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cheeks-74 — Venom no.13 pg.17
Published: 2004-05-12 05:18:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 4125; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 893
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I had a lot of fun with this page. I had done stuff I never thought I could draw. A script will exapnd one's imagination that's for sure. I did not like the final look for panel 2. In this I wanted him to look frightened while looking over his shoulder, but the end result showed that he looked sleepy. The inker had added eyebrows, and weird lineweights around the eyes of my characters...argggghhh!!! lol Overall Wayne Faucher did a beautiful job.Again, I indicated where the scientist's shadow would be cast in color, but they didn't hook it up. They also didn't pay attention to where the scientists were standing at in the hallway in relation to the door. They made the wall seem solid in the last 2 panels when it was supposed to be the opening area of the door. The mountain tops should have been a key indicator...lol . In Panel 4 I wanted us to feel the sharpness of the chill air, so I wanted to hit the folds of the clothing and his expression to get the feeling across. In panel 5 I overlapped the fingertip to lead to the next panel before I handed the page over.
Hope ya'l digs!
Pencils: Sean "Cheeks" Galloway
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This is one scary thing.. I must say.. the art is great as usual.. the one thing that confuses me is the same thing Daniel said.. panel 5-6.. that extreme fear and then kinda sorta.. back to calm. I'm sure the lettering will fix it up - - and I'm sorry about the inking and coloring mix-ups
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Panel one is fantastic, the character's foot really looks like it has weight...i must agree with you on panel 2 though...there is little fear in his expression...perhaps all that would have been needed was a sweat drop
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enjoying this Sean, but kinda wondering what's happening from panel 5 to 6... from expressing a warning to calmness seems a bit weird
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