BrokenChloe [2005-06-25 12:47:26 +0000 UTC]
That was wonderful! Well written and very evocative!! Good work!
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panyd [2005-03-22 08:58:24 +0000 UTC]
Thats possibly the best poem you've ever written marcus. The imagery reminds me of Blood and Gold and also after the line: Tears grace his marbled skin. A statue. Go with it. But yay
Panda04 [2005-03-18 21:38:36 +0000 UTC]
Can't offer up any advanced critique I'm afraid but this is a well-written poem and I like it a lot