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Published: 2005-01-13 17:44:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 945; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 36
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Description She sits alone on a piano chair
   Staring blankly out the window in front of her
      Fingers positioned over the ancient keys
         But not a single note she plays

She watches passers-by and reaches out a pale, trembling hand
   Longing for just a drop of Love’s nectar to touch her lips
      But no one hears her whispered cries, and no one sees
         The frightened little girl that’s trapped beneath the skin


He sits down to dinner made for three
   He made too much again
      For she’s not coming
         And he doubts she ever will

A child tugs at his pant leg, asking where his mommy is
    And when his father replies with the same answer as countless nights   
     before
      The child merely hangs his head and asks, "Why, daddy?"
         The father shakes his head as he tries to hold back the tears. He
          doesn’t know.


Another Man stands alone on a rugged hill
   And He sees them, feels their pain, reaches to wipe their tears
      His heart longs to do nothing but embrace them
         But the price has to be paid to bridge the gap that they made,  
          tearing themselves away in prideful ignorance.

So He walks up the hill and stretches out His hands
   On planks of wood that were built for ships, for shelves...for anything   
    but this.
      And willingly He lays down His life if only to be close to them...
                
                    If only to be close to you.
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Comments: 30

shadowzerro [2006-07-05 19:22:51 +0000 UTC]

thats a nice poem i like it its inspiering. you probalby do not know me in any way.but i have tried to become part of this club a few weeks ago but i herd nothing from them. so i started my oun christian based club. and i would like you to be a big part of it. how dose leading the WARRIOR POETS group. this is an opertunity of a life time. please reapply. if not we could be freinds and if you want you can join my club to.

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Skivvy [2005-03-14 14:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Heartstrings definately tugged. Tears, definatly jerked.
Take a look at mine if you find the time please.

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dramian [2005-01-16 20:04:20 +0000 UTC]

May I read this to my youth group? I think some of the guys there really qwould apreciate it. just let em know.

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dramian [2005-01-16 20:02:57 +0000 UTC]

I've read many different interpretations of what Christ did here and elsewhere but I've never read one like this. It speaks staight to the heart. Compliments to you and your awsome work. This poem just says it all. This poem is what we Christians are all about.

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Falsifier [2005-01-16 08:59:23 +0000 UTC]

This is a really magical piece.... it is top knotch!! I really really love this piece, its great!!

Jesus is our saviour, and we should be eternally grateful!

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NearlyMonumentalME [2005-01-15 16:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Simply, incredible! I love it! It will be my first poetic Favourite.

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jadisofeternity [2005-01-15 04:11:57 +0000 UTC]

great poem clear images great message.... Good Job!!!

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UrbanLandscape [2005-01-14 08:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Amen, beautiful poetry. You have been given a beautiful gift.

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alex-sukehiro In reply to UrbanLandscape [2005-01-14 19:02:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you again.

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Risen-Art [2005-01-14 03:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Baz is moved...

I once heard a really beautful story about the cross that someone wrote in a fanfic. Believe it or not, it was a Trigun Fanfic called 'Homecoming' on FF.net

It was about a tree that was torn with grief that it had to be used to crucify the Messiah so the Lord had mercy on it and made it a tinier tree, with twisted branches so that it wouldn't be sturdy enough for such a cruel execution. And when the tree blossomed, the blossoms were cross shaped and the edges of the petals had a little dent in them, like from the nails, and a twinge of rusty red, symbolizing the blood.

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alex-sukehiro In reply to Risen-Art [2005-01-14 19:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's pretty kewl for a fanfic. It was in Trigun?? how'd that come about?? Anyhow, thank you for the comment!

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proud2bjunkie [2005-01-14 02:06:26 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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saint-tpai [2005-01-14 00:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Well done! I especially like the last 2 stanzas - you've used the image of the cross in such a powerful way

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alex-sukehiro In reply to saint-tpai [2005-01-14 01:32:07 +0000 UTC]

saankies mucho!

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Dysphor [2005-01-13 22:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Really powerful last stanza, great work!

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alex-sukehiro In reply to Dysphor [2005-01-14 01:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. :3

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alex-sukehiro In reply to Dysphor [2005-01-14 01:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. :3

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SPiDeRNiaLL [2005-01-13 22:38:14 +0000 UTC]

thats really cool, really moving, i like it

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HogoshaTenshi [2005-01-13 20:25:30 +0000 UTC]

this is very touching. i read it ebcause of something tough im having to go through and thought maybe it would be comforting to me...and it is but in a completely different way than i expected. this helps me to put things in perspective....there is no issue so great that i cant give it to God. he died to bring me to him so i could BE with him. thank you for writing this.

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alex-sukehiro In reply to HogoshaTenshi [2005-01-13 22:24:22 +0000 UTC]

If there's anything I can pray for you about, just let me know. I'm glad that God was able to use my writing to help you in that way.
Also, if you want, I am a counselor at and we're doing this deviant-counselor thing where the counselors each connect with a specific deviant and help them out in any way they can. ^^ It would be an honor for me should you ever need it (not saying you do, just an offer. )

Have a God-blessed day.

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HogoshaTenshi In reply to alex-sukehiro [2005-01-13 22:58:50 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much. im going to have to take you up on that lol. there are several things that ive had a hard time dealing with and no one here....i cant tell them about it because of the parties involved i guess. so im headed over there! thank you so much!

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alex-sukehiro In reply to HogoshaTenshi [2005-01-14 01:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes. :3 All you have to do is request me in a note to the site as your counselor and it shall be done (hopefully.... I dunno how quickly those things are processed). If you want, I can just tell them about it and that way they know so you don't hafta go through all of that. ^^
I think I shall go check out your site now.

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HogoshaTenshi In reply to alex-sukehiro [2005-01-17 06:23:54 +0000 UTC]

basically i went and mentioned your name and asked how to go about through it im looking forward to it all.

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alex-sukehiro In reply to HogoshaTenshi [2005-01-17 18:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Yay! :3
Have they responded yet? Cause I haven't gotten a down-wind of it yet.

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HogoshaTenshi In reply to alex-sukehiro [2005-01-18 05:06:59 +0000 UTC]

nope no response yet!

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alex-sukehiro In reply to HogoshaTenshi [2005-01-18 17:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, I just gave them a heads-up, so hopefully they'll get to it soon.
As far as getting a counselor, you may get someone besides me, but I'm submitting my file for them to review anyhow.

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HogoshaTenshi In reply to alex-sukehiro [2005-01-18 17:33:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks im looking forward to it.

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alex-sukehiro In reply to HogoshaTenshi [2005-01-18 17:36:34 +0000 UTC]



actually, I just thought of something. I think that you need to submit a note to them telling them that you wanna be in the program. If you go to you can send it from there. You may wanna title it something like "Accountability program" to catch their attention lol

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Phoenix-Rising [2005-01-13 17:54:02 +0000 UTC]

...that is so powerful. I'm failing for words here it's that good. Poems to do with the cross always touch me and that's no exeption. it's brilliant, and those last two verses...really bring the message home. well captured

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alex-sukehiro In reply to Phoenix-Rising [2005-01-13 22:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. :3 I'm glad you liked it.

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