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xYourHero [2014-08-07 04:57:06 +0000 UTC]
Awwh that was really adorable! Dude, you're really good at writing! I don't see why you get self-conscious about it. You wrote Arthur perfectly, the dialogue was completely in-character, and the details were realistic, believable, and very charming.
I remember when you first asked me if Alfred or Francis should be the first man xD I almost squealed when I saw that Alfie was. (Wait, he was, right? It sure seemed that way) . And that ending! So unexpected but adorable. I remember us talking about that, I think... Or was it that the hubby threw the wife in a pool? Hahaha xD Anyway, YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE MORE OFTEN! I CAN SEE YOU JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER, M'DEAR~
Ah, and don't forget about my America request, dammit! xD
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CaptainFabuPineapple In reply to xYourHero [2014-08-07 16:00:50 +0000 UTC]
Asdfghjkl thank you! QAQ (quack.. Remember? XD) Maybe it's because we are our own worst critics and I'm just being to harsh on myself..? Did I even spell critics right? Well, thank goodness Artie was in character. When I wrote the dialogue he seemed off.. But Artie is Artie, he's a weirdo xD
Yes, Alfie was indeed the best man~ he seemed more suited for the job, to be honest. Francis is only there to cry. Manly tears, of course xD I think I said it was the hubby throwing the wife in a pool, but I was imagining Al doing it xP
Tis my goal to write more often~! But inspiration just passes by like the wind. I get an idea, and once I get my notebook I freeze ;-;
I won't! But didn't you request China..? Or am I just imagining things.. But I am planning a new America x Reader, it isn't a wedding, unfortuneatly, but.. Hopeyoulikeitanyways x3 I just hope I get America's personality right.. ^^
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xYourHero In reply to CaptainFabuPineapple [2014-08-08 04:03:19 +0000 UTC]
No prob aND YES I REMEMBER ASDFGHJKL I STILL READ IT AS QUACK EVERY TIME I SEE IT
Indeed, you are being too harsh on yourself. Loosen up a bit ^_^ And yesss! Alfie would make the BEST-BEST MAN at any wedding~ LOL though, France's 'manly tears'. xD Just remember to write down all your ideas as soon as you can! Don't freeze; I command you not to! Yeah Alfie, throw that wife in the pool-!
Right, right, I requested China but I'm yOUR HERO (pun not quite intended..) so you'll also be writing me an AmericaxReader anyway. YOU WILL.
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CaptainFabuPineapple In reply to xYourHero [2014-08-08 15:22:17 +0000 UTC]
Lol xD I do too ^^'
Indeed he would! Bring the fireworks! France's manly tears, I shall encapsulate them and wish upon them. ...Can you imagine if people actually do that? That's just creepy ;w; Ma'am, yes ma'am! (Is that what they say? Sir yes sir.. Sir? Is that how you spell it? It looks incorrect.. XD)
....xD Even though the pun was not quite intended, I laughed WAY to hard c: okay, okaayy xD I'm lookin quite forward to writing something with America in it :3
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FairyTail4322 [2014-08-06 15:59:31 +0000 UTC]
Nice it was awesome
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PumaGrrl301 [2014-08-05 14:15:03 +0000 UTC]
It's beautiful work, I LOVED it! The details make everything come to life, you are a very talented writer. Well done!!!
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CaptainFabuPineapple In reply to PumaGrrl301 [2014-08-05 17:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Awwe, thank you! (You're making me blush.. ///) Also, thanks for taking the time to read it! I really appreciate it ^^
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guardianarchangel [2014-08-05 03:01:15 +0000 UTC]
Awww so beautiful
I wish i had a wedding like that
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CaptainFabuPineapple In reply to guardianarchangel [2014-08-05 14:03:56 +0000 UTC]
Grazie! I'm glad you took the time to read it~ :3
Ahh, are you perhaps married? If so, I congratulate the both of you~ Hope you two have a wonderful married life (:
Ahah, I would want a wedding like this as well (saying if I do get married) ^^
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LittleMissIndia1 [2014-08-04 23:58:37 +0000 UTC]
Darn..The weddings I go to never end that way
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SarianaJ [2014-08-04 21:19:27 +0000 UTC]
What a way to end a reception....
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