HauntedBlack [2018-01-27 16:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Cry is constant™
*Inhales improvement, exhales praise.*
Seriously tho, I see the anatomy improvement. Also I really like how the fur is placed and how it curls on both of their cat bodies.
And the insights into their lifes and their personalities are well written because they feel real (like this can actually happen irl) and their personalities aren't too steep and thus, they make characters relatable.
I'm curious about what events led Cyn to become so ill and also curious to see the rest of group's bios and stories and see them all in the situation that author will put them into.
I can say: job well done. ^^
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