♥ Can I share it on my tublr.?

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bk00 In reply to Kiktion [2011-12-14 20:05:53 +0000 UTC]

Yes go ahead!

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Lawman09 [2011-12-14 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]

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bk00 In reply to Lawman09 [2011-12-14 18:09:07 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. It can be read as whole or read separately as four different perspectives.

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Lawman09 In reply to bk00 [2011-12-14 18:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, I understand.

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