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Chachamaru-chan — Lilium
Published: 2008-11-07 19:25:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 596; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 9
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Really. I was in doubt if it was worth posting it or not, despite the fact that I really worked hard on this one. The fact is that I begin to hate my work with a passion if I work so much on it and it doesn't turn out as I want. This is indeed a perfect example of was I was saying. I sarted coloring this since a freind of mine made me realize I didn't even submit a flat chested character in my whole gallery, so I happily started sketching this while I was playing F/SN (Yeah, her hair colors quite reminds of Saber's). I even gave her a name (thing that I rarely do, maybe I'm starting to feel the influence of those OCs maniacs, lol).Anyway, her name is Lilium and she's a first year high school student in a private school, that explains why she has that little cross on her uniform. She's quite a tomboy and often bullies the other guys in the class. Also, she hates being called "small".
Now I'll start complaining about my own art (lol XD):
I'm quite satisfied of her hair (Yeah, I almost managed to make the shading blend a bit with the base color and that shiny part on top of her head) but my crappy and shaky lines just won't stop bugging me as I feel like they ruin the whole thing. But I'm improving on that for sure, remembering as I was totally inept with my tablet just a few weeks ago.
Thanks for reading this so far, you're my hero. :3
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Comments: 26
I think the lines are well done. I really can't make lineart, myself.. D:
Beautiful. The hair actually reminds me of Colette Brunel, from Tales of Symphonia. c:
Also, I love the background.
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is so beautiful i like much her eyes to favorites
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I like how the coloring turned out. It's really awesome!
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A much better job then I can do ^_^; She is great. I like the shading on her cloths
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Thanks! Actually the shading on her clothes was the most difficult thing since it's hard to find a good balance between sharp edged shades and blurred parts.
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That looks really great, especially the coloring.
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Thank you!
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Haha, I thought this was Saber at first. Are you playing (reading?) the F\SN visual novel?
Definitely the best of your original art, in my opinion. Though it is a funny feeling when everyone else likes something you don't.
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Yup, I've been playing the F/SN visual novel for the past few days and it's awesome.
Thank you for the comment.
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She really looks great; I like her outfit a lot. It was cool that you wanted to post a character with a more modest bust size too; there's not enough of those, heee.
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Yeah, it was kinda shocking to notice that my gallery here doesn't have a single flat chested character. XD
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I had to go double check mine quick after reading your comments, hee.
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Thanks! I'm working on some other pieces to define her character a bit better. It's really my first OC so it deserves a really special treatment.
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Your character and picture is very nice, lots of cute apeal. While you may see the flaws, esp the close up ones from when you were working on the picture. Others only judge what they see before rthem without notacing the tiny flaws that you can only see up close as your doing the colouring. Good work you dont need to worry about it not looking good cos it def does
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Thanks, maybe I should really start taking some more breaks when I'm doing the coloring. It becomes quite frustrating after a while. XD
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Im really lazy with my own colouring, I never go behond a few hours, but I know what you are saying. Its starts to get you down after so long and all you can see is the flaws, that no one else notices. Its just mainly about the overall look and feel of the picture, sometimes spending too much time without a break you can lose track and get caught up in the little things
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She's beautiful, and I know the feeling. Everyone begins to pick out flaws with their work when they spend too much time on it. But here eyes are perfect and so is her hair so you really shouldn't
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Naw, my coloring skills are far from perfect, but thanks for the kind words.
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