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Published: 2011-12-16 21:07:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 27666; Favourites: 1143; Downloads: 817
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Description READ!! THE!!! DESCRIPTION!!!! (its 25% of whole work that I wasn't able to show here).

Nights passed and Luna was always, all alone. She couldn't understand why Ponys dont like her beautiful night. Days of loneliness turned into weeks, months, years. During that time her only companion was non-existing pony, that she called Nightmare. Luna talked to her like she was real living creature, telling her all thoughts and secrets.
One day, after a serious quarrel with Celestia, Luna went into her private chamber. There for long time she cried, feeling deep grief and anger growing in her heart. It was at this moment she heard a voice in hear head. A voice of Nightmare.
N - Why so sad my dear?
L - What? Who was that? - Luna looked around only to see empty room, hidden in the shadows.
N - Its me. Nightmare...your only friend.
L - But your not real.
N - Ooo... but you wanted me to be real and so... here I am.
L - But...how....
N - Thats not important my dear child. The only thing that matters right now, is you and the truth.
L - Truth about what?
N - You want me to tell you? Fine. You want to know why ponys love the Day but ignores your glories night. Isn't that right?
L - Yes....
N - So use Celestial tears to discover it!
L - NO! I.... I cant... I shouldn't do it.
N - Oh... are you afraid that Celestia will shout at you?
L - No, its just that.....
N - Then do it!
Luna knew that it was the only way to find out the real reason behind this whole situation with ponys. She concentrated on this one thought with all her heart and mind. She had to want it more than anything else.
After few seconds, first tear dropped into the pool of tears she shed moments ago. It stated to glow with strange light creating hardly visible picture of something.
Another tear made it a little bit more distinct. After the third one the picture was all to well clear.
And it was mark of her sister.
N - Now you see who is the one responsible for everything!
L - But....Tia wouldn't do this....she.....
N - She did this Luna, she turned all ponys to love her day and forget about your night.
L - No, no, no....it can't be true!!
N - You know all to well, that Celestial tears never lie. - And it was true. Celestial tears always show only truth, but ONLY when the one that calls their power is alone.
Yet Luna wasn't alone. Nightmare was there, maybe not in body but in spirit, able to change the vision Luna saw.

Pic that won in my voting. Hope you like it

BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT


MLP: FIM, Luna and Nightmare moon belongs to their rightful owners.
Art and little story is mine.

EDIT - 1000 VIEWS IN LESS THAN A DAY? THATS THE BEST THING THAT COULD HAPPEN TO ME FOR EVERYONE WHO GONNA READ THIS......YOU MAKE ME HAPPIEST MAN ON EARTH BRONY FOR EVER!!!!!! AS A GIFT FOR ALL OF YOU IAM GONNA PREPARE SOMETHING NICE THIS WEEK ( no it wont be another pic like this It will be something else, something that waited too long to be seen)

EDIT 2 - 2000 VIEWS IN LIKE 2 DAYS? Thank you all! MY NEW RECORD!
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Comments: 134

Thejboy88 [2012-01-17 21:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


As I've said to many people on DeviantArt, I judge images not only by the skill taken to make the picture, but also in that picture's ability to cause me to feel an emotion. This picture scores highly in that regard. When I look at this, I immediately feel sympathy for the character of Luna. Having to endure a dark alter-ego, being made to think unpleasant things about someone so closer to her as her sister. The entire piece has a sense of loneliness about it, one that makes the watcher want to comfort the character. Any picture that can pull that off is high-quality in my books.

But if that was all I had to say about it, it would be doing the picture a great disservice. The reason being is that the art style istelf is also very impressive. I know I've said in the past that I give credit to those who can make their work more in-keeping with the look of the source material, but this particular style works well. here. It's not overly-complicated, the characters are still well within their original designs and there are no errors here that lead me to think of it as a sub-standard effort.

However, the one areas it does disappoint in is originality. I have seen many pictures concerning an interaction between these two characters in the past and as such the picture falls behind somewhat in that regard. But for me, just because something is unoriginal, doesn't mean it doesn't have a worth in it's own right, and this picture is a prime example of that concept.

A fine picture from a fine artist, well worth looking at.

