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This is the pg. before the splash pg. I posted. I'm hoping to score points on my perspective here. Nothing too difficult or fancy. Let me know how it looks people.Related content
Comments: 16
very nice
you chose some great "camera angles" for these panels
makes for a fun gander
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looks really cool, i'll be here hoping you finish it
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It is really awesome!
I can't wait to see the completed page!
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Hah, I wonder if your publisher would like it if you drew him a gargantuan cityscape. That would get some lovin' points.
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Perspective of the first panel is good. That Wolverine in the last panel looks so kick-ass...!
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I like the perspective in the last panel (bottom right corner)
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I like the perspective in the last panel (bottom right corner)
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just a few suggestions:
make wolvie alot bigger in the last panel
change the back wall in the first panel so its not a square door opening but more in perspective coming closer towards the right side and avoid making the ground in panel one a single line as it means the camera is IN the floor.
hope this helps ;D keep up the good work
adam
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'thanx alot man. I'll expirement and see if I can do it.
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this looks great man, i really love shot in the last panel!
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So the perspectives are pretty much good then?
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The perspective looks good, especially the figures in the first panel. Good luck with this btw!
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