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Published: 2009-06-12 16:54:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 32808; Favourites: 1100; Downloads: 2898
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Part of the Las Lindas latest page. I liked how she turned out so I made that panel in a stand-alone promo like pic.
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Still as hot as ever! XD And her face, cheeks to be exact, seem a bit rounder, was that intentional? =3
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Mora is an amazing character in my opinion, but I still love Rachael, Sarah, Randall, aswell as Taffy.
Nice angle, also the page was really dramatic. I never thought that Rachael had a huge crush on Minos. I can't wait to see more and even the next page of Breasts are the Best. :]
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that's a nice angle
and it gives me feelings xD
still my fave
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Would make a good bookmark. (Who reads anymore though?)
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Barngirl-tastic xD Nice angle choise too, gives a nice 'boost' to a certain part xD excellent work!
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I love how this turned out too.
But I'm afraid I have to ruin the feeling with a bit of a critique.
I would simply ignore it but everything about this is just so great and perfectly balanced, that it would be a crime not to address this very annoying flaw. Something I've been wondering how I should address.
Her right eye seems to be totally, how do you say this, misshapen? The rest is just right, but when I look at it it seems not to sit on her face well. Either it being to thin or too close to her nose, I'm not sure.
I implore you I'm not trying to bash your work or upset the mood. It just seems to really pop out and ruin the whole thing for me. Single flaws tend to stand out on perfect completed works and this is prime example of that.
Please consider it. Do something about it if you think you agree. I would appreciate that such a thing does not go unfixed.
I am not normally urgent about artwork. I just let the artist do what they feel and not demand any changes in their work. I just feel that strong about this particular picture that I have to step beyond my own respect for artistic creativity and let my opinion be heard.
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I agree haha. Not that I could come close to having the patience to draw something like this, but given the perspective, her right eye should be about 50-75% wider horizontally.
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Great art, and the panel was great, worth the wait. Sad for Rachel and yeah Mora does treat Minos pretty harsh, but even those tuff girls have a need for affection
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i have to say that this latest page is, as all the pages, amazing! but this one is so sad, especially rachels expression in that first one. anger and frustration, confusion, sadness, and maybe even an amount of embarrassment... and you portrayed it all perfectly! your such a genius, chalo XD
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damn shes so hot and naughty like in using every one lawl
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TITS. BIG, HUGE, INCREDIBLY FIRM TITS.
C'mon, that's what everyone is thinkin'. SDo I'm saying
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I love it, but I think her right eye (the one in back) should be a lil bigger, so it doesn't look like she's a bit of a chubby-in-the-face kid.
other than that eye, it's superb! as always! ~_^
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OH that was intentional. I wanted to make her look a lil more chubby.
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Because shes the heavy type. Not overweight, just larger.
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well, ok, but I still prefer the old version
you did good, none-the-less
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The pose seems alright, the only thing that bothers me is that the eyes don't seem to agree with the face when it comes down to perspective.
/critique
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Ugh... I don't really like the way you drew her nose and eyes-- they just look so... Bad.
And her boobs look painfully big.
But aside from that; your lines are smooth and the coloring is very pretty.
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