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Bonaxor In reply to Thejboy88 [2012-01-17 23:01:42 +0000 UTC]

Never thought that someone gonna write a Critique on that I'm so pleased that you liked it. Thank you m8. A BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERY WORD YOU WROTE HERE

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Thejboy88 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-19 09:28:25 +0000 UTC]

Appreciate the hug. Glad you liked the critique

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MaskedFrenchman [2014-10-30 14:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Would you be interested in doing requests for compensation? I would love to hire you!

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Luna-Soresodthe [2014-10-13 14:54:52 +0000 UTC]

One has the feeling of loneliness and sadness Β ,

but it's kind of sad and painful story.Β Β 

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solomix25249 [2014-01-27 04:46:02 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful love your ideas

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wolfgurl007 [2013-12-05 17:37:13 +0000 UTC]

lllllllllllllllooove llllllllllllllloooooooooooooveeeeeeeeeee lllooove. yay

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cpadil [2013-10-26 07:55:10 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful picture

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oolaaylasienn [2013-05-14 01:12:33 +0000 UTC]

LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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simslover102 [2013-05-13 19:11:31 +0000 UTC]

so so saad!

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MoonieStarSky [2013-02-10 04:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Moonspace: you're not the only one who feels this way princess.

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Talon-the-Cyberfox [2013-01-30 21:56:32 +0000 UTC]

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mylittletabbycat [2013-01-11 18:49:35 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful...

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Venom2204 [2012-10-14 16:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Pooe Luna

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Koneko-Arts [2012-09-09 00:17:33 +0000 UTC]

I really love this picture!!! its so amazing....tho one thing does concern me....does Luna have 5 legs? o.O or am i seeing that wrong? ^.^"

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Bonaxor In reply to Koneko-Arts [2012-09-09 08:59:52 +0000 UTC]

This... additional leg you see its her wing

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Koneko-Arts In reply to Bonaxor [2012-09-09 15:22:59 +0000 UTC]

oho i see now

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Killercroc024 [2012-08-28 15:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Poor Luna!

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DragonmanX-90 [2012-08-18 03:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Poor Luna, I'm more of a night owl myself so the Night has at least one big fan.

This picture and the text you wrote are very solid, keep up the good work.

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schneelocke [2012-06-26 23:29:29 +0000 UTC]

I love the image, and the story added quite a bit to it.

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KairiTsukino163 [2012-05-28 03:50:17 +0000 UTC]


You okay there, Kairi?
Look at le pic and le story.
Kairi? Y U NO FOUND THIS EARLIER?? IT'S EPIC!!!!!!

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SailorRayearth [2012-04-07 04:41:39 +0000 UTC]

would you mind if I used this in a PMV? I'll send you a link and credit of course.

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Rosebuddy123 [2012-03-19 14:24:31 +0000 UTC]

MIND MELD! I imagined Nightmare Moon was like that to Luna too! Sweetness!

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The-Dark-Lord-Link [2012-02-07 01:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work!

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Klice [2012-01-06 16:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Just passing to say I love it !

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Bonaxor In reply to Klice [2012-01-06 19:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Stay for longer and see my comic Ill be uploading next pages soon so there is something to wait for

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1vonreich123 [2012-01-05 04:32:18 +0000 UTC]

the truth must be known my queen




(terrific job on this one, you've out done yourself)
(out done is a good thing right?)

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Bonaxor In reply to 1vonreich123 [2012-01-05 08:06:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8 In the future iam gonna make more of that kind of art. For now i have to focus on my comic Coma back and see my "bad guys" and read the first pages. Hope you like it.

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1vonreich123 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-05 14:34:20 +0000 UTC]

oh I will I will

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AuroraChiaro [2011-12-21 23:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow you drew her very beautifully hun

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Bonaxor In reply to AuroraChiaro [2011-12-22 07:27:02 +0000 UTC]

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VampireNerd13 [2011-12-21 22:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Great picture and snippet! Poor Luna!

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Bonaxor In reply to VampireNerd13 [2011-12-22 07:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Yea poor ( I dont like seeing Luna sad) yet if we cant see some evil stuff in the show than we artists must create it, to show how it could be if only MLP was for older audience. Still i hope this show will never become teenagers show cuz its great as it is

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VampireNerd13 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-23 03:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Very true!

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Thejboy88 [2011-12-21 20:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Nightmare Moon, you monster! Leave Luna alone!

She suffers for a millenea because of you! And her sister with her!

