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Published: 2015-01-05 21:49:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 3445; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 12
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She's happy, are you?PLEASE CRITIQUE
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Bewwey! C: adorable tummy too, by the way x3
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Ra, Ra, Ra! I need a bra! Just kidding, nice work.
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Question- Β Think you could make her Β bust larger?
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Here's my critique:
You got the emotion across very well! You drew her hair in a way that shows she's in mid-jump. Overall you made your point clear
The linework is a little wobbly in some areas but not too bad. In general, your anatomy is pretty decent, but this pic in particular is pretty wonky in that department. Her face looks a little crooked on her head, and then her head is kinda crooked on her neck. Her entire bust is kinda bulky, and her boobs are uneven and lay oddly. Her fingers are a bit too pointy, making them look like claws, and they also lay pretty unnaturally. The place where her thighs start from under her skirt is a little bit too far out-it gives the illusion that her butt is very elongated. Her knees taper off a bit too closely, making them almost seem like they're connected. I was also gonna say that her right foot seems to be sticking out a little too much but with the way it's bent I guess it makes sense.
Like I said though, you got the idea across well, just keep practicing! You've got the gist of it, especially when comparing this to the rest of your gallery. So no worries, and as always, keep up the good work
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Nice. Though by the lighting, coloring, and shape, I almost mistook it for someone else's style.
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Really? Who? I am interested to know.
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Well, someone named DrawtoonzStudio . Compare this to few of his deviations. You could probably see what I saw in this...
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I don't think my art looks that similar to his.
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Not your WHOLE art. Just this one deviation itself. I can tell differences between your art and his, but this one deviation almost seemed like something he draws.
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But anyway, it looks nice.
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Thank you. I had a lot of fun drawing her.
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Kinda missing the fan art form you, but still good work
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yeah you know the kind of Art I am always doing
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Well, I'm thinking about making some fan art of a few certain characters.
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anyone I would know of?
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like to keep it a secret?Β
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can't wait to see then
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She's very excited about something. 
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