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Published: 2007-01-09 02:10:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 16
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Description Well, this is my first real attempt at anything like this, so there are a lot of mistakes and a lot I am satisfied with.

The model here is my friend, Jackie, who is sometimes referred to as a fallen angel. Hence the title. XD

Feel free to tear me a new one with your commentary.
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bonerhole In reply to ??? [2007-10-09 06:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. This was my first try at anything like this and it really shows. The light was indeed coming head on, that's why the shading is like that. I'm not too pleased with it overall, especially those damned eyelashes, but it was a marked improvement in my abilities at the time, so it holds a special place inside.

I've kinda begun to move away from this area in my drawing and have decided to stick with what I'm good at and making strides in improving my skills in that area. And that of course, is monsters and various other filthy things.

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Ashreila In reply to bonerhole [2007-10-10 03:50:38 +0000 UTC]

It helps to know human anotomy as humanity s the greatist monster of all.

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bonerhole In reply to Ashreila [2007-10-10 16:10:45 +0000 UTC]

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rawrillbonku [2007-04-28 02:39:44 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty, I'm trying to perfect my technique on things such as this. VERY WELL DONE!!

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bonerhole In reply to rawrillbonku [2007-04-29 01:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! My portrait drawing have been put on the back burner for a while until I get some new paper. We'll see where it goes from here.

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DetoxSun [2007-04-01 06:40:28 +0000 UTC]

When I first looked at the preview of this, I thought it was a photo. I took a closer look and I saw that you have EXTREME talent for details. Good job!

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bonerhole In reply to DetoxSun [2007-04-01 07:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

I am still a lowly noob when it comes to portraits. I'm kind of taking a little break from them because the paper I am using is crap and leaves them looking very grainy.

But I will keep pluggin' away and try to improve as fast as I can.

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DetoxSun In reply to bonerhole [2007-04-01 21:45:43 +0000 UTC]

It always sucks when the paper you use isn't exactly want you had in mind. I used to use computer paper when I did stuff like you do, but it always smudged horribly. Grainy paper actually makes it look textured, I think, and it makes it the more realistic. Anyways, whatever paper it is, I like it.

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bonerhole In reply to DetoxSun [2007-04-01 22:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just want to experiment with all sorts of paper types. Being self-taught, I really don't have any experience with all manner of materials, so I use what I can get.

Thanks!

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zardo [2007-03-19 12:58:47 +0000 UTC]

it looks like a photo

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bonerhole In reply to zardo [2007-03-19 16:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I hope to be able to get all of my drawings photo-realistic soon.

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FallenAngelKayala [2007-02-05 02:12:43 +0000 UTC]

The eyes are wonderful (I doodle eyes everywhere; love to draw them. ) ,but the hair seems flat.. (I know, hair's a b*tch to draw..I can't ever get it right myself...). I can't really give much advice as far as making it better (I quit drawing a while back b/c of lack of time to actually get anything done), so I won't say anything that will potentially mess you up... You did a wonderful job on the eyes, though. ~My friend just walked up, and didn't believe me when I told him it was a drawing...so yeah, you did a very good job, hun. ~

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bonerhole In reply to FallenAngelKayala [2007-02-05 05:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! Yeahh this was my first ever try at this sort of thing so there are a ton of mistakes. Especially the eyelashes... I really blew it there LoL. I have gotten comments with people thinking it was a photoshopped pic so I am glad I did this well, but I intend to improve greatly.

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FallenAngelKayala In reply to bonerhole [2007-02-05 18:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Eyelashes are kind of a pain too... Yeah, practice helps a lot... Just keep trying to draw faces, and if you need references or want a particular pose or facial expression, let me know and I'll take some shots (if you want to work from photos. )

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bonerhole In reply to FallenAngelKayala [2007-02-05 20:49:49 +0000 UTC]

OoOoOoOoOoOoOo... Another potential model.

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FallenAngelKayala In reply to bonerhole [2007-02-05 20:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Always...

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bonerhole In reply to FallenAngelKayala [2007-02-05 21:18:17 +0000 UTC]

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FallenAngelKayala In reply to bonerhole [2007-02-05 21:18:54 +0000 UTC]

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rcsi1 [2007-01-19 02:43:03 +0000 UTC]

this is great! i luv how you shaded the hair! and no the "mistakes" are NOT noticible. thumbs up

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bonerhole In reply to rcsi1 [2007-01-19 05:48:22 +0000 UTC]

*cough*eyelashes*cough*

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VergilSharky [2007-01-18 07:42:23 +0000 UTC]

wow i didn't know a fallen angel's eyes are so pretty

great job i think add some more darker shades for the shadows like eye behind the hair. just my opinion

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bonerhole In reply to VergilSharky [2007-01-18 07:55:03 +0000 UTC]

I agree. This was my first try so I really had no idea what I was doing.

