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Published: 2008-10-20 16:03:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 4318; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 49
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Description "Law of Talos" concept copyright

Ol' Orphan Prison of Clerk Street idea by

be honest. When you saw the chimney, you knew.
I like to think that with every page I do, I get a little better at this comic making thing. this page is no exception.
Enjoy!

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character copyright Chimbley

character copyright Jumper

page7: [link]
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Comments: 54

little-otaku [2009-12-30 01:56:33 +0000 UTC]

i love the flee part. XD its hilarious! XD

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Neny-Paradise [2008-12-21 22:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Chimbley!!so cute XD

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2008-12-02 23:28:24 +0000 UTC]

LMAO! That last panel... IT MADE ME LAUGH AND SHED TEARS, X'D

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CitrusRain In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2008-12-03 04:43:40 +0000 UTC]

were they tears of joy?

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to CitrusRain [2008-12-03 08:24:29 +0000 UTC]

Yes o3o EPIC!

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CitrusRain In reply to Kaiju-Borru-Zetto [2008-12-03 19:02:19 +0000 UTC]

yes! I was going for that XD!

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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto In reply to CitrusRain [2008-12-03 19:33:55 +0000 UTC]

yay

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MissHatchet [2008-11-13 18:52:20 +0000 UTC]

You've managed to pick the most fangirled characters in LOT for tomics. I don't mind - I love your Chimbley design, and you draw Karl very very well. >3<

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CitrusRain In reply to MissHatchet [2008-11-14 04:21:57 +0000 UTC]

That was no mere random pick :3

I took me a couple tries to make him look the way I wanted. I thought of just making him a chibi face with a four heads tall body but I wanted to stay true to is original design and elongate the face a bit.

Thank you!

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MissHatchet In reply to CitrusRain [2008-11-14 16:02:52 +0000 UTC]

It was a very good choice. He looks like an absoloutely adorable little boy. Seriously, you make me wanna NOM him even more. On another but similair note...

MOAR SPECTATOR ENTRY PLZ? ^ ^

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CitrusRain In reply to MissHatchet [2008-11-14 19:35:19 +0000 UTC]

-pat,pat- in due time.

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MissHatchet In reply to CitrusRain [2008-11-14 19:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Pervert! Don't touch me! I'll scream!

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CitrusRain In reply to MissHatchet [2008-11-14 20:15:57 +0000 UTC]

o.O; It's only good touch! I swear!

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MissHatchet In reply to CitrusRain [2008-11-14 20:33:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm telling my mommy!

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CitrusRain In reply to MissHatchet [2008-11-14 20:38:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh Gah! -flee-

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abaikgirl [2008-11-07 23:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I want mooore! xD

I'm working on my own SE including Karl but not so directly. Chimbley's amazingly cute in this comic and I love your cute little Jumper!

"You don't speak sword?" Ha! I wuved it! More! More! more!

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CitrusRain In reply to abaikgirl [2008-11-08 00:06:06 +0000 UTC]

there is one more. ONE and then you must wait like everyone else.

[link]

i forgot to link this to the last page

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CitrusRain In reply to abaikgirl [2008-11-08 00:04:41 +0000 UTC]

theres one more page after this. I forgot to link this page to it but,yeah, here ya go.

[link]

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Riverfox237 [2008-10-28 17:10:07 +0000 UTC]

XD It's true. I did know as soon as I saw the chimney. And you got his accent great! The whole orphan prison brigade is a great idea, too.
So, I don't know enough about the preceedings to be certain: is Chimbley a contestant, or just a spectator that everyone knows about? I've seen numerous mentions of him concerning the Law of Talos contest.

These are great! I'm really enjoying these spectator comics of yours! ^^ And you are really good at it! The art looks good, and the storyline in fun and engaging. And may I just say, I was very impressed w/ the image in panel 5 of her stretching her back. The pose looks prefect; not always an easy task. Overall, excellent job! I shall continue reading now. ^^

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CitrusRain In reply to Riverfox237 [2008-10-28 23:15:50 +0000 UTC]

dawwwww

yes, chimbly is a contestant. his entry comic was gut bustingly funny I suggest strolling over there and taking a peek.

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Riverfox237 In reply to CitrusRain [2008-10-28 23:20:22 +0000 UTC]


XD I love those icons.

Yeah, I've seen them now (I think I was browsing thorugh your favorites section and spotted 'em). They were pretty funny! XD I love how he only joined out of obligation, although 'twas nice seeing that he had such a caring side to him!

