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bluesun360 — No name flower.
Published: 2011-12-22 15:18:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 280; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 2
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Description I got you a flower
with out a name
you threw it away
what a shame
it must not be that important
to you I sent it
but you did not keep it
I thought maybe you liked me
I guess that's not true
but who knows
maybe in a month or two
you'll like me
and buy me a flower
at school.
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Comments: 8

silentcamellia [2011-12-26 01:54:26 +0000 UTC]

aww, i know i'm being nosy, but what happened?

btw: i like the poem, it was good

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bluesun360 In reply to silentcamellia [2011-12-26 01:59:35 +0000 UTC]

well a school they sell flowers some times and so I like this guy so I got him one. they give the flowers out at 8th period.so after school I always walk passed him in the hallway and I didn't see any flower in his hands so I think he might have throwen it out.............................

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silentcamellia In reply to bluesun360 [2011-12-26 02:46:32 +0000 UTC]

oh damn , maybe he kept it in his backpack?

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bluesun360 In reply to silentcamellia [2011-12-26 03:28:02 +0000 UTC]

we arnt alowed to cary backpacks around in school untill the end of the day

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nc1394 [2011-12-22 15:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I like the poem, for future reference spell check before you post and make sure it is all correct

I believe you meant "threw it away", "Guess that's not true", and "month or two"

few mistakes it happens...other than that great job keep writing.

I would really love if you could check out my poetry too.

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bluesun360 In reply to nc1394 [2011-12-22 15:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah thanks for the fave and thanks for pointing out my spelling errors

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nc1394 In reply to bluesun360 [2011-12-22 16:08:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem just trying to help

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bluesun360 In reply to nc1394 [2011-12-22 22:43:43 +0000 UTC]

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