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VergilSharky In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-18 08:26:19 +0000 UTC]

you did great
for a first time its really good

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bonerhole In reply to VergilSharky [2007-01-18 09:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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VergilSharky In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-21 09:02:28 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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bonerhole In reply to VergilSharky [2007-01-21 09:44:46 +0000 UTC]

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thedancingemu [2007-01-13 14:01:49 +0000 UTC]

i think it looks very nice, the shading is good, especially in the depths of the eyes.
one thing i would have done difffferently would be to define the eyelashes i little more, its kind of hard to discern them from the shading around the eye.

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bonerhole In reply to thedancingemu [2007-01-13 20:34:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

Yeah, those eyelashes really suck. We'll see some improvement with the next one I do.

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Gemmfyre666 [2007-01-13 02:55:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome for a first attempt

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bonerhole In reply to Gemmfyre666 [2007-01-13 03:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Thankees!

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Gemmfyre666 In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-13 03:15:14 +0000 UTC]

ya welcome

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bonerhole In reply to Gemmfyre666 [2007-01-13 06:31:27 +0000 UTC]

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JoanaRa [2007-01-12 23:10:50 +0000 UTC]

I'de like to see more of those eye rays... if you understand what i mean.

If you wanna understand better please follow this [link] . It's from someone i absolutely admire in what grafitte can be. Perfect use of shading on her part. Try checking the gallery out. You'd be amazed. I wish i could do it like her!

Someday maybe!

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bonerhole In reply to JoanaRa [2007-01-13 03:12:46 +0000 UTC]

You mean eyelashes? Yeah, I really failed in that department with this one.

Thanks for that link! It was an amazing gallery!
Yeah, we can make it to that level someday.
Keep in mind, she is 48 and we are only in our 20's. We have plenty of time to get there.

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JoanaRa In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-13 14:20:07 +0000 UTC]

no... the eye shading... the inside of the iris has something i usually call rays.
the lashes could be a bit darker, that's all.

I know! someday!

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bonerhole In reply to JoanaRa [2007-01-13 19:42:34 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooooohhh! Now I know what you mean!
I'll definitely add those next time.

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JoanaRa In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-13 20:22:17 +0000 UTC]

indeed!

Now you know!

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bonerhole In reply to JoanaRa [2007-01-13 20:26:59 +0000 UTC]

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EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-12 21:05:01 +0000 UTC]

It looks so real! OMG, I thought it was one of those wash-away/grey scale photos! OMG that looks so real! AWSOME

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bonerhole In reply to EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-12 21:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Who's your God now, huh? HUH?!?! XD

Thank you very much for the swell compliments! And double thanks for the fave!

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EcaterinaToutok In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-12 22:55:48 +0000 UTC]

hrr.. you're the man(but I'm still the woman hehehe) It's really gorgeous, you should do more of those by adding something humane to your pictures.. maybe a person and a Chimera, to comare them in size and uhh.. to show the major difference or something XD

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bonerhole In reply to EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-13 04:27:18 +0000 UTC]

That's actually why I am doing these portraits and stuff. I want to make my monsters realistic. That's the ultimate goal!

Yer not a woman yet! XD

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EcaterinaToutok In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-13 04:31:12 +0000 UTC]

And you're not a man yet like I said, a real man is 30 on my calendar.

That's cool! and drawing portraits is addictive.. i'd know XD

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bonerhole In reply to EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-13 05:53:46 +0000 UTC]

XD

I'll see just how addicted I get!

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EcaterinaToutok In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-13 15:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Don't get too addicted because then you can't stop like me

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bonerhole In reply to EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-13 19:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Maybe I don't wanna stop!

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EcaterinaToutok In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-15 14:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm... yup, you're addicted XD

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bonerhole In reply to EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-15 22:02:14 +0000 UTC]

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EcaterinaToutok In reply to bonerhole [2007-01-16 22:04:15 +0000 UTC]

dude! XD

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bonerhole In reply to EcaterinaToutok [2007-01-16 22:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Do you like to dance? lmao

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