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Published: 2005-07-06 18:49:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1656; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 146
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Description This is the second in a series of "dynamic group pictures" I'm drawing for each of my projects (stories, games, comics, half-baked ideas, etc.). The first of which can be viewed here . It's wallpaper-sized; I'd be honored if you put it on your desktop

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About V.o.t.E.: V.o.t.E. is my beloved sci-fi adventure story that began its life as a parody serial on FictionPress*Net (waaay back when it was "FanFiction*Net) of FinalFantasy and StarWars. After a while, I chucked that idea out the window, but since I liked most of the plot and most of the characters, I kept them and just redid the concept. I would like to do V.o.t.E. as a comic, but I think it's just going to be a written story.

The Run-Down: A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away--I mean in the Aczar V System a few centuries into our future..... Crescent is the leading technological and economic planet, but the spaceports outlying its oasis metropolises are home to the worst scum in the galaxy! Not to mention the elephantine sandworms that prowel the planet's endless wastelands, the flood of illegal immigrants, and that mysterious black pyramid in the middle of the desert with charts and letters and symbols around which the Crescentese based their religon. All of this and more just blows the mind of Aariadur Van Kharlos, a mage from a distant planet traveling with a group of fellow trainees on a pilgrimage to the mage's holy capital, Artisan City, to complete his training. Not only that, but he soon gets kidnapped, exiled from his Order, and forced to join a group of miss-matched mercenaries assigned to... kidnap the new empress of Crescent at her coronation ceremony?! Oh my!

And what's Seirio doing as their slutty tour-guide?

Left to Right: "Mysterious-Turned-Away-Man-Who-Can't-POSSIBLY-Have-Something-To-Do-With-the-Plot-Now-Can-He", Alana Acasia Arejandreia (new empress), Trivall Ornitt-Stauff (mercenary), Aariadur Van Kharlos (aka "Van"), Ohni DaGgar (mercenary).

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CLOSE-UPS OF ALL OF THE [mostly superfluous] DETAILS THAT MAKE ME HAPPY
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Comments: 19

mugen-chan [2007-02-17 10:25:58 +0000 UTC]

*o* realy great!
Great color and perfect comp.><

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Ohma [2005-07-13 06:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Duuude...I really need to pay attention to other people on DA again...

Van and Ohni are pretty Damme 53ku5h11! ....at least...they are to me...

But anyway! Tootally Excellionic shading and detail work there.

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KaeruShisho [2005-07-11 00:24:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Love the color palate and composition. Characters in action, not poses, are exciting and more challenging. Excellent job. --KS

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squidlarkin [2005-07-07 02:02:00 +0000 UTC]

beautiful! the detail is wonderful ^^

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Rushifa [2005-07-07 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Yay, another one! I'm really loving these group pictures you're doing right now, I think it's a great way of getting all your characters out there. Maybe these pictures will help you actually write some of these awsome stories, huh? Anyway, I love love love your cell shading technic, as well as your general compostion (aka where the characters are and what they're doing). This is now my background, replacing your Eruune background.

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cinderscar In reply to Rushifa [2005-07-07 15:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Yay! That makes me happy ^_^ I should be done with the next one on Saturday, but probably on Monday >_<;;

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Rushifa In reply to cinderscar [2005-07-08 05:01:43 +0000 UTC]

yay, at least that means it will be soon ^^

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miaki [2005-07-07 00:04:57 +0000 UTC]

beautiful my friend curse your mouse skills! but i love it anyway ^_____^

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TaintedEdge [2005-07-06 21:46:33 +0000 UTC]

Agggggggg. O_O Well, here we go again! *fave*

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FrogLord [2005-07-06 19:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Excellent job as always, homie.

One of the things that I really enjoy about this piccy is the people's dynamic facial expressions. Like, pretty much all of the people in this (that I can see the face of ) have really cool expressions and poses. Really makes each one stand out. One in particular that I really love is Trivall. Love him.

Another thing that I like about this is the outfits of everyone. They all look really great. Like, I really really like the ruffles in Alana's Yuna Ruffles, and I really like the helmet of Van's. Very awsome.

I look forward to what you'll put up next. ^^ (And btw, this is totally my desktop now. )

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cinderscar In reply to FrogLord [2005-07-06 19:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Thaaanks! I'm glad you like it. I spent too much time on the Yuna-ruffles (love the name XD)... lol. Trivall's sad because he's basically the main character as well as Van, but he got shafted to the back, so he's glad you think he's cool!

Next is Cradle Garth, btw

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arora-vesper [2005-07-06 18:58:00 +0000 UTC]

wow, great work!

love the colours and comp.

the text is a bit too thin maybe? But other than that... wow.

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cinderscar In reply to arora-vesper [2005-07-06 19:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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prettysenshi2k6 [2005-07-06 18:57:09 +0000 UTC]

sorry. i did a full view. i see it better now. the dark-skinned alien elf is FINE. very sexy. and the emperess-looking chick on the left, she's muy bonita as well. And her outfit is great. Now I'm really interested. great detailing overall too.

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prettysenshi2k6 [2005-07-06 18:56:48 +0000 UTC]

sorry. i did a full view. i see it better now. the dark-skinned alien elf is FINE. very sexy. and the emperess-looking chick on the left, she's muy bonita as well. And her outfit is great. Now I'm really interested. great detailing too.

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prettysenshi2k6 [2005-07-06 18:56:27 +0000 UTC]

sorry. i did a full view. i see it better now. the dark-skinned alien elf is FINE. very sexy. and the emperess-looking chick on the left, she's muy bonita as well. And her outfit is great. Now I'm really interested.

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prettysenshi2k6 [2005-07-06 18:53:11 +0000 UTC]

cool. I like the guy that's dark-skinned with the long hair. He looks nice....and the girl looks nice as well. Make it a novel. I don't think you have the time for three webcomics.

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cinderscar In reply to prettysenshi2k6 [2005-07-06 19:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I love those two as well Dark skin + dark hair = looks AWESOME in my mind XD

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prettysenshi2k6 In reply to cinderscar [2005-07-07 02:41:30 +0000 UTC]

wow. you're like the first white boy i know to say that!

I agree. . But jokes aside, really, it's a great picture. One of your best, in my opinion. Keep up the phenomenal work, cindy!

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