Comments: 32
Snark567 [2016-02-19 09:13:38 +0000 UTC]
As always your drawings surpass the definition of badass : D
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Tim-Solomon [2015-12-21 19:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Really like the coloring on the dragon, ice, and backgrounds.
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Kaotic-Cass [2015-12-20 00:36:57 +0000 UTC]
Hello, I'm here from ProjectComment .
I really love big, grandiose scenes like this - they tell quite the tale and you always want to see and hear more about what going on (your description definitely adds more to it, but we readers/viewers always want even more, haha). The composition looks really great and the colors you use work really well together to add depth and energy to the image.
(Sorry if any of this sounds weird, I'm kind of a dragon nerd) I also really like the style you've made the dragon. In my journey's on dA, I haven't seen too many Frost Dragons (Draco occidentalis maritium) - so it's really cool to see how you've depicted them. I really like that the simple background and the complex foreground (a neat technique to use) reflect the type of dragon, they all read well together.
Some advice, however, would be to practice your anatomy a bit more. It appears that you tried to fit everything into a smaller space than you needed. But that leaves some areas that need work - such as the dragon's left foot (our left, his right) appears to be too small to appropriately support his weight. From the position he is in, that foot and leg should only be partially visible - the rest going off page.
The humans could also use some work. I would take pictures of you and your friends in those positions to see how large each body part is in comparison to the rest and how the bodies move. If you don't want to take the pictures yourself, you can always look up one of the numerous stock images here on dA that show the poses well. In example for what could be improved, the man (Sven?) in the front's body is facing forward while his shoulders and arms are moved to one side. When swinging a sword in that fashion, the whole torso should move with the swing of the sword with the legs either moving with the body or firmly planted. Depending on thier fighting style.
The last thing I would like to mention is that the eggs kind of blend into the background at first. I would do something to make them stand out more as eggs. It's clear that they are being protected, but you don't notice them at first.
All in all though, this work is fantastic and amazing all the way around. Keep up the great work.
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fireytika [2015-11-29 14:14:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeyy dragon~!! And it's ice dragon! Even better~ At first, i was confused, what are things near dragon's leg. After reading your description, woow those are egg? Really unique! Nice design~ Aww the dragon must be very upset! Kill them~ Kill them with fire..eh ICE!! I like your shading btw~
What a great scene~ Just like reading from a fairy tale~ Your coloring is really great! And look at those details~ There are some issue with anatomy, you can use photo references to help you with difficult pose ^^
Also, their expressions are nice, very suit for this scene! Keep it up your good work! ^^
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fireytika In reply to Black-Rose-92 [2015-12-02 13:22:59 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome~
Yeah, anatomy is pretty tricky~ but i'm sure you will master it in no time, just keep practicing~ ^^
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OnyxFaustus [2015-11-28 22:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Great work! Love the action in this scene
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Aywen-Pasha In reply to Black-Rose-92 [2015-12-02 21:26:36 +0000 UTC]
Haha she is too good! Will Sven ever grow up?
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KunYKA [2015-11-28 17:09:19 +0000 UTC]
yea - killing this scaled beauty is a bad idea
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