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chase123 — Dark poem
Published: 2008-11-21 13:18:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 388; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 4
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Description Blood everywere the walls the ceiling the floor.
Is the sound im hearing screams of terror,pain,
or my laughs echoing off this bloody place?
Darkness and blood is all I see nothing less and
nothing more. The knife in my hand seemed quite fine until I stabbed,stabbed,stabbed deep into your heart with a bright smile despite the vileness of it all.
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Comments: 16

Meseriah [2015-09-14 16:28:51 +0000 UTC]

A majestic solemn piece truly. I thoroughly enjoyed it. 

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xX-DIR-Xx [2014-04-12 05:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Interesting and original. Horrifically entertaining to read. Keep up the good work.

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ride-out [2012-04-28 18:15:47 +0000 UTC]

you are an amazing poet, you should be a professional

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xPWRA [2010-07-04 15:57:27 +0000 UTC]

oh my god, I like this, it's so creepy but we can see the revenge that the person's taking against the other one. I love the way you wrote it, I bet if it was longer, it would have been even better, but this is really good

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chase123 In reply to xPWRA [2010-07-06 02:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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letterlover [2010-06-29 12:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! this horrifically Great!!!! I liked very much, all the sensory images. It is short but enough to be impacted Brava!!
(sorry for my English, my 1rst language is Spanish)

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chase123 In reply to letterlover [2010-06-30 01:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I just happened to have been in a bad mood when I first wrote that poem so yea.Its all right I don't mind if you have trouble with speaking english.

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letterlover In reply to chase123 [2010-06-30 01:33:19 +0000 UTC]

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chase123 In reply to letterlover [2010-06-30 01:40:34 +0000 UTC]

I donated 300 points to your group I would have donated more but i have contests to judge and stuff

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letterlover In reply to chase123 [2010-06-30 01:49:22 +0000 UTC]

O_O!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you sooo much I appreciate your huge support I will be selecting from your gallery the deviantations that Im going to feature, or if you want any in specific you can tell me and I can also do a photo manipulation or an Icon or something like that that I know how to do it so you tell me ^ ^

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chase123 In reply to letterlover [2010-06-30 02:01:11 +0000 UTC]

You can choose what you want to feature and I don't know much about photo manipulation or icons so I hope you dont mind if you could just choose that to im not very picky

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letterlover In reply to chase123 [2010-06-30 02:04:08 +0000 UTC]

ok, maybe a photomanip or icon about Snape?

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chase123 In reply to letterlover [2010-06-30 02:28:22 +0000 UTC]

photomanip with snape in it *bites hands is a snape fan*

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letterlover In reply to chase123 [2010-06-30 02:30:06 +0000 UTC]

perfect!!! ^ ^

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vampiredragongoddess [2008-11-21 21:30:05 +0000 UTC]

really good. dark as hell but great writing.

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chase123 In reply to vampiredragongoddess [2008-11-21 21:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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