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bub-J3N-blz β€” Phoenix song: completed

Published: 2005-02-23 16:28:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1188; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 39
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Description Dark and light born together
Neither weaker, neither greater
The two are a fiery beauty
And both have one duty
When the battle shall dawn
One must win, the other must fall
Along with his enchanting call
The winner will go forth
And carry his brother to his nest
From there brings the graceful flames
Uniting them before the soothing rain
Then both form the egg for their final resting place
After their battle for death’s embrace

someone really is gunner av to tell me how to do itellics.. thats the poem if you aint guessed. and now the description (i do appologise for this being so long)

ok, most people know the myth of the phoenix, different combinations, but all with the basic background.
Only one phoenix will exist at any time and none any shorter than 500 years (longer depending on which myth you look up). When its time for the phoenix to die it builds a nest and then setts fire to itself. From the ashes spring a new bird and carries the egg to some.. other place yarder yarder.

However, with me being me I decided to manipulate those rules, bend them for my own purpose. This is my own story thing:

After a long life an old phoenix burst into the fatal flames to give rise to another. However, something went wrong and during the making of the new phoenix, the ashes split and gave rise to two. One brother had the classical golden, red plumage, the other a dark violet, both just as beautiful and equally good at heart. After laying their father to rest they separated to live two separate lives. However, The two cannot be allowed to burst into its own fatal flames seperatly as both have the potential to bring forth two new birds each, and disrupt the balance further. Each time this happens, the ashes used for one bird bith is less and will eventually tern them sour and give rise to a population that will consume the Earth. So when the time of death draws near the two brothers will meet again only to battle to the death. The one that loses will not burst into flame. But when the other finally does, both are engulfed in the same flames making them one again and hopfully restoring everything back to normal.

Yes I have an evil mind at times- but don’t we all?
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Comments: 14

knightswhodontsayni [2011-01-16 10:00:52 +0000 UTC]

OBJECTION!

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Mutant-Enemy [2008-01-02 13:17:17 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful... I love the jewel tones you worked into this. !

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bub-J3N-blz In reply to Mutant-Enemy [2008-01-02 22:41:04 +0000 UTC]

why thank you, its actually i peice that i would like to try and improve, as i see it in a different way now that i have a better monitor- funny how things like that happen!

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Mutant-Enemy In reply to bub-J3N-blz [2008-01-03 00:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you do I'd love to see the result! In my opinion this is a wonderful piece of work!

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White-Shadow [2005-02-25 17:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow awesome work

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bub-J3N-blz In reply to White-Shadow [2005-02-25 19:53:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you. means alot

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3na [2005-02-24 09:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Still loving the detail! It really does look good now it is finished, I love all of the purple and the cave walls work well as a background giving it all a dark look.

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bub-J3N-blz In reply to 3na [2005-02-24 16:32:20 +0000 UTC]

cheers. yah i was going for a more balanced look rather than colours all over the place. i think it has a better effect that way

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lp-unicorn [2005-02-24 02:15:21 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING

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bub-J3N-blz In reply to lp-unicorn [2005-02-24 16:31:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you^^ thanks for the fave too. much appreciated

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eblade [2005-02-23 21:08:00 +0000 UTC]

thats one scary looking beak! adore the cave side though, that is awesome! gorgeous featherwork too! *envies your butt*

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bub-J3N-blz In reply to eblade [2005-02-23 21:39:00 +0000 UTC]

i know you want my ass but i told you, your limited to the legs. the ass is mine. XD
thank you. yeah the beak is vulture with various motifications. thankee ^^

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eblade In reply to bub-J3N-blz [2005-02-26 00:30:54 +0000 UTC]

teehee! fair enoughs, i'll be good...maybe...

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Evagenisis [2005-02-23 16:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh cool, a dark pheonix...

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