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ChristinZakh — The Book of Contradictions - Chapter One
Published: 2013-03-01 18:39:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 5330; Favourites: 294; Downloads: 0
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Finally! The first chapter of my comic is done, and I'm inviting you to read it here [link] I'm very exited and looking forward for you comments and feedbacks!A huge thanks to these three
for being an amazing artist, a fabulous writer and a wonderful friend supporting me with my novel and my comic book. There would be no comic without here!
for editing my clumsy English in the comic. It was a very kind move which I deeply appreciate
and for her heroic fight with my stubbornness, which she has won by forcing me to remove "that line".
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i have just read chapter one, and it is amazing! every scene is so beautifully drawn, and the plot is so captivating! I can't wait to read more
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This is beyond amazing I love it. I like the glows of green floating around the hair, it adds something special to it. Fantastic
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YAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry, would have looked sooner but exams and stuff came up. But no fear, I'm-a take a looksy now
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Congratulations! Amazing work! The art is beautiful and realistic, the new character is eerie and so very strange, and the whole set and plot are simply awesome! I can't wait to read more!
(also, have a llama!)
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YES!
Finally! I couldn't wait! (and then I forgot about it and only opened one day later//shotdead.)
It was genuinely amazing, really worth the wait!
The art was wonderful, emotion was so clear every time, and it was simply stunning. I just love her wild, crazy hair which just seems to hate gravity
The story itself was really deep and touching, and also the behavior of those in the orphanage is truly... yeah, very, VERY human-like, and I just LOVE the psychology, the story, EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!
And... wait... Kuroi didn't exist? W-whwhwhwh-whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy *cries* Why would you do this to meeeee//shotdead.
I look forward to next chapter, it's just brilliant so far!
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^______^ You are making me jumping on my chair that much happy am it! And gravity? Pah! Who ever loves this bastard! It makes our life so boring!
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yeah gravity is BO-RING
Well you didn't deserve any less, you gave us a miracle!
And here is a SEVERE case of fridge horror: IF she turns candy into spiders, does it mean that in the world she came from, Spiders are seen as a CANDY!? That really horrified me for a moment there O_o
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Just got through reading chapter 1. It's amazing! Well-worth the wait.
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Hurray! I'm happy you liked it! I'm looking forward for this moment too! Can't wait to show you MORE!
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Amazing work! I love your art style and how well the comic is coming along so far! I just hope you are not stressed over it; it looks like a lot of drawing O_o. I am so excited to see more, you already have me captivated. Have you started on the next chapter yet?
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Loved the first chapter ! Waiting for some more !!
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Very nice work!!! I'll be sure to read your comic as well!
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Omg! I am looking forward for your reaction!
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... OH. MY. HOLY. CRAP ON A CRACKER.
Can I just say how awesome the art is? Loving Lana so far, and when Kuroi popped up I was seriously just like
I spotted a couple small errors in the writing, would you like me to note you them?
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Mew! ^____^ You are making me happy with this comment! I'm jumping on my chair!
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You deserve it, it's wonderful! I'm so looking forward to seeing where the story goes
It's not letting me leave a comment on the site so a note will have to do, sorry! You're English is great considering it's not your first language. English isn't an easy one to learn, half of native English speakers can't even use it right 
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Oh haha, I can't believe I did that 
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xD mistakes happen to the best of us XD
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It always happens at the most ironic of times too
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Тащусь от надписи вообще!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Спасииибо! ^___^ Она мне лично нравится своим волшебным свойством. Добавляешь ее на картинку и картинка становится круче! 
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Так много чего хочется сказать...
Начну с того, что долго наблюдала за самим становлением персонажей,т.е. какими они были, когда ты начинала собирать свою историю по частям, как они менялись, и какими стали в конце, Курой почти не изменился, только небольшие детальки и доработки во внешности, а вот Цекай...на обложке я ее узнала только благодаря медальону. У нее было столько изменений, сначала она была похожа на уличного мальчишку, потом на юную деву эпохи средневековья, потом от части стала леди, и в конце, я думаю, она стала сама собой, ведь нынешний ее бунтующий и свободолюбивый образ кажется идеальным, как и внешняя его реализация, так и внутренняя, ее желания, эмоции и характер.
Меня очень порадовал новый способ изложения истории, книгу я прочла ( по крайней мере первую книгу), и все же комикс как то ближе, ведь не все, что ты хочешь передать можно сказать словами или описать,ведь иногда проще показать. Так же очень понравилось, что стиль комикса все же ближе к манге, чем к европейскому комиксу. Намного ярче и интересней картинка, постановка момента, даже не смотря на то, что она без цвета, ее прорисовка и детализация момента уже говорят о многом, нежели абстрактные пятна фона, как сейчас принято во многих хитах данного жанра.
А еще хочется немного добавить о прорисовке лиц самих персонаже. Получилось очень специфично, даже я бы сказала по-особенному. Не забыта ни какая морщинка, ни небольшая складочка, все так точно и в нужном месте, что создается ощущение, как будто это была фотография, которую после отсняли в черно-белом варианте и перевели на бумагу, но в тоже время, если на любую из ваших картин наложить цвет, то сразу же она обретет новую жизнь, и каждая черточка и линия придется к месту.
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Спасибо большое за комментарий! Перечитывала несколько раз. Честно говоря я сама считаю, что комикс как-то ближе к истории. Изначально Книга Противоречий и была комиксом, потом стала книгой, а вот теперь будет существовать в двух версиях. Что-то комикс не может сказать, а что-то не может передать книга. Так что я очень рада, что занялась и комиксом, так я могу сказать все!
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Такой отзыв всего -лишь потому что, что все, что вы задумали удалось точно так как вы и задумали)
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this is really amazing, i cant wait for more, but why are her eyebrows so big in some of the panels? :I everything else is perfect
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Thank you! ^_^ I'm happy to hear! And what's for the eyebrows... well it's really funny to draw them that bushy and sometimes I can't help it!
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no problem! i assumed it was because she wasn't human, but yeah hahah. I am also wondering if you are ever going to colour the panels? it would be absolutely amazing if they were coloured
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I was confused about a few words and things but It may just be because its going to be revealed in the next chapter. Other than that, It was wonderful!
Looking forward to the next installment! ^^
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Oh thank you so much! And well, yes... there are a lot of mystery here, and you gonna need not just the next chapter, but next chapterS to find out what is what.
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Your very welcome! Thank you for sharing your story!
The parts where I was confused are in page 16 but now I understand. She could hear certain words while walking by. Which become clear to her as she paid attention.
Page 27 too, when the new character introduced talks about the "Jailors" which is what I think will be revealed in the chapters ahead.
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Wow, the artwork of your comic is amazing! 
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^____^ Thank you so much! And I'm looking forward to share more with you!
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oh wow, the comic is so beautiful. I love how all the poses and panels are so dynamic~
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Thank you so much! ^___^
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I love your art style, and the comic is absolutely intriguing. I can't wait to read more and more of it!
I'll be definite to keep reading more :3
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^__^ I'm so happy to read that! Thank you so much!
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You're more than welcome~! :3
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WOW! This is amazing, can't wait for more this is really, really good! I love your facial expressions, they are so animate and real. Lana is such an impressive protagonist.
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I read it and I can't wait until I can read more!!!
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