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Description medium - general pencil charcoal and charcoal sticks


Art © CheyenneDrake
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Comments: 59

PinkMemory [2012-08-06 18:21:23 +0000 UTC]

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The first word that comes to my mind is "Awesome". e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> The concept is cool and your technique is very good. It has a lot of detail, but nothing stands out too much so it´s easy to notice allmost everything e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> If I had to critisize something, it would be the lower glass. I think that it lacks a bit depth. Also the water looks somehow non-natural. Other than that it´s very well done. I like the way you use shading to bring out the detail. Overall it´s an interesting piece of art with only a few flaws that keep it from reaching perfection e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>

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violinist2424 [2012-08-11 04:15:53 +0000 UTC]

[link] Featured

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CheyenneDrake In reply to violinist2424 [2012-08-11 06:57:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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violinist2424 In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-08-11 14:48:50 +0000 UTC]

np

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irinthony [2012-08-05 17:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is amazing for traditional art! (:

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CheyenneDrake In reply to irinthony [2012-08-05 23:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Riolama [2012-07-31 00:24:29 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Riolama [2012-07-31 21:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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jonesblachowicz [2012-07-24 19:31:42 +0000 UTC]

GREAT concept and composition. The shapes of the glasses could use some work, and the bubbles in the glass could definitely be more spherical. The water doesn't seem to be flowing as natural as it could be---it's not perfect, it splatters, bubbles, churns, etc. The dolphin and top fish are pretty much perfect, the last fish could use a tad more shading and the water in general could use some attention---try to work some studies on water, it's movement, and reflective properties. It'll help. a lot. I've tried drawing glass before and can be super frustrating, but if you master it, it'll be all that more impressive.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to jonesblachowicz [2012-07-24 19:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I appreciate this a lot.

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TarcDnB [2012-07-24 08:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, maybe work on proportions a little, it will be fine

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CheyenneDrake In reply to TarcDnB [2012-07-24 19:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I will

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meregoddess [2012-07-22 23:10:54 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea how you draw such realistic water! It's fabulous! I wish I could do that.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to meregoddess [2012-07-22 23:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I wonder myself if I'll even ever be able to draw water again it was my first time, but thank you :3

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YaensArt [2012-07-21 12:02:52 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty nice, I like the strong contrast. It looks quite realistic, especially on the thumbnail because of which I thought it was a photo.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to YaensArt [2012-07-21 20:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ♥

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YaensArt In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-07-21 20:17:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, of course.

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Vissyscrafts [2012-07-21 11:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Great concept, it looks nice.
I love how you draw water too, it looks pretty realistic ^^

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Vissyscrafts [2012-07-21 11:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, it was hard, haha. :3

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JNIKEL [2012-07-20 05:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Good job on getting your values to pop, using proper contrast is one of the most effective ways to make a piece stand out and grab the viewer's attention, this is the best piece in your gallery.

Keep making stuff like this and work on increasing your detail and compositional skills and you will go far.

I dig it.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to JNIKEL [2012-07-20 18:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Fey-R [2012-07-19 14:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting idea. And nice done, but you still need practice

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Fey-R [2012-07-19 20:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Of course. I'm only just beginning
Thank you.

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Fey-R In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-07-21 19:53:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Trichardsen [2012-07-19 04:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Water is really one of the hardest things to draw properly, water and glass is very hard, water, glass and fish, well you are almost setting yourself up to fail from the start, but I do not think you did.

What you have here is a very stylistic drawing with really creative and original approach, if there was something Id want changed ( this is just my 2 cents ) it´s that the water seems very close to the edge of the mug so it makes the mug appear to have extremely thin glass, almost brittle.
You got a cool drawing here.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Trichardsen [2012-07-19 04:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. Constructive criticism always helps ♥

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Trichardsen In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-07-19 05:13:43 +0000 UTC]

You´re welcome.

It is just my take on this, it is a kick ass drawing.

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Fro7a [2012-07-18 17:47:16 +0000 UTC]



Brilliant concept

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Fro7a [2012-07-18 20:55:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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Fro7a In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-07-19 19:59:17 +0000 UTC]



Anytime

~'

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kittenis21 [2012-07-18 02:24:53 +0000 UTC]

i love the dolphin and how it blends seemlessly into the glasses. very nice composition and very interesting!

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CheyenneDrake In reply to kittenis21 [2012-07-18 02:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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dragonoids [2012-05-19 01:22:37 +0000 UTC]

This looks cool!

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CheyenneDrake In reply to dragonoids [2012-05-19 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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dragonoids In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-05-21 03:17:02 +0000 UTC]

No worries at all!

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bhmor [2012-05-19 01:20:24 +0000 UTC]

cool

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CheyenneDrake In reply to bhmor [2012-05-19 15:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ♥

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boredNovelist [2012-05-19 01:12:05 +0000 UTC]

How neat. I'm fascinated by this concept. Beautifully done.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to boredNovelist [2012-05-19 15:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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boredNovelist In reply to CheyenneDrake [2012-05-19 23:16:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Anj3lla [2012-05-09 06:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Really dig the concept...Great work on details and shading.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Anj3lla [2012-05-13 14:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Ouijaplayer [2012-05-09 06:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! Great concept and great work with the liquid.

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Ouijaplayer [2012-05-13 14:36:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ♥

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Daws3 [2012-05-09 03:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Neat! and well done!

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CheyenneDrake In reply to Daws3 [2012-05-13 14:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much :)

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theywillsuffice [2012-05-09 02:00:50 +0000 UTC]

lovely!

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CheyenneDrake In reply to theywillsuffice [2012-05-13 14:34:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you ♥

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roamingtigress [2012-05-09 01:06:57 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting piece. I like the concept and shading

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CheyenneDrake In reply to roamingtigress [2012-05-09 01:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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