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Published: 2012-06-19 21:19:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 39089; Favourites: 1217; Downloads: 982
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Play this before you read. [link]Twilight -Sisters! Today, in this very hour WE shall stand against those that ....
Pinkie -Twilight, you don't have to scream like that. We are right next to you.
Twi - Yea I know I just wanted to try one of those speeches I learned yesterday.
Rarity - Darling I think you should save your strength for our enemies.
Dash - Yea .. especially that they are already here. - Whole group walk on broken wall only to see entire Elementals army marching toward their position. They, the Great Six are the final hope for the survival of Canterlot, Last Bastion of Equestria. Twilight looks around yet she cannot count enemy troops.
Twi - There is TOO many of them. - At this moment Fluttershy is back.
Shy - Girls... I think there might be six thousand of them. Eclipse send all his troops for this final assault. I fear that this might be our last stand my friends.
Dash - Only 6000? HA! Each one of us will take 1000 and we are good.
Rarity - Yea I'm with Rainbow Dash. We can DO IT!
Pinkie - Me too. Lets take them down.
Shy - I agree with all of you. We can win this if we work as a team.
AJ - So lets give them all we got girls. For one last time, lets STAND TOGETHER!
Twi - FOR EQUESTRIA! FOR ENTIRE WORLD!
The Great Six, heroes of Equestria. Those that Princess Luna enhanced with powers of the Elements of Harmony.
Twilight was given magical powers that are almost equal with Alicorn magic.
Fluttershy was changed, her bones became hard as steel, her wings became bigger, stronger, able to cut every possible stone into pieces.
Rarity now able to use her powers to power-up magic crystal that she can use in her guns, or as a grenade.
Rainbow Dash is now able to control the weather in a way like Storm from X-men. Also she can travel with speed of lightning.
Pinkie Pie known as Silent Laugh can enter enemy mind and rip it into pieces. All they hear is echo of her never ending laugh.
Apple Jack now is the strongest pony that ever lived. Her kick can break stones, her skin is capable of withstanding high temperatures or most dangerous attacks.
Ponies that long time ago you saved from death, now return in full glory.
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Very nice piece you've made here my friend. I like how you tried to get their new powers to fit their personality, I say tried because I fell that Fluttershy's and Rarity's power didn't fit them to well but beside that this is well constructed and just looks nice. I personally felt that being able to see the enemy army would of been very nice but that's just me. Also I think Applejack and Pinkies armor could use a little tweaking, that helmet doesn't seem to look right on Applejack and the face mask on Pinkie... I don't know it just looks... odd especially since she also has a tiara on her head. Face masks are usually worn by a feral warrior and a tiara just doesn't fit well with that kind of armor. I still like this one but it defiantly needs a little work to be as good as it could be.
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I think the face mask, tiara combo adds a randomness factor,which suits Pinkie.
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I am not an artist, only a viewer. Be for warned e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Background/Backdrop:
This for me is the most obvious so I'm gonna start here. Detail, little to none. The lines for them to me look good because of the verying line thinkness and their arn't to many parallel lines. The stones themselves look flat. Toss some roughness on those babies, e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
RD's shadow btw is noticably not right. If its casting over and edge like that it should stretch down a bit.
The flooring/wall Twilight is standing on is wider at her rear feet and thinner at her front, platforming issues anyone? Also the same stone her front hoof is on, the line breaking up that stone should'nt be their or continue on down after the edge, plus its at a weird angle making it look like the rock curves down unless thats what you wanted it to look like.
The grass, to many to long to close to the same height and distance. Toss in some smaller blades and give them a bit of a curve to them, that might help.
Characters:
Character line thinkness looks about he same for alot of the lines, some need to be thinker some thinner. Body shading
Twilights breast and Pinkies back armors look flat and square. The breast plate also looks like it was drawn at the wrong angle, its to front facing.
RDs eye brow, much to thick.
Ok thats all for now, sorry for the half ass critque, it late in my time zone. Hope this helps, bye.
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Ooooh!! awesome. If this happens in the show, I swear...
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Is it weird that Pinkie Pie's appearance's makes me think of Bane from the Dark Knight series.Β
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No, I agree, the mask has an uncanny resemblance.
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An interesting title for Rarity would be the "Diamond Mercenary."
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Lo there do I see my father, Lo there do I see my mother, my Sisters and my brothers , Lo there do I see the line of my people, back to the beginning. Lo, they do call me, they bid me take my place among them, in the halls of Valhalla, where the brave may live forever
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NOW MY FRIENDS!!! *raises sword* TO BATTLE!!!
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When the picture was minimized, I swear that AJ looked like a hotdog...
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The first thing I noticed was Fluttershy's wings...
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Where did you come up with the concept for this.
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What do you think of my new, improved version?
[link]
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This can play while they fight for the future of Equestria [link]
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So now Rainbow... can RIDE THE LIGHTNING?
*wink wink*
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FOR THE MUFFIIIIIIINNNNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Forgive me I'm wrong but I had gotten the empresstion that you don't care much for the mane six? Mostly thanks to the text in this pic [link]
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Most epic 5 minutes of my day! 
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excellent move adding the link to the epic song. made an already awesome picture over 9000 times more badass. well done
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Love each of their outfits! Awesome job on each of them!
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What happened to Fluttershy's wing? *GASP* Did it got ripped of?!?!
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There are 2 options
1. The gore option. Yes her wings... both.. were ripped off.
2. The nice version. No. Her bones were changed during spell Luna used on all of them. Her bones became strong like steel, and wings turned into this super, mechanical like, structure.
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Ohh... I get it now! Still looks little freaky but the picture is nice!
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This is simply epic. Although I doubt that Equestria would go to war in the show, it'd be amazing if a movie were made about said subject.
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Nightsky: I NEED DRAGONZORD POWER!!!! *plays fluit and dragonzord rises from the sea* NOW GO DRAGONZORD AND DESTROY THE GREAT SIX!!!
Dragonzord; MMWMWWAAHA!
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If this were a fanfiction...I'd read it straight off.
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"Farewell, and may the blessings of Ponies and Griffons and all Free Folk go with you. May Lunas stars shine upon your faces!"
And so the Elements of Harmony set out on their quest from Canterlot. Many others of Celestia's ponies stood in the shadows and watched them go, bidding them farewell with soft voices...
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Just a small question, but has this replaced Team Awesome as your primary interest now? It's been a while since you added anything to their tumblr.
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Yea I know that my Tumblr lack updates, but its cause this... boring thing, I had to find something else to do for a time being. But now, since I made that Im getting back to TA, and I want to finally get rid of evil Eclipse from TA Tumbler and change him into this good teenager.
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