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Possible Thor 2 spoilers here, so view and read at your discretion. Obviously I don't know anything definite about the story. This is just my own idea coupled with a few possible spoilery tidbits I've read..
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This is just a little comic I whipped up showcasing my take on what could possibly happen in Thor: The Dark World. It's pretty much a given that Loki will be in prison at some point, but I'm conjecturing on Thor coming to ask him for help based on some potential spoilers I've read. (The main (possible) spoiler is of Jane possibly being in peril from and/or under the control of Malekith, which is what I'm using as Thor's motive for asking Loki's aid.)
No, this was not just an excuse to draw Loki shirtless and dirty. No sir, not at all. XD
(And before anyone asks, I just don't picture him with a beard. If Loki didn't grow a beard while wandering the dark recesses of space, then I somehow doubt he'll grow one in Asgard's dungeons. Of course, Tom does wear a beard very, very well, so I won't mind terribly if I'm proven wrong come November.
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Who would have loved this scene in the movie if Loki's costume was as hot as this one ?
No, I know...
Everyone ! *_*
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I am afraid that you can't do this to me, this fan service that you have Loki in. It's almost two in the morning and my roommate is sleeping! It is indeed rather hard for me to keep my fan girl mind and mouth quiet. You're killlling me with glorious fan service!!
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Who would have loved this scene in the movie if Loki's costume was the same as here ?
No, I know. Everyone ! 😍
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Glad you like it!
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IT WAS TRUE! IT WAS ALL TRUE! YOU DID IT! YOU ARE BRILLIANT!
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Ha ha, well not quite! He didn't end up being shirtless, sadly, but I guess I got it pretty close!
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Well, you got it 99% right! You're brilliant t!
Would you be willing to do another art trade? Another scene from my story? Your call completely!
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Aw thanks!
Sure, if that's what you'd like. Let me know!
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AWESOME! Here, tell me what you think of this scene;
*~*~*~*
She jumped slightly as the door opened without a single knock. She scrambled to collect herself, but Loki already entered with little more than a smile. She pushed herself off her bed and put the book the had been reading aside, watching him carefully. In his hand, he held two items. One was a small goblet, crafted from gold and glass. The other was a rather small bottle of wine, barely enough to fill it. He placed the two items on the small bedside table he'd allowed in her room and turned back to her.
"If it is any consolation," he began. "I'd like to ask for your forgiveness for my behavior this afternoon."
Already he could see the worry in her eyes. Good Girl. She knew better than to believe he would ever apologize to anyone. He uncorked the wine and poured half of the contents into the goblet.
"I would like to make amends," he said, offering the glass out to her. "This is one of the finest wines of Asgard, served only to the All-father and his family. I've heard those who experience it on Midgard savor tastes beyond their wildest dreams."
She looked at the liquid, her mind racing to figure out his next move. "No… No, thank you."
He raised an eyebrow. "No?"
"I don't drink alcohol that much…" She said. "I've never liked the taste."
Loki smiled. "Surely even you would want to experience new sensations," he said. He waved his other hand. "But I can not force it upon you." He placed the glass down, in plan view of her. "In truth, I've come to speak to you of other maters. You asked me a question earlier today and I never gave you an answer. The answer is yes."
"Yes?" She looked thoroughly confused.
"Mortals can be granted immortality… to an extent."
The door opened again, revealing Agent Barton and Henry Remington. To armored guards stood behind him. Her face fell instantly at the sight of his bruised and bloodied neck. They dragged him in, closing the door behind them. Instinctively, she tried to reach Henry, but Barton stepped in front of him and she froze. She knew Loki's law all too well. She looked back at Loki, watching him draw a small vial from his pocket. She gazed at the vial, her eyes captured by the icy-blue liquid inside.
Loki smiled. "I was speaking to Agent Barton earlier. About Asgardians who took mortal lovers against wiser advice. They sought many methods to keep those they cherished alive. Of course, many tired and many failed… but there was one man who thought differently. We can not keep age and death from mortals… but we can prolong it's coming."
"… How?" She whispered.
"Through ourselves." He displayed the vial carefully. "A young sorcerer once discovered a formula he named "Adligamentum Animus". Through it, the life of one can be joined to the life of another. In simpler terms, as long as one lives, the other shall live as well. When one dies, the other shall die. But so long as one remains alive, the other shall live… as young and as fine a flower as the day they first met."
Her eyes widened with horror. Henry struggled to move, but the guards kept him still. They both watched as Loki returned to the goblet. He uncorked the vial and poured the contents into the glass, the wine now turning an eerie purple. He lifted the glass, turning back to his flower.
