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Clock-workable — How Face killed a bird

Published: 2011-08-24 21:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 653; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 5
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Description I wanted to test doing images and scenes in black and white, so yeah this is a test, I'd be really grateful if you let me know how it turned out, or how I could improve on it.
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DeathofInk [2014-10-30 00:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Face should really get his own series, he's such an awesome character!

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Clock-workable In reply to DeathofInk [2014-10-30 18:43:16 +0000 UTC]

I did consider it, but there is a lot of work I'd have to do if I was even going to attempt, so maybe, but not in the near future.

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DeathofInk In reply to Clock-workable [2014-10-30 18:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Sounds 100% reasonable.

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xBlackRelinquishx [2011-08-25 15:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, since I can't make a legitamate critique, due to my membership running out a few eeks ago, I'll just post what I probably would have said here. Wow, a lot of emotion going on in this scene. I also like the usage of dual dimentions (outside and inside the circle) Only thing I can really see slight improvement on would be shading the smoke in the background, that way it stands out. Otherwise, nice touches with the snow and head tilt. *thumbs up*

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TheDemonSurfer [2011-08-25 11:25:20 +0000 UTC]

I think the circle needs to be slightly bigger, showing more of the sky than it is. Right now everything seems a bit... condensed.

Also some shading under Face would be good, to balance out the tree trunk. Or possibly moving Face a bit further away from the tree.

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Clock-workable In reply to TheDemonSurfer [2011-08-25 11:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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jokerful [2011-08-24 22:02:32 +0000 UTC]

It looks really good but may I suggest using some light shades of gray or something like for his head and the smoke in the background. It might make it look more like a finished piece and not a sketch or something... Just a suggestion... >_>;

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Clock-workable In reply to jokerful [2011-08-24 22:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the input.

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jokerful In reply to Clock-workable [2011-08-24 22:07:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. :3

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