Blichacz [2017-02-09 22:58:31 +0000 UTC]
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I'll get this like that - everything looks fine, good piece of work as usual, good dress, good fur, nothings flat, although... Her cleavage seems to be disproportionate. What do I mean is... It looks like her right breast (by right I mean her right, now the way I look at it, but the way she's... You know what I mean !) seems to be like 1/3 of her "cups" (Jesus Christ, I'm going to burn in hell for that...) while her left breast compared to the right, seems to be 2/3. I don't know whether I have something wrong with eyes, but really, her left breast is like two of her right breast, or...
And her face... Nice eyes, and all, but there's something quite not right about it, and I can't tell what...
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Cacuu In reply to Blichacz [2017-02-10 10:58:46 +0000 UTC]
It's true. The main problem I had with this piece is that I pushed the boundaries of the colors too far and too close at the same time.
And so the light spectrum of value I used was too similar to the dark ones; Especially in the face, all of the values are very light.
This wasn't something i was capable of fixing without reworking the entire picture from the ground up.
I'm studying a new technique (although i won't be able to post my first piece using it here for... reasons). But in the future, my pieces will likely have a better light/shadow shapes, which in it's own will help to define certain details, like the eyes on this one.
Thanks for the critique, as always.
PS: The breasts do seem a bit weird. D:
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