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sea or sky
do the fish swim
or fly
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Very nicely done!!
Congratulations on your much deserved DD! Β
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thanks for the congrats
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Birds in earth, fish in air.
Wear a hardhat and beware.
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If you're a cat
it's in the bowl
that's where it's at!
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Or a bowlful of ferrets
bowling along
wondering where all the popcorn has gone
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bowling night
cats vs ferrets
hooray
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bushy squirrels
and silent rats
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... and I'm stumped for now. LiliWrites made an excellent pick.
Well done.
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I like this clever little haiku about perspective. It's got everything a haiku needs - it's terse, has a good cut, includes nature, and says something about life. It's cute on top of it. Really nice work! 
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old Mules ears
are turning pink
thank you
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and fish fly away
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point of view
it all depends
on you
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the world is
subjective, is
there truth?
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in the whole
and to the hole
we go
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spiral down
into the mind
and see
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rotating
memories raise
the past
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thoughts go in
circles and have
no end
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time consumes
the memories
inside
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even oneβs
memories age
and die
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or we age and die
while blossoming memories
go on forever
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legends of those who
changed the world for good or bad
live on to this day
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make a change
in the world or
yourself
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be the one
who impacts the
whole world
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watch out where
you put your feet
take care
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each step is
calculated
with care
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and each root is square
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each square comes from a cube
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each bear comes from a cub
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each chicken comes from an egg
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each egg comes from a chicken
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which came first?
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ask the dinosauer
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