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Published: 2011-01-25 20:07:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 728; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 6
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Description How far,
would I go?
How much,
would I do?

To get rid,
of this,
pain,
hate,
anger.

Drinking?
Smoking?
Weed?
Ice?
The monster?
I already,
C.U.T.

Dashes,
in my skin,
prefect little lines,
the only thing PERFECT,
about me.

How far,
Would I go?
To just feel,
N,
  O,
    R,
      M,
        A,
          L.
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Comments: 17

TheMeddler [2011-03-12 23:57:14 +0000 UTC]

There's no such thing as normal. . . but I totally get what you're trying to say.

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xXNightRose14Xx [2011-01-29 05:19:20 +0000 UTC]

I don't think theres such thing as "normal"
Normal is what people think is normal.

I just do whatever. I don't drink or smoke or anything. But I don't just not do anything either

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to xXNightRose14Xx [2011-01-29 13:58:36 +0000 UTC]

True and thanks

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xXNightRose14Xx In reply to Brokensmile5559 [2011-01-29 18:40:03 +0000 UTC]

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MikiSparks [2011-01-26 04:14:34 +0000 UTC]

This is really well writen, I love it : }
It really gets me thinking...
Good job : )

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to MikiSparks [2011-01-26 11:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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XBurningLotusX [2011-01-26 03:37:34 +0000 UTC]

amazing. this really gets the reader thinking. there is no such thing as normal just how people are seen. this is just wonderful, you are a great writer

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to XBurningLotusX [2011-01-26 11:36:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Noctelux [2011-01-26 02:54:24 +0000 UTC]

i relate to this so much
i just love it
it rlly shows what ppl would do just 2 get rid of some type of pain
great poem

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to Noctelux [2011-01-26 11:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XD

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Noctelux In reply to Brokensmile5559 [2011-01-26 20:16:57 +0000 UTC]

u welcome

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007Balel [2011-01-25 21:23:30 +0000 UTC]

You bring out some very interesting questions...

I can only answer one.... (cause for the question 'Do you know your limits?'... I think there are no limits..)
So... Is there such thing as normal?
I don't think so... no one in this world is 'normal', not in the slightest bit..
Everyone goes through hell... some make it back and some make it back, but changed...

But you definitely let the reader think for themselves, which is a good thing
Well done

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to 007Balel [2011-01-25 21:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and true.

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007Balel In reply to Brokensmile5559 [2011-01-25 21:35:24 +0000 UTC]

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efawlsh16 [2011-01-25 20:33:16 +0000 UTC]

They are actually interesting questions and I find myself asking them.
How far would I go!
You've made me think, but I don't think thats a bad thing.
I like this piece a lot.

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Brokensmile5559 In reply to efawlsh16 [2011-01-25 20:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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efawlsh16 In reply to Brokensmile5559 [2011-01-25 21:00:45 +0000 UTC]

so so welcome

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