"You claim to cherish a world that has a false ideal of love…" Loki smiled. "I plan to show you what love really is." He held out the goblet to her. "Drink from this glass, little flower. Bind your soul to mine and live in eternity," he flicked his other hand. The guards lifting their guns to Henry's head. "And I will spare his life."
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"Don't...." Henry managed to hiss out, struggling against the guards. "Don't give him what he-" He grunted as he was shoved to the floor, a foot making contact with his stomach. Several drops of blood fell to the floor.
"NO!" She screamed, trying to get to him. "Stop it! Don't-"
"Restrain her."
It was the only time Loki had ever allowed anyone else to touch his flower. Barton grabbed her arms, his strength superior to hers as she trashed in his grip to no avail. Loki made no attempt to move, smiling softly as his pet attempted to struggle.
"This shall end when you desire it, pet." He said stepping between them. "He no longer has to suffer." He held out the glass again. "One drop... And immortality is yours. Of course, if you'd prefer a mortal existence.." He motioned to one of the guards who placed his gun to Henry's temple. "I'll not deny you that."
Her eyes went to the goblet, darting between Henry and it several times. If she drank from there... She'd be bound to Loki's life force until his death... If he ever actually died. He'd be a part of her forever...
Or she could live a mortal and send an innocent man to his death.
Never.
She looked back at the goblet before lifting her gaze to Loki's. She nodded slightly. "I'll do it."
"No!" Henry cried. "You mustn't-"
"Enough!" Loki roared. "You'll speak no more, you-" He raised his free hand to strike Henry.
"But you can't hurt him!"
Loki paused. All eyes turned to her. She breathed quickly.
"I'll drink it!" She said. "But you can't hurt him! Neither you nor your men can ever lay a hand on him again!"
Loki's anger faded into a slight smile once more. "Such decisions are not to be made by you, my dear."
"I'm asking this on good faith…" she started, swallowing a little. "I'm asking this as my last request of you… for as long as you allow it."
Both Henry and Loki looked at her. Her body was trembling but she held her head high.
"I… I won't ask anything of you, ever again. I'll obey you. I won't speak unless you command it!" She said, ignoring the tears coming to her eyes. "Please… just don't hurt him anymore."
Even Barton looked at her. What she was offering was beyond foolish. Complete control for the life of one man she hardly knew. All to spare his life.
For that moment, Henry believed himself to be in a dream. How could she be so willing to save him?
"I've seen people die because of me," she said. "People cowering in fear for their lives, people who for just a moment wanted to be kind to me. They died becasue-" The words "because of your bitterness" rang in her mouth. She wanted to spit them at Loki, but for the sake of the young man before her, she couldn't. "Because of me. I won't let it happen again."
Loki's eyes went from her to Henry. She was offering him a great deal in exchange for allowing this whelp to live. A spark of light came to his eyes, Henry shook his head violently.
Her words were easy enough to twist.
"As you wish," he said. "I shall keep my end of the bargain, but first," he held out the goblet to her. "You must fufil yours."
She looked at the glass. Feeling Hawkeye release her arms, she walked forward, reached out and took the goblet from Loki's hands. Her fingers enclosed around the glass. The liquid inside made the glass feel chill.
"Wait!" Henry breathed. "Please… what is your name?"
"Have you no end of-"
"Ellie."
The room fell silent once again, all eyes turned to the girl in the yellow dress.
"My name isn't "flower"." Her eyes linked with Henry's before turning to Loki. "It's Ellie."
She looked down at the goblet. Taking a deep breath, she lifted it to her lips and swallowed the contents, not stoping until the all the liquid had vanished.
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Hmm, do you have a shorter one, maybe? That's a good scene and I could probably come up with something for it, but it just seems like there's a lot going on there to condense into a drawing.
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BTW, I hope my story isn't bothering you/ being too Mary Sue. 
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Oh no, you're not bothering me! Really! And there's nothing wrong with the snippets you've been sending. It's just that so far nothing has really jumped out and said "Draw me!" the way it did in the original scene that I did my art from. Not that the snippets aren't good because they really are! I guess lightening just hasn't struck me yet. 
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If that idea appeals to you by all means go for it. I just do love me some smexy Loki and that idea does lend itself to some smexy/ funny ideas. I'm just glad I'm not bothering you and that what I'm sending you is okay. It means a lot to me that you'd be willing to draw them together! 
