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Published: 2010-01-02 22:38:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 632; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 10
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Description took me about 6 days 9__9

6__6;;

time to draw some BEABATO YEAH

any tips about perspective? :9 and any constructive criticism (mostly on body and perspective :Y) would be nice
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Comments: 28

ls-kuroyami [2010-02-07 11:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Whoa Erika looks EPIC D:! AMAZING WORK REALLY <3! I like it very much the perspective is very good x3 but what do I know xP

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chocojax In reply to ls-kuroyami [2010-02-07 23:28:07 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks! >u>

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ls-kuroyami In reply to chocojax [2010-04-28 04:37:34 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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Selgadis [2010-02-03 03:45:53 +0000 UTC]

I think that if something wrong it must be cloth at her waist(don't know how to call that) that it look like a straight view than this view and it's center is not in the middle of her body.

However Erika in this pic is so cool!I love her expression in this pic ^^

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chocojax In reply to Selgadis [2010-02-03 05:04:50 +0000 UTC]

F, fff, c, could you draw lines in paint or something for me...?
Words... @v@;;
Are you talking about the, uh, corset thing? '3' How it doesn't look like it's in a perspective view? *3*;?

thanks, ;n; /

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Selgadis In reply to chocojax [2010-02-03 12:46:10 +0000 UTC]

sorry I just reply myself... =_="

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chocojax In reply to Selgadis [2010-02-05 01:40:53 +0000 UTC]

lol, it's alright

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Selgadis In reply to chocojax [2010-02-03 05:34:15 +0000 UTC]

ummm.. I also think that it's called corset but I'm not sure

Sorry that I can't do it for you now I'll do it for you when I go back home =_="

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chocojax In reply to Selgadis [2010-02-05 01:40:35 +0000 UTC]

alright, thanks *v*~

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Selgadis In reply to Selgadis [2010-02-03 12:44:32 +0000 UTC]

This is what I see [link]
The position of the center of her corset is a bit wrong compare to her bow.

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melmoon [2010-01-28 23:31:22 +0000 UTC]

dat's freaking scary 8DD

but freaking cool *_*

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chocojax In reply to melmoon [2010-01-30 06:19:22 +0000 UTC]

it's freaking awesome

tytyytyskdl;

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Hana-Cake [2010-01-17 07:41:45 +0000 UTC]

Amazingg! ;u; I can't do perspectivesss agaga D:

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chocojax In reply to Hana-Cake [2010-01-18 18:53:46 +0000 UTC]

thankyouuuu~ >u<
w, whatttt
DON'T WORRY, I'M SURE YOU CANNN


just climb treetops a lot and look down o b

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Hana-Cake In reply to chocojax [2010-01-19 03:49:34 +0000 UTC]

haha that's dangerous ;n;

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Marsharino [2010-01-06 05:35:21 +0000 UTC]

YOU FINALLY FINISHED DIS :U
lol she looks so cool \o/
UH
I'M NOT AN ARTIST SO SHOOO :U'

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chocojax In reply to Marsharino [2010-01-10 18:17:37 +0000 UTC]

yeah man!
TYTYTY~
:U
:U;
YOU LOSER GO AND BE AN ARTIST

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Marsharino In reply to chocojax [2010-01-11 02:21:14 +0000 UTC]

NPNPNPNPNPNP

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chocojax In reply to Marsharino [2010-01-11 03:09:07 +0000 UTC]

o b o b o b o b ob ob bo

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Tajii-chan [2010-01-05 14:20:44 +0000 UTC]

But the perspective is good! D;

Teach me your secret o3o <33

Love it as always ;D

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chocojax In reply to Tajii-chan [2010-01-10 18:17:58 +0000 UTC]

LIES, ALL LIES D;

p... pfft, I have no secret! >u>

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gumokohiiragizawa [2010-01-03 07:31:17 +0000 UTC]

I think... you are asking the wrong person for perspective advice =w=... you have done a far better job than me in terms of perspective...
-Ki

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chocojax In reply to gumokohiiragizawa [2010-01-05 01:40:25 +0000 UTC]

...lol 'v'
*pats* i'm sure you do good too! >u>

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Darkfox-15 [2010-01-03 07:28:40 +0000 UTC]

lol you ask for tips in perspective huh?

you came to the wrong place >:U lol just kidding
uh I can only talk about the torso, it doesn't look how it's supposed to in the perspective you used, but you noticed that already X__X

the head and the arms follow one perspective while the torso and legs follow the other (plz don't kill me if I critique too much X__X)

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chocojax In reply to Darkfox-15 [2010-01-03 17:36:44 +0000 UTC]

pfft, you're the one who came here, so it's not that "i came to the wrong place", now is it? :Y

uh, about the torso, I sort of see what you're talking about, I think?
do you mean I should twist it a bit more? (like, how the ribbon isn't quite matched up to the corset... thing?)
(and how do you know whether or not I noticed it or not? XD)

lol, i don't understand the head+arms =/= torso+legs XD;
S, SHOW ME IN PICTURE FORM PLZ D:

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Darkfox-15 In reply to chocojax [2010-01-04 05:03:40 +0000 UTC]

lol of course of course XD

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m-miron [2010-01-03 03:28:01 +0000 UTC]

stop being so good at this perspective!! D:
Its so hard for me to get right >>
lol sorry but I dont think I have any tips *learning myself XD*

I think it looks fine, I like her expression ^^

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chocojax In reply to m-miron [2010-01-03 03:31:35 +0000 UTC]

D: !!
i'm not good at all, this is the top one pose I can do! :U

>>
<<;

Liesss, you're just holding out on me :9

Hihi, thanks~ ;u;
...really? XD

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