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Published: 2006-05-07 08:38:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 299; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 11
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Description Another song, another phase
Today is gone, not long till tomorrow fades

A month, a year, then ten more pass,
Time is endless, cruel, and fast

Each chapter bares a newer stage
Now dust collecting on every page

I still my pen, and ponder you
and all the ires you put me through

Old pains rend scars anew again
And yet, I inhale and remember then

There are some things age cannot obscure
Through them my memory has endured

And what I would give for one more time
Under those stars with your hand in mine

But those reveries are over,
And now with the passage of years we're older

Tomorrow brings a brighter dawn
But before the stars are gone

Give me a moment with your hand in mine
Under the stars, just one last time.
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Comments: 12

Tamera-Kitty [2007-05-02 01:06:38 +0000 UTC]

It's really touching, and something that feels..... at home the last few days. I really like it.

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Tamera-Kitty [2007-05-02 01:05:36 +0000 UTC]

It's really touching, and something that feels..... at home the last few days. I really like it.

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Chihiro14 In reply to Tamera-Kitty [2007-05-02 01:19:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it. I fail royally at poetry, so that's a nice compliment.

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Tamera-Kitty In reply to Chihiro14 [2007-05-06 03:55:11 +0000 UTC]

I don't think you fail royally, lol, I think you were very good.
I've tried a few times to write poetry, but it's never really turned out right. But yours makes me feel something. Which is definately a good sign. Keep up thet good work.

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coldestofflames [2006-05-13 17:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Just one more time. Something we've all wished for at some point.

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bloodpainteddiary [2006-05-13 01:12:58 +0000 UTC]

very touching. It is very true how we all wish at times to go back to a moment in our past, and you truely captured it.!
and happy Birthday.

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Chihiro14 In reply to bloodpainteddiary [2006-05-13 06:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, ^.^

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bloodpainteddiary In reply to Chihiro14 [2006-05-13 17:05:04 +0000 UTC]

welk

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Sage-of-Winds [2006-05-08 22:39:53 +0000 UTC]

hee ^^
yeah, when we went star gazing, and camping....best times we've had right there

And We'll probably do it again this summer buddy ^^

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xsaltinmywoundx [2006-05-07 22:24:39 +0000 UTC]

That's really touching! (*faves*) It's exactly how I'm feeling right about now...I even wrote a poem on the subject myself.

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Riverwolf [2006-05-07 19:56:07 +0000 UTC]

quik ryhmes are fun ^_^

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Chihiro14 In reply to Riverwolf [2006-05-07 21:16:06 +0000 UTC]

That they are

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