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ciinereous — Virtual Reality- Ch 1
Published: 2013-08-28 23:10:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 526; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Shadow, Kira, Celty and the Rebels

"Ow! You stabbed my dick!" Rage shouted.

"Ugh, might wanna wash that sword now." Evanz said.

"Actually, you don't have to." Hollow smiled with mirth. "There's nothing there."

"What are you implying?" Rage countered.

"Nancy girl." Hollow said with a smirk.

"Oh no you didn't... douche."

"Shut up Nancy girl."

"Douche."

"Nancy girl."

"Douche!"

"Nancy girl."

"DOU-"

"Um guys." Interrupted Fluke. This was never here before." They were playing Chivalry and had played this map many times. Fluke was right. The cave that was in front of them now hadn't been there before.

"Should we go check it out?" Rage asked.

"Why not?" Said Evanz. So in the cave they went.

Inside the cave was surprisingly well lit. It didn't look very natural as the center of the cave was perfectly circular, the walls smooth. In the center of the circle was big, red button. Rage, always too curious, immediately went to go press it but Hollow stepped forward to stop him.

"Aw come on man. I wanna see what it does." Rage whined.

"Have you never read books or watched cartoons mate? Nothing good ever happens when you press a big red button."

"Dude, you're overreacting. This is just a game." And with that Rage sidestepped Hollow and strode over to press the button. He pressed it. Nothing happened.

"See?" Rage said smugly. "Nothing is going to-" he broke off abruptly as he felt something sucking at him, pulling him out of his chair. He looked behind him and saw... a swirling mass of nothing. He didn't have time to scream when he was sucked in.

When the wind died down, he was lying face first in soft grass. He rolled over onto his back then sat up and froze. This must be a dream. No matter how much he repeated this to himself, he didn't believe it. This was too real. What he was looking at resembled the Chivalry map he had just been playing. He looked around and saw Fluke, Evanz, and Hollow. Hollow noticed him and strode over, a look of barely concealed anger on his face.

"Nothing's gonna happen?! You fucking TWAT!" Nope, definitely not a dream.

"Well how was I supposed to know that we would be teleported?!" Rage complained and Hollow gave him a look of contempt. By this time, Fluke and Evanz had come over. Fluke looked around in awe.

"I'm not the only one that thinks this looks like Chivalry, right?"

"Nope." The other three agreed in unison. Just as this was said, they heard the clang of swords and "For Agatha!" being shouted in the distance.

"No way." Evanz said. Then all hell broke loose.

Five people in bloodied swords and armor appeared on top of a distant hill. They spotted the group and started towards them. Something about their movements made it clear they weren't coming for a friendly chat.

"They don't look friendly." said Fluke.

"I wonder what gave you gave that idea. Was it the bloody swords?" said Rage, the sarcasm practically dripping off his words. Fluke just glared at him.

"Why do they have armor and we don't?" stated Hollow.

"How would we know, we just got here!" said Rage.

"I didn't ask you, Nancy girl." Rage glared at him and was about to make an angry retort but Evanz interrupted.

"Are you guys gonna stand there arguing all day, or are we gonna do something? They're getting closer." And they were. All of them were male, with big muscles and scarred, unfriendly faces except for one who looked about 15. He looked a lot nicer than the rest. They should have run, but it was too late now. They were surrounded. The biggest one of the group positioned himself in front Rage who tried not to flinch, but the bigger guy saw it. A slow, creepy smile spread across his scarred face.

"Well boys, what have we here." The big dude drawled. He had crooked teeth and his breath stank. It was impossible to tell the colour of his skin or hair as he was very dirty.

"Dude, do you know what a shower is?" Rage said and Hollow shot him a warning look, but the big dude just smiled.

"I think we should kill these Greenies." the big guy said.

"But Duke."said the smaller boy. "If you kill them, the other Hacks will see you as a coward who kills unarmed Greenies. They will think you are not a good fighter." The bigger guy-Duke scratched his chin.

"You have a point Shrimp." Rage should've kept his mouth shut, but you know him. That's near impossible.

"You're letting him tell you what to do?" Hollow facepalmed, Evanz sighed and Fluke said "We're sooo dead." Duke narrowed his eyes at Rage who swallowed nervously.

"I don't tolerate loudmouths like you. No one insults Duke." What kind of doofus talks about himself in third person? Rage thought to himself. Duke's eyes narrowed even further as if reading Rage's mind.

"Kill him, kill him!" Chanted his cohorts. The boy Duke called Shrimp shuffled nervously. That's what it looked like to everyone else but he was in fact, hiding a small device with a button.

"Alright, alright!" Duke said."We kill the loudmouth then take the rest as scavengers." Duke smiled and drew his sword.

"See this loudmouth? This-" he said showing Rage the blade "is your death." Rage shut his eyes as Duke swung the blade in a deadly ark.

This story is also on fanfic.net. The link: Virtual Reality

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Comments: 18

magicmidnight13 [2013-08-29 01:14:21 +0000 UTC]

OMG I WAS FANGIRLING OVER THIS SO HARD (it took me forever to read because of it) yay i will follow you 

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ciinereous In reply to magicmidnight13 [2013-08-29 02:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I got my sister to read it and she was laughing so hard! XD

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magicmidnight13 In reply to ciinereous [2013-08-29 05:52:17 +0000 UTC]

ahahahhahah xD

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ciinereous In reply to magicmidnight13 [2013-08-29 13:10:03 +0000 UTC]

She wants to be in it, but I might mak her reget that decision. She might be a crazy hobo. XD

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magicmidnight13 In reply to ciinereous [2013-08-29 14:49:10 +0000 UTC]

HAHHAAHHAHHAHHAHAHAH at least let her trip a bad guy without knowing it

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ciinereous In reply to magicmidnight13 [2013-08-29 15:17:50 +0000 UTC]

 she'll end up flat on her face too though :/

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magicmidnight13 In reply to ciinereous [2013-08-29 18:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Yes but she did something awesome hahahahahah :3

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ciinereous In reply to magicmidnight13 [2013-08-29 18:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Lo, true

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ManztheFanGirl [2013-08-29 00:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Please continue on DA! I would be able to read it then.. XD

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ciinereous In reply to ManztheFanGirl [2013-08-29 02:01:57 +0000 UTC]

I might do it on both :3

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ManztheFanGirl In reply to ciinereous [2013-08-29 13:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Yay~ Btw.. I think a better title may be "Chiv Just Got Real. Literally." XD jk jk jk

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ciinereous In reply to ManztheFanGirl [2013-08-29 14:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Lol XD

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WhatAFluke [2013-08-29 00:45:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, but do you mean Juke??
Like as in Jukettaja?
If not who is Duke lol sorry I don't know
AWESOME START THO LUV IT

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ciinereous In reply to WhatAFluke [2013-08-29 02:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Nah, Duke is just a random. All will be explained soon when we appear!

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WhatAFluke In reply to ciinereous [2013-08-29 02:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay jur making sure haha

Thanks

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ciinereous In reply to WhatAFluke [2013-08-29 13:06:02 +0000 UTC]

No probs

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Curaxu [2013-08-29 00:22:39 +0000 UTC]

founds it

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ciinereous In reply to Curaxu [2013-08-29 02:04:18 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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