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Published: 2004-04-05 11:24:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 686; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 282
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Long time no submitting...
I don't think this is a final work yet, i would like to have your opinion on that. Should i draw a background? I thought of a simple one, like a grey wall, nothing fancy or detailed, but if u think so i could make other thing(s). Or i could leave it as it is if u tell me so...
Besides, i think i could make some improvements in the nose and some slight ones in the hand and in the pencil shading. What do u say?
Just tell me what u think, i'll do what i can. Thanks a lot for everything!
Edit: Some slight corrections made and image enlarged. Maybe more enhancements to come later
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Comments: 50
Hello!
Really glad you like it. Thanks a lot!
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hey, no problem! its really great.
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Thanks! But it's not that perfect, it could be better
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this is definitely me in this picture,,,, ^_^
I ve been in this position for days now... coding and designing my code...
great pict
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It has been my position too, since i've been stuiding for a couple of exams last few days 
Thanks for the nice comment and for the 
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i don't know what is the best to do, i've thinking that it was finish at the first view, i like it very much, but when we think about what you wondering... i just don't know! lol
(LOOOOOOOL.. i'm tired.. now i see that the deviation's name is Wondering.. and i say that in my comments..!! loooooool... it's make me lauuuuuuugh!! (maybe crazy too.. i know lol ))
hihi
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I love crazy people (crazy in the good way, not as crazy as a serial killer 
It seems u like this one and it also seems it passed the idea of... i wonder what it is... or maybe not... or maybe so... I wonder...
Thanks!
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simply beautiful!
The sheer clean-cut look majorly adds to the atmosphere of it.
Though I would say that the name adds a stereotypical element to it,
the image itself is fantastically done. You have a ton of talent!
-Arrowz-
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Your comment makes me blush , i'm really flatered. I see you don't like the title, but it seemed somehow "naked" without it.
Thanks a lot for the wonderfull comment!
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Awesome Awesome....well, I could keep going but it'd get redundant. Suffice to say, I love your art.
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Interesting image there....very smooth....u r definitely getting better
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By the way, i know u like the hands but i would love to know what u DON'T like that much so i can improve it and get better in future works.
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nah i'm not good....and i don't quite like to do this kind of art...i mean through this, i got my skills learnt...but i wanna go to the next level such as drawing from imaginations, digital paintings or some colour stuffs...so much to explore...pencil drawing is juz 1 of my "curious" stage.....ur piece look perfect and there isn't any thing that i don't like, really
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Breeder...
That pencil smells like writting!... and I LIKE IT!
Good work!
!kAOS IS eVERYtHInG In Life!
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It does indeed! Never thought of it that way to tell the truth, but u made me think of it in a different way, my own work!! 
Thanks a lot for that and for the wonderfull comment
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wow, this is good. personally i would leave the background as it is, but really its your call, since a background may look good too. perhaps a little more shading on the nose?
but honestly what do i know?
it is very good.
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Yap, definitly it needs a better shading in the nose. And i decided not to touch the background. At least for now
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Excellent. I think that compositionally, however, a background wouldn't work well. It's an awesome, powerful image without, and any background at all would take away from what you've acheived with it so far.
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Do u think so? I'll have that in mind. To tell the truth i don't think i'll add a background, but i'll correct the nos and some minor shading, and i'll reduce the white margin a bit. Thanks a lot for the constructive critic and for the support.
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I think the shading in the hand looks very realistic, I would think that perhaps his nose looks a bit plastic, maybe too much highlight on the end. I like the border, goes well with the rest of the picture, and honestly I know what you mean about it missing something, but I kinda of like it without the background. But then once I see it with one, Im sure it will be even more incredible. *smiles* very nicely done. Its good to see you submitting again.
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Exactly, the nose looks plastic.
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np my dear, you work is icredible and I love stopping by too see it. *smiles*
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Thanks a lot. Anyway i think i'll be doing some improvements sooner or latter.
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That was the meaning so it seems i reached my goal
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I loved it and forgot to 
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lololol. SHAME ON YOU!
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This is fantastic. I agree that if you put in a background it should either be very much darker or lighter but very simple. The frame you chose, with all the white space, is dramatic, like waiting or thinking and it matches it well. Chose what YOU like ultimately because your taste makes your art real, regardless of what other yahoo's like me think. This is really great!
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Anyway thanks a lot for the wonderfull comment and for the
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Yes! I have benefited greatly from stuff people have said. It's just almost everyone who responded had something to say about it. I know how confusing 5 cooks can get in the kitchen. Just me being all encouraging self promoteyism(I know, not a word...)take what you want and leave the rest behind. Anyone who doesn't think so is waaay to uptight.
keep up the superhumanpeniclin'
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This is EXCELLENT! I have no complaints whatsoever and If you do put in a background (whcih I don't think it needs) make it simple so that it doesn't distract from this excellent piece
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No Prob it looks terrific =/\./\=
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I think u did a great job... tghe only thing is that i would have left out the white bar between the pic and the black frame!
But otherwise great job!
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That's a (good) ideia. Maybe i'll do it. Thanks a lot, glad u like it
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