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AriadneArca [2008-10-27 14:34:21 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I love this comic. Excellent work!

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CitrusRain In reply to AriadneArca [2008-10-27 17:54:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^o^ I hope you like the rest of it to. Almost done with page 7

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AriadneArca In reply to CitrusRain [2008-10-27 18:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see it!

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Clockwork-Industries [2008-10-26 16:09:11 +0000 UTC]

The way you draw chimbley makes me want to hug him. But then I would get all dirty...
hmm...a conflict of intrests it seems...give me a minute, I'll figure this out. Someday...

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CitrusRain In reply to Clockwork-Industries [2008-10-26 22:54:51 +0000 UTC]

you could wrap your arms in saran wrap!

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Clockwork-Industries In reply to CitrusRain [2008-10-26 23:34:52 +0000 UTC]

...I so totally could! Thank you!

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Hikarino [2008-10-22 10:00:56 +0000 UTC]

x3 I love the use of perspective in the last frame =3

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CitrusRain In reply to Hikarino [2008-10-23 01:46:22 +0000 UTC]

aww shucks. thank you ^w^

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VikingMera [2008-10-21 16:43:08 +0000 UTC]

ph my goood! Youre so funny! XD I love you! XD genius work.. plain genius..

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CitrusRain In reply to VikingMera [2008-10-22 00:21:55 +0000 UTC]

gawwwww. ^w^

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Scorpin-Girl [2008-10-21 04:12:01 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Love the part when she called him a weasel and flees. Also Chimbley is so cute too.

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CitrusRain In reply to Scorpin-Girl [2008-10-21 14:35:33 +0000 UTC]

yes. Yes he is ^o^

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ushi-cow [2008-10-21 02:09:56 +0000 UTC]

I quite enjoy your version of Chimbley. 8D

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CitrusRain In reply to ushi-cow [2008-10-21 03:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Approval!

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DarkKitsunegirl [2008-10-21 00:44:58 +0000 UTC]

'WALL WEASLE!"
... Ehehheh, never seen that one before. Jeeze, your faces keep getting bnetter and better!

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CitrusRain In reply to DarkKitsunegirl [2008-10-21 03:20:57 +0000 UTC]

I think its because I'm getting used to my tablet. that and I used a smaller brush stroke. ^w^

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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to CitrusRain [2008-10-21 04:12:24 +0000 UTC]

Lucky. Have fun with it! XD

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Katay-chan [2008-10-20 19:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh man! You just killed me with CS entrance right there, so very, very cute and funny!! And I love that wall weasel comment, sounds just like him!

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CitrusRain In reply to Katay-chan [2008-10-20 19:46:19 +0000 UTC]

I knew when I laughed at the idea in my head, I'd be perfect for his entrance. Thank you vary much for your kind words.

and the fave!

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Katay-chan In reply to CitrusRain [2008-10-20 19:53:05 +0000 UTC]

What can I say, it's delightful!

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Kirokokori [2008-10-20 18:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Yay, it's cool seeing this in drawn form. You did a great job with Chimbley~

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CitrusRain In reply to Kirokokori [2008-10-20 19:22:02 +0000 UTC]

thaank yooou! ^o^

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Chartalon [2008-10-20 17:06:31 +0000 UTC]

It can't get any better now.
I'm really beginning to like this story.

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ancient-sun [2008-10-20 16:59:49 +0000 UTC]

-laughs for 2 minutes straight-
Wow!
What a great way to have Chimbley introduced! Looks like those two are in the same boat! And that look on Jumper's face! Bloody brilliant. I wish I could have come up with that.

Oh yeah, its funny how those people have so much information on Jumper and are able to point her out right away when were hunting down Chimbley originally...

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CitrusRain In reply to ancient-sun [2008-10-20 17:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Lol thank you

Yes, yes. And why they have so much information her. Now that's a question.

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HopelssRomanticGhost [2008-10-20 16:28:28 +0000 UTC]

And the adventure continues! XD

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CitrusRain In reply to HopelssRomanticGhost [2008-10-20 17:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Haza!!

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HopelssRomanticGhost In reply to CitrusRain [2008-10-21 02:06:56 +0000 UTC]

*gospel music in background* Hallelujah! XD

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MegamanZDevil [2008-10-20 16:24:31 +0000 UTC]

lol, ahh.. i so expected u to do him next. he looks great in ur style.

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