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CharmeleonWarrior — Cartoon's time to shine! (BY ASHLEY)
Published: 2015-01-29 23:35:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 4638; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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OMG Big Mouth Look Behind You, also dawwwwwwwwwww Hip And Hop singing so cute, also i can't get over the Mama Luigi to you Mario. so funny
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lol why luigi so derpy also I love lemmy in this mostly cuz I'm a lemmy fan girl XD
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(By the way, remember that one comment thing I'm alluding to, but don't want to say?)
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Yeah, I got over it though~
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I could tell. Listen, I'm sorry if I wasn't adding much to my character's dialogue or anything like that.
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It's fine. I just get a bit bored easily if not much dialogue is put there.
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Alright. Considering that I had Devin feel shy and/or not wanting to say anything, that's what resulted from it. I could change the text if you want.
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I hear ya, but I'd really want to continue it. There's always room for improvement in RPs, stories, etc., you know.
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Here's an example of what I'd try to do at times if you decided to continue it:
*Devin sighed and looked away. He really didn't want to say anything to Chammy at the moment, especially considering how she really wants him to become a member of the castle. However, maybe if she just leaves him to consider it, or if, say, a dragon were to attack the castle, Devin might want to stay here.*
(However, this might be a bit abridged.)
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(As in, putting the second sentence in that("However, maybe if she just leaves him to consider it, or if, say, a dragon were to attack the castle, Devin might want to stay here.") in an author's note.)
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All it really is is fleshing out his reactions.
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When applicable, obviously. So, want me to resend a comment?
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I'm fine. We can do another one sometime if you're interested. 
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Actually, I have a practice of saving comments in case RPs are lost.
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HE NEEDS TO RUN!! OAO;
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Run Big Mouth. Run as fast as you can!!!
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But at least we've been Hip and Hop rolled! xDD
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