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BlindedByLove03 — for my love...

Published: 2005-07-22 15:54:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description this is a poem i wrote after being on vacation for only a few days now its been almost two weeks and i leave tomorrow and go home..love you baby

someone so deep in love
once told me that
you cant turst someone
until you trust yourself
fall in love or be in love
until you love yourself

but trust had always
been an issure until
i met you yet even then
i found it to be difficult
but in time of knowing
the true you
i began to trust you

and with that myself
i began to trust myself
to let go of the past
to be free to be me
itrusted my heart
not to fall for
the same type i always do

he also told me
to always fallow my heart
because it wil always see me through
i followed my heart
and i got something
something completely amazing

he took my breath away
still does to this day
leaves me mesmerized knowing
that someon elike him
and who he used to be
the person he pretended to be
the mask and show he put on
was not the person
he wanted to be with me

with me he could be himself
and i could be the reason for that
and a reason for him to live
he loved me before he ever saw me
so loyal and faithfull
trustworthy and true
i love every little thing he does

no matter what we do
i know our love is true
all i want to be
is the girl of his dreams
fulfill his every desire
meet his every need
let him know
i want him to be happy with me
make his dream a reality like he has done for me

when i fallowed my heart
my heart gave me y ou
i never loved myself enough
to know the difference
of what was based on a lie
not ture just destined to be doomed
just a wanna be fairy tale
taht didnt come ture

but you came along and showed me no form of lie
showed me the true you
brought out the real me
the person i was afraid to be
i cant hide from you
if i do it tears me apart inside
you showed me a love so true and eral

we made our own fairytale
for all to see
people say love doesnt last forever
its true our love wont last forever
our love will last for all eternity and more
there is no puttin an end on our love

i used to think nothing good lasts
your not good you great your everything to me
everything i need the empty part of me
you filled with you love
and now im finally complete
me encanta todo segundo nosotros pasamos juntos
tu es me amor
yo vivo por tu y tu por mi
when im with you
i feel so free
such an incredable
overwhelming feeling
words cannot express
cannot explain

but right now im so far away
from you and all the other people i love
and al who love me and it pains me
i just have the desire to be with you
to be in your arms
the ones that love comfort and protect me so
but do not worry my love
i shall be home soon

tu es me amor...
forever more
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Comments: 13

sadisticpleasures [2005-07-27 02:04:31 +0000 UTC]

if i didin't know you or luke theni would say that you are just setting yourself up for a heartbreak and that you will regret it later and just be another shitty thing in your past. but since i know you two and know you're story, i know it wil last and you two were made for each other. it's a really good poem. glad that you two are finally happy. you guys deserve it.

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BlindedByLove03 In reply to sadisticpleasures [2005-07-27 06:54:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks amanda if i didnt know u i would have been able to let go of my past and someone of my past if u know who i mean i know u do and be able to move on and i dont mean mark...i love you

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sadisticpleasures In reply to BlindedByLove03 [2005-07-27 07:09:31 +0000 UTC]

do you mean wouldn't have? if yes then yes i know who and i didn't help at all with that. that's just you. but your welcome anyways. love ya to.

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FallenSnowsTears [2005-07-24 05:36:06 +0000 UTC]

wow..perfect..in every way..IM glad you could write this for him..hope everything works then..and yay! you'll be home soon! hope you hada nice trip! *favs*

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BlindedByLove03 In reply to FallenSnowsTears [2005-07-25 01:58:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks it took me a couple trys to perfect it to the way it is now at first it was only 1 page then 2 then 3 then 4 but it was worth it in the end

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FallenSnowsTears In reply to BlindedByLove03 [2005-07-27 03:27:55 +0000 UTC]

yep yep! it is always worth it in the end..because whenever I look at this poem, I think nothng but awesome thoughts, and love how hard you worked at it..keep up the great work oki?

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BlindedByLove03 In reply to FallenSnowsTears [2005-07-27 06:53:39 +0000 UTC]

of course i will i have another one im bout to put on here in about a few min

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FallenSnowsTears In reply to BlindedByLove03 [2005-07-30 08:56:40 +0000 UTC]

yay! go for it! Im not that great at catch up for this stuff*been too busy lately* but I'll look for it!!! (=^_^) b

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BlindedByLove03 In reply to FallenSnowsTears [2005-07-25 01:58:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks it took me a couple trys to perfect it to the way it is now at first it was only 1 page then 2 then 3 then 4 but it was worth it in the end

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FallenSnowsTears In reply to BlindedByLove03 [2005-08-02 06:34:21 +0000 UTC]

lolz..well, Jefferson had it right as well..except he took too long for it..in which case..you are lucky..
"I did not fail, I found 1,001 ways not to create a lightbulb"

yeah.. he had the patient of a saint..O_o...
and YES..totally worth it!*loved it to pieces*

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blackrose03 [2005-07-23 04:47:44 +0000 UTC]

thta is really good i know how u feel i will see u soon my love lol


hehe

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Alatariel-Luinwe [2005-07-22 18:30:10 +0000 UTC]

WOW!! thats so good i love it i totally know how u feel aswel!

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BlindedByLove03 In reply to Alatariel-Luinwe [2005-07-22 21:41:47 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks

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