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I'll just keep thinking on it and see what comes out.
Aw thanks! I'm always flattered to hear how much you like my art!
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I know whatever comes out will be brilliant! I'm just excited to see what comes out! I think your art is fantastic! The way you draw Loki is so adorable/smexy/snarky/ evil/sly/BRILLIANT/ has that "I will break your mind" look!
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Welcome!
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If you just wanted to draw Loki and Ellie together (not like a scene from the story or anything) like maybe with Loki being the smexy &@*%$&!# that he is and Ellie just glairing at him or wanting nothing to do with him, ect, that would be fine too!
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Hmmm, What about this scene? (most of them are kinda long so if there is one moment that is like an "AH-HA! Moment to you, go for it)
~*~*~*~*
She closed the book softly, looking up as the door opened once more. Loki entered only a moment later, his golden armor vanishing as the door closed behind him. She rose from her seat, lowing her head slightly.
"Hello, my lord," she said softly.
Loki raised an eyebrow at her voice. This greeting sounded far too rehearsed.
"I leave you for a day, flower, and this is how I am to be greeted?" Loki clicked his tongue. "One might think you were not happy to see me return." He held out his hand for hers, eyes narrowing when she did not accept it right away. Eventually however, she moved forward, placing her hand in his.
"What troubles you, my dear?" He asked, pulling her closer, the fingers of his other hand gently caressing the skin of her knuckles.
"I was curious about something," she said, not looking him in the eye.
"Tell me," he said. "Perhaps I might put your mind at rest."
She looked up at him. "Can someone who's human be granted immortality?"
Loki's eyes locked with hers, angered ever so slightly as she broke from his grasp, stepping away.
"Why would such a thought occur to you?" He asked, watching her every step.
"Humans age and die," she said, walking back to one of the many bookshelves. She returned her previous book and searched for a new one. Picking up a new title, she skimmed the opening page.. "I don't think you want an old, crumbling flower at your side."
"I don't think I particularly like your tone, pet." Loki's eyes narrowed.
Her eyes shot up, meeting Loki's with burning hatred. "I don't particularly like being your pet, Loki." She snapped, his name dripping out of her mouth like venom. She turned away, only to scream as he appeared behind her. The book dropped to the floor as he grasped her arms, refusing to release her. He smiled as she tried to jerk away.
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Hmm, not sure. I guess I'll just have to think on it!
Unless you've got another scene in mind...?
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hmmm, I also have this one:
(this is after Ellie is saved by the Avengers and brought back to S.H.I.E.L.D. Long story short, they found that this potion Loki gave her keeps her alive and unharmed so long as he is alive. She's pretty much immortal now. And she never wanted immortality.)
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It amazed Ellie how few guards were actually around the detention center. How many locks had they placed him under that they truly believed he was safe. She looked a head, somewhat grateful at least to see two guards standing by the main entrance. Well, at least it was something.
But again, why only two? Surely they didn't think that would be enough?
She watched in silence for a while as the guards stood stock still outside the door. Maybe this wasn't going to work after all.
Soon enough, however, two other guards came, presumably to relieve their companions of duty. She watched them speak for a moment, sharing a comment or a laugh or two, before one of the guards motioned that the other two had to come with him for a minute. At first the guards seemed uncertain of the act, but once she heard the words "Director Fury" dropped, she knew it wouldn't be long before they left. Paperwork, maybe, she thought.
She watched as they left the station, leaving the coast clear. Ellie swallowed and hoped it would be a while before they came back.
This would not be a short conversation.
She approached the door, biting her tongue angrily once she saw the security code panel on the door.
"Damn!" She thought to herself. Well, great job thinking this one through-"
She was interrupted in mid thought as the door slowly opened of its own will. She stepped back in shock, looking to see if anyone else had… She paused. A new thought came to mind. She clenched her fists and entered the room, the door closing slowly behind her.
At the center of the room was a large glass… Well, Ellie could have liked it to a fish tank for the shark that was kept inside, but it was a containment cell. A large circular chamber surrounded by thick, thick glass. Though certainly not like any cell Ellie had ever heard of or read about.
The interior was strangely well decorated, though there was evidence that it had been pretty sparse before. While there wasn't anything present that could be used as a weapon, there was more than enough to make a person… any person let alone one with a Machiavellian mind-set to feel more than comfortable.
She moved slowly up the metal staircase, leading to the front of the cage. She watched a lone figure sitting in a regal green armchair, his attention fully absorbed in a book he was holding. He crossed one leg over the other, flipping to the next page of his book before continuing to read. Ellie stared at him, bitting back the swelling wave of fear as she started to speak.
