Comments: 16
Butch007 [2016-03-02 21:25:10 +0000 UTC]
The realism, expression and color here is quite striking as is the tension of the moment depicted. You should be proud.
Of the potential problems I see most have to do with inconsistent light source/brightness:
The collar bone is too light and needs more blending. Also, it's almost straight when collar bones are curved. The effect is that it starts to flatten an otherwise voluminous image in a very 3 dimensional space you've created.
the spatter on the shoulders is too patterned as it and also begins to flatten the image in an undesirable way.
You do often want contrasting color to enhance dimensionality, but the yellow coral/shell bra cups seem like too little to late (it feels like there's just not enough space to really get them in this image IMO) They're too bright to believably fall in line with the lighting range of the rest of the scene. Probably something in the blue-purple range and probably half the brightness seems like it would fit better. The screen color blend mode is awesome when you go too dark, but overuse can hurt too.
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MiinjyArt [2016-01-07 04:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow the glow is beautiful! The colors harmonize well! *7* Stunning artwork!
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