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bloknayrb — Streaks
Published: 2010-12-16 16:33:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1316; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 69
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Just a little something, not my best and not my worst. Critique encouraged, fire away.Related content
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i think its really cool looking, can u imagine being a person on the farside of the planet looking at tthe streaks? nuts. gotta love populated moon too.
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How about instead of commenting on my art here you stay signed in to some kind of chat during the day, huh?
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sry man but I don't like this one. At some parts it looks like you just brushed around (like the soft stars and some parts of the nebula)
And at some parts it looks really detailed (like the dark clouds which are awesome, just a bit too soft)
I don't like the overall look of this picture, its too much color and for me it seems like there isn't any focal point.
The planet would be kind of cool, but it's a lot too sharp.
I'd say use the planet and the dark clouds in the upper part for a new picture and delete the rest, but hey, its your picture
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Well the soft stars are actually being obstructed by part of the nebula. As for some of the more random parts of the nebula that don't make so much sense, well, you're probably right
The composition, also, isn't so great. The planet actually wasn't sharpened at all, every time I tried it looked too sharp so its interesting to hear that.
This isn't my best work, but I posted it because it helped me to get over my slump. You make some good points here that I'll have to remember to keep in mind for my next piece, thanks!
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Oh, such pretty colors! This deserves a full view because there are such lovely details here. Nice job!
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Thanks, I like some of the details too but I'm afraid overall this one wasn't my best by a long shot.
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wow this one looks just like one i have made some time ago.... but seen from an other place 
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Interesting... they do have a certain thematic similarity.
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That's kinda cool man... only thing I notice is on the right the blue seems to stop abruptly (as does part of the reds)
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Those are actually darker clouds obstructing the background nebulae, but I guess if I didn't make that clear that's a fault in and of itself
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ok... are we talking about the same spot....
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Maybe not? To which part are you referring?
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All the way to the right, about 1/2 way down.
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Not sure I see what you see there... Either way this isn't exactly a masterpiece, I'm just sick of tweaking it
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Think not 
Yeah, cool colours in this, nice to see something bright and doesn't have to conform to "realism" but I also feel more needs to be done to break up that orange/blue border. Or maybe blue is just too much contrast, could look better if that was green or purple
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Yeah, over to the right (really at the edge of the image), near center (top to bottom), and yes where the orange and blue abruptly end.
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Haha and the rest not so much?
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Haha, no. Just that part especially.
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