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Bonaxor In reply to Thejboy88 [2011-12-21 21:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Nightmare Moon is so bad Pony yet SOOO stupid....to think that she allowed Twilight and the others to get to the Elements. Y U NO KILL THEM?

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Kitimisu [2011-12-21 00:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful lighting!

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Bonaxor In reply to Kitimisu [2011-12-21 07:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much That was the hardest part of it

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timfortune9 [2011-12-20 22:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of the song "Confrontation" from "Jekyll & Hyde"

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UMSAuthorLava [2011-12-19 15:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Nightmare Moon is such a mean meanie-pants - especially to Luna!

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Emperor-of-Old-Ones [2011-12-19 14:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Excellent pice of art. "Secret society" hehe more like a sect or coven to me, but if you like it.... The Esoteric Order of Painters would do.

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PurrElise [2011-12-19 10:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Just gorgeous, but so sad too...;3;

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Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-18 20:21:35 +0000 UTC]

So this thing here... got featured on equestria daily (yeah i searched for it because of what i will say just after this)...
In less than a day it have nearly 2k views,and on your main page... it say that 600 people came here in the last 2 days.

Cela ne veut dire qu'une seule chose! Je te dΓ©clare la guerre Bonaxor! I am going to do better than this >:U!
IT IS ON!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

XD ok I think I overdid it lol. Maybe not the war... But some kind of healthy competition >:3...Involving nukes...and stuff...
Oh and I nearly forgot to comment about the pic XD! Mhh,was it done with SAI?

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-18 20:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Of course it was made in SAI what did you expected.

Iam not gonna comment about other stuff....or......maybe....i will?......

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Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-18 21:01:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't know... SIt's how the painting is,made me feel like you don't... don't idk how to tell it ,it's all blury in my mind XD

You will

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-18 21:30:49 +0000 UTC]

You think that what software i used? GIMP? SAI? Maybe Photoshop?
Let me clear some things out. My very first pictures were made in GIMP. But since "Astral Battle" pic i started using ONLY SAI. Photoshop is too expensive for me to buy so.... you get the idea

MLP:FIM taught me one thing friend. Love, friendship, tolerance above everything else. Forget war, we got A LOT of them already on our poor planet . Forget everything that is bad cuz it only make us EVIL. Competition? Thats a good thing and bad, at the same time.

Mostly bad cuz when one person wins, the other starts to HATE the winner. Dont say that its not true. Humans are animals with alien DNA and God souls, yet this animal side, that is deep within us, control us for most of the time.

So i say NO to any competition between us. I prefer cooperation, working together to achieve greater goal. Sadly I dont know how to do it as we live in two different countries.

Told you I will comment on the rest of your post.

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Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-18 21:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Nah,SAI... but it offer so much things,yet for me it seems that you do'nt use all of the possibilities... (that's a lot of i for a single word lol)

Oh yeah XD Well i did not ment the war with anger and swords and etc XD ... but i love swords :c... >.< anyway.
Then what shall we doooo D:!?

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-18 21:57:45 +0000 UTC]

It offer so much YET iam still discovering its secrets For now I was learning from this video [link]
If you have any other good videos in mind plz link me to them.

And other thing. I never wanted my pony art to be so artistic as is yours. I stick to show models as close as i can and create something that looks kinda nice to me. Ill try to make my comic book, that for now iam gonna focus on, to look like it was taken out from the show.

As for the rest.....I DONT KNOW

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Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-18 22:22:16 +0000 UTC]

ouhh,background ponies.... THANKS WITHOUT YOU I WOULD NEVER HAVE DISCOVERED THIS ;u;!
Mhh...These are not about ponies,but i use them to learn things about painting ...Still want?

You mean yours aren't as artistic as mine?...
A comic ?!

WE NEED TO CREATE OUR SECRET SOCIETY OF PAINTERS. ?

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-18 22:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Sure i want. But mostly i NEED some videos of COMIC creation. How to do it fast and nice.

We both m8 present different aspects of art. Both are different. AND THATS GOOD!!!! More diversity makes this world better and more interesting. I would like to call us Keepers (something like angel but more human like) Each keeper is good in different aspect of art.

YEAAAAA COMMMIIICCCC buahahaha....

SECRET?..... SOCIETY?.... OF PAINTERS? Sounds intriguing.... Tell me more

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