"You can stop pretending now," she said.
"Is it so obvious to you?" He did not turn around, but there was a smile in his voice.
"Don't insult me… or yourself," she said. "I don't think anyone guarding an enemy of earth would leave their post that easily."
This prompted him to place his book down. He uncrossed his legs and rose from his seat, smiling at her as his eyes met with her once again.
"My flower," he greeted her. Ellie didn't move. She had to hold herself back from flinching at the name. "Dressed in the rags of a mortal but still as lovely as ever. How fascinating it is that we should meet again like this. I am currently the one, as you said, "in a golden cage," he smiled. "And you walk around freely. Is this not the case? Or…" he moved a little closer to the glass, "is there something missing from this moment? A truth of some kind?"
"Whatever you did to me," Ellie said sharply. "Whatever you gave me, get rid of it. Now."
"Oooo," Loki smiled. He clicked his tongue disapprovingly. "If I did not know better, I'd say you were making demands of me. A mere captive who can not leave this prison. What has brought you to such a state, flower?"
"Shut up!" Ellie snapped, her voice a mere whisper, but an angry, vicious whisper at that. "This ends now! You never kept our deal. Change. Me. Back." She hissed out each and every word violently.
"I did?" Loki asked, sickeningly innocently. "As I recall," he moved carefully, each step calculated perfectly, like a cat waiting for the right moment to strike an injured mouse. "I kept our bargain. Your friend was not harmed by myself or my men."
"Bastard," Ellie seethed, trembling. "He was killed and I think I know who ordered it!"
"Still," Loki said, watching her every move. "It was not my hand that took his final breath. It was not my blade that slit his throat. Even if it was by my own hand, flower…. sweet, beautiful flower," Each word oozed from his mouth with syrupy sweetness. "I can not undo what your form has become. It is not within mine nor any power known to the nine realms. Your soul now lives through me and so it shall be forever."
"You're sick," Ellie said, fighting everything within her to not let Loki's words get to her. "You bind some girl you don't even know to you just because you want some kind of pet? You're pathetic, plain and simple."
Loki's eyes flashed. "What makes you think I don't know you, flower?" He snarled a little. "What makes you think I don't know you, PET?" He snapped, causing her to step back. At the sight, he calmed himself, smiling at her as though such a act had never occurred. "Do you not think that I did not consider my actions? Did I not say before I could have had any mortal I desired? Yet in the end, I chose you."
"You chose pretty poorly," Ellie said. "And you did NOT think this through because you did not consider this. You get your ass handed to you. You get caught. You a one-way ticket back to Asgard. You pay for everything you've done and I head home."
"Is that so?" Loki asked his teeth glimmering like sharp pearls in the dim light. "How lovely. "Good triumphs over evil", is that right? The villain is taken away in chains and the beautiful maiden returns to the loving arms she was so crudely snatched away from. Were you ever told who brought you to me?"
"You were controlling him," Ellie said sharply. "I don't care."
"Curious. How quick you are to forgive, flower," Loki chuckled. "At any rate, so the story ends. You return home as though our meeting were nothing more than a bad dream. I am sent away and you gain all you lost. Am I correct?" He smiled. "If that is so… what brings you here tonight?"
Ellie paused, her heart beat starting to quicken at his question. "I want whatever you gave me out!"
"Oh, no, no, no, no, no, no," Loki shook his head. "There's more, isn't there? Something that startled you? Something that brought you to me even sooner than I would have thought? Perhaps… a new concern has come to light. When will Director Fury allow you to return home?"
Ellie swallowed. Director Fury hadn't exactly told her that yet. "Soon," She said.
"Why so uncertain?" Loki chuckled, putting his finger to his lips. "Have you been thinking about what will they think of you when you return home? Do they not have certain words for humans like you? I've heard quite a few myself. "Freak?" "Monster?" "Abnormal?" "Creature?" "Thing from another realm?" Surely you must have heard some already… perhaps even before you came to my side. I do know so little of your childhood, flower. Tell me, what did your schoolmates think of you when you were younger."
Ellie could feel her rage boiling. "I never came to your side!" She snapped.
"Not willingly," Loki shrugged. "But these last two months have proven otherwise. And let us not forget, I offered you your freedom. Yet you choose to stay of your own free will."
"You said you'd kill my family!" Ellie snarled.
"I said no such thing." Loki grinned. "I said there might not be a place for them in my new kingdom. But such words can mean a lot of things. Imprisonment. Banishment. Servitude. Death is not the only option, flower-"
"SHUT UP!!" Ellie roared. "STOP CALLING ME THAT! I AM NOT YOUR "FLOWER!"
"But you are," Loki's grin widened. "You were since the moment I saw you. You were mine since the moment of your birth, if it has all lead up to this. By the hands of fate, I was bound to find you and you were bound to be mine." He stared at her. "And your choice to accept my life-"
"Through a gun pointed at Henry Remington's head!" Ellie counter, her control over her emotions slowly slipping away.
"Remington," Loki's smile faded a tad. "Of course. The bleeding heart of a mortal always blinded by affection rather than fact. Why weep for a man lead by false affections. He was the one who knew nothing of you, flower."
"He knew I was human. He knew I didn't belong in a cage."
"You barely knew him." Loki countered. "You did not even know his name. You could have let him die. What would it have mattered to you? You could have watched that worthless human fall dead at your feet and you'd be mortal. Instead you allowed him to live-"
"LIAR!" Ellie screamed. "You bastard! You twisted my words around, you-."
"'Monster?'" Loki offered. "'Creature of darkness?' 'Lie-smith?' I've heard them all, flower." He grinned. "You chose to accept my life force into your body. I am, in every sense, the reason you live at this very moment. Your heart, your brain, oh yes, they are treasures, but your life is now mine. I am reason you walk, the reason you breathe. How is your hand, by the by?"
Ellie's face blanched, her once injured hand curling into a fist. How did he-
"When you return home, flower," Loki said, "If those who "saved you" from me even allow for such a thing, It won't take long for the truth to come to light. You are not the child you used to be. You are not even mortal. Your life is beyond those of the humans who walk the earth. And it will not take long for them to see your new existence. To never age, never grow weak from sickness, to never again feel the affects of mortality. Tell me, when the truth is revealed, what mortal man would have the heart to take you for his wife?"
Ellie's mouth went dry.
"To have an eternally beautiful bride, What a prize. But then they have grown old, when they pass into the next life and you remain as lovely as the day they married you, what shall they wonder? Who will be next? Will they become just a name on your long list of partners? And what of your children?"
"Shut up." Ellie whispered.
"It is only your life force that is mine, flower. Born from the seed of a mortal father, they will grow, they will age and they shall die. Imagine, flower, watching your children and their children and even their children grow, blossom into life and then die. Your lifetime is many, their's is one." Loki smiled. "You have no place among the mortals any longer, sweetest flower, if you are even allowed to return. Your place, the only place you belong is by my side and even if I must remain in this prison for eons at end, I will always know of you. Think of you. Dream of you and I shall never stop doing so. If you run, I will find you, I will hunt you down and bring you back to me even if it takes till the stars turn cold. You are mine, Midgardian flower- No." Loki chuckled. "No. No longer. My sweet Asgardian flower. And come time enough… you will obey me. You will adore me, thank me even for my gift. Why," Loki's eyes never left the terrified girl's. "You might even come to love-"
A loud sound caused Ellie to step back and even Loki jolted a little. The floor under the cell had parted, revealing a rather large and rather long hole. Whatever was dropped down it was not coming back. Ellie turned around, her heart stopping as she saw someone near the cell's control panel.
"It's very late. I think that's enough conversation for one evening," the finely dressed man said, shutting down the panel before walking over to Ellie. He took off his suit coat, putting it gently over her shoulders. "I think its best we get you back to the infirmary, Miss Conner."
"Ever the gentleman, Agent Coulson?" Loki asked, eyeing the mortal touching his flower dangerously.
"I see no reason not to be," Coulson smiled at the prisoner. "Have a good evening, Mr. Loki." He turned to go, leading Ellie along with him.
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You just made me squeal in happiness! I love these kinds of things!
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I know, people keep asking me to continue, but quite frankly I don't really know where to take it next! I don't want to try and plan out the whole movie.
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haha I understand, but you can try
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I love your style of drawing! And this could be very interesting...Just can't wait until november!
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Thank you! And yes, it could be!
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I would, but that's about the extent of my thoughts on what might happen.
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Yeah. Could be interesting if it does happen.
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AH-MAZE-ING!
Yes...I do hope we get a little shirtless Loki in Thor 2. I doubt that we will but one can hope.
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Thanks! And yes, we can only hope.
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OH MY GOD!!!! PLEASE LET THIS BE TRUE! YOU ARE BRILLIANT!
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