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WaveringHeart [2010-07-02 01:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Ah, this is a very good first attempt that you've made! I like how you drew the girl in a sitting pose instead of standing. It's good to challenge yourself like that! Also I see you've added shading too!

There are just a few things that I'd like to point out so you can improve on your drawing. The lines of this drawing are kind of rough and not very refined. When you ink your drawings, try to draw the lines in one smooth stroke, instead of using sketchy lines. Also, the girl's waist and her forearm look slightly not in proportion to the rest of her body. Searching up tutorials on human anatomy might help with that. That's all the advice I have for you, you're on your own now to practice and improve! I wish you all the best, and don't give up!

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