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BombOPAUL — Desert Gremlin fixing up

Published: 2011-09-20 02:32:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 962; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 9
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Description so yeah, after the critique that our deviant buddy made on my critique i managed to fix this in a few minutes and i was amazed of how well it looks next to the old one, instead of the light background i decided to make the setting a little darker to show the effect of the light bulb eyes and to make it look like if it were on a hangar

then again I want to thanks all the people who faved and commented this and the ones who learned with the video critique, this is my way of saying thanks to Sinix for giving us the nice tricks and pointing out the stuff that needed work

cheers
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Comments: 16

manaista [2013-01-23 04:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, now I'm curious to see what the old one looked like.

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BombOPAUL In reply to manaista [2013-01-23 12:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to search my gallery. The old one is much more cartoon looking

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manaista In reply to BombOPAUL [2013-01-26 20:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Will do buddy, and you are more than welcome to do the same.

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BombOPAUL In reply to manaista [2013-01-27 02:43:38 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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HolloW-Darklight [2011-10-01 17:04:00 +0000 UTC]

this one is pretty damn cool

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BombOPAUL In reply to HolloW-Darklight [2011-10-02 03:44:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks mang. i really apreciate that

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funkychinaman [2011-09-20 05:44:10 +0000 UTC]

much better

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BombOPAUL In reply to funkychinaman [2011-09-20 14:21:51 +0000 UTC]

;D

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sinix [2011-09-20 03:21:34 +0000 UTC]

Very solid improvement! This feels like a big step forward. You could do a bunch of random thumbnail designs and bring the interesting ones up to this level and you would be well on your way to building a very functional industrial design portfolio. In the future, you could probably make your ground shadows a bit looser, flatter, and lighter, you don't want them distracting the silhouttes at all.

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BombOPAUL In reply to sinix [2011-09-20 14:23:43 +0000 UTC]

ok man. i will. Thanks for everything and I'll be on the look out for more of your pieces and videos to lear much more. you have been of great help thank you.

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AngelicAdonis [2011-09-20 02:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Very well done man! Great job on the touch ups!

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BombOPAUL In reply to AngelicAdonis [2011-09-20 02:40:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks dude, Sinix was fun to have as a critic, if you havent seen the vid just check out the journal. but yeah i can see the high difference of the drawing

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AngelicAdonis In reply to BombOPAUL [2011-09-20 17:35:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Very cool!

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YUY1TO [2011-09-20 02:35:40 +0000 UTC]

much much much better dude! hey look at mine! XP me like this remake, looks way way better! keep it up!

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BombOPAUL In reply to YUY1TO [2011-09-20 02:39:14 +0000 UTC]

loco lo vi, y chequea el coment, pero yeah estoy muy muy satisfecho con este

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YUY1TO In reply to BombOPAUL [2011-09-20 02:42:32 +0000 UTC